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Reply 11. ✿ - - - Poems And Writing
Two Random Poems (Comments appreciated.)

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Iceestar

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 07, 2011 5:25 pm


Paradise~

my dear faithful girl
don't you worry bout the world
i'll still by here
so don't you fret, my dear

my happy little sunshine
don't you worry bout the others
they'll be fine for years to come
so don't waste a tear

my strong, brave friend
don't you worry bout me now
I know everything is gonna be alright
so stop giving into your fear

my girl,
my sun,
my friend,
don't worry bout the future
everything has a meaning
don't fear embracing the light
it doesn't want a fight
you belong up there
so never worry bout leaving us here
the world will turn without you
others will stay on their feet
I'll be just fine where I am

my brave, strong, happy girl
don't fear what's to come
you belong

in Paradise
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Your Hell~

Push me down if you fell that's right
just don't expect me to go without a fight
you people will never be here to see my tears
even if you feed the fire of my fears

you feel the need to hate so much
though there's really no point
you love making this a hateful place

you push me down just to see my frown
maybe one day I'll drown you with this hate
But for now,
let me give you a piece of advice
one day you'll find there's no one left to hate
that no one cares what you think
that everyone's got something better to do
that we've stop bothering with differences
one day you'll be alone
in all your hate

where will you be then?
I know where you'll be
you'll be trapped in a room
a room full of shadows
a room full of pain

the shadows are your hate
the pain is the tears caused by you
the room,
is your heart

this. is. your. Hell
the one you made yourself



So I'm not sure what kind of comments I want. I guess just kind of what you think of the poems. They are made by me. Yes, this is what I do when I'm upset. I write weird poems. Anyway, I really would appreciate some comments.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:25 am


The first one reminds me of motherhood.
Beautiful. (:

x-Shadow Wind

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