So basically, I've been writing fanfiction for years now, and it's my guilty pleasure. Unfortuantely, they sometimes don't turn out as well as I'd intended. I'm trying to work on that, so I can actually writing something half decent now.

Anyway, I'd like some help. I'd ideally like for there to be a lot of internal monologue from L's perspective, but I'm not quite sure how to go about doing that. I'm a little uneasy about the fine line between what I truly believe he thinks, and my own opinions. I really can't stand Light, and I somehow want to get the message across that L never liked or trusted him without overdoing it. I can't just start full on bashing him; it'll ruin the whole thing.

I've already written a slightly out of character moment, and I have an OC, which is sort of pushing it, I think. If anyone could help me out, I'd really appreciate it. I want it to turn out nicely!