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 Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 5:12 am
Hello! I haven't posted in this guild for a while, since I see that it's been kinda quiet. Anyway, this is my most recent drawing: a character of mine called Maria Domini. *sorry, pic is kinda big*
I hope you guys can give me constructive criticism on this. One mistake I have noticed for myself is:
Proportion. Her head appears to be too long and large, and her shoulders too narrow.
I'd appreciate it if anyone can offer me some comments! Thanks!
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Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2012 11:50 pm
Not bad. Her hair seems a little on the flat side, and one side of her face seems a bit broader than the other side. Her outfit looks interesting and I like that you included the curtained backdrop.
Maybe consider making the hair (and bangs) a little more fuller looking. Check for symmetry in the face as her jaw looks broader on the left.
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Profitable Conversationalist
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Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 12:30 am
Thaliat Everwood Not bad. Her hair seems a little on the flat side, and one side of her face seems a bit broader than the other side. Her outfit looks interesting and I like that you included the curtained backdrop. Maybe consider making the hair (and bangs) a little more fuller looking. Check for symmetry in the face as her jaw looks broader on the left. Thanks a lot for pointing those out! heart
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 12:59 pm
I was going to say her neck's too long, but if you fixed her head, then the neck would work fine.
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