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So I've been working on this for only a few hours at a time. But i want to see what I'm missing. (Other then I need to fix the eyes and the one arm). And other then finishing the picture. (And yes I realize she's on a slant. =3=)

Comments and constructive critiques are greatly loved. ^w^
Redlining is also welcomed.

want to see what shes missing
... pants?
well ignoring my prejudice ill try to give honest advice
the viel thing you got needs to go around her hips
i realise u want to expose her navel... even those its a see through veil... you can have the strings in a v-shape
id suggest looking at a reference for how a womans legs look at that angle tho i cant really give a definate statement... being gay i dont pay much mind to women, her upper thighs look liek they facing outwards even tho the rest of the legs are facing inwards... but that could just be me