Maria Domini: C&C?

[Blade of the Contessa]

Hello! I haven't posted in this guild for a while, since I see that it's been kinda quiet. Anyway, this is my most recent drawing: a character of mine called Maria Domini. *sorry, pic is kinda big*

I hope you guys can give me constructive criticism on this. One mistake I have noticed for myself is:

Proportion. Her head appears to be too long and large, and her shoulders too narrow.

I'd appreciate it if anyone can offer me some comments! Thanks!  

[Thaliat Everwood]

Not bad. Her hair seems a little on the flat side, and one side of her face seems a bit broader than the other side. Her outfit looks interesting and I like that you included the curtained backdrop.

Maybe consider making the hair (and bangs) a little more fuller looking. Check for symmetry in the face as her jaw looks broader on the left.  

[Blade of the Contessa]

Thaliat Everwood

Not bad. Her hair seems a little on the flat side, and one side of her face seems a bit broader than the other side. Her outfit looks interesting and I like that you included the curtained backdrop.

Maybe consider making the hair (and bangs) a little more fuller looking. Check for symmetry in the face as her jaw looks broader on the left.

Thanks a lot for pointing those out! heart  

[Tenko72]

I was going to say her neck's too long, but if you fixed her head, then the neck would work fine.