Tenko72
The updated one looks good, so far, especially the skin. I don't know if you're going to leave it lineless if not, but if you do, then I think there should be more shading, because the hands and feet blend together and I can't see any fingers or toes.
well of course i was going to add her toes in. but atm i'm still thinking on exactly what to do. I would add lines but i would give up about the time i got to the hair so it would look ridiculous. And ive added more so far since the update as well. And she doesnt have hands yet O...o i dont know exactly how to angle them.I think i might do some foreshortening and put them streching out behind her inda like shes about to jump off a cloud. I also have to add her wings in. but thank you. I will add more shading around the toes so you can see those.
and thank you very much. sorry for my lengthy reply and explanation. i remeber when this guild used to be so active youd have a reply in less than a few hours. If people saw your thread. Now it seems everyones gone O.o