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WritingWithLove Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 1:41 pm
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WritingWithLove Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 2:45 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 3:40 pm
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The Jolly Victini Vice Captain
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WritingWithLove Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 3:53 pm
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Thank you for raising your hand, young man! *puts on reading glasses* Well, let's get started! What I do to avoid one-liners is to find something- anything- in the previous post that I can build upon. If there's a question that needs to be addressed, I give a little background about it from the person's P.O.V. Example: "Want to go get some pizza?" asked Louis. Can be changed to: "Want to go get some pizza?" asked Louis. He hadn't eaten since this morning, and he was starving. Waffles were great, but after a while, he wanted something fresh.
Responses are generally easy. Just do the same thing. Example: "Sure!" replied Sarah. Can be changed to: "Sure!" replied Sarah. She had wanted Louis to ask her out for a while now, and she wondered whether or not this was his attempt at a romantic date. She had imagined a candle-lit dinner, but pizza would do.
If you're really stumped, take a break for a while and come back to it. Some thing will pop-up eventually! So, in summation, add emotions and memories that come along with what's being said, add details to details, and take a break! I hope that wasn't too confusing. sweatdrop Any questions?
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2012 11:28 am
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The Jolly Victini Vice Captain
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WritingWithLove Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2012 11:38 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2012 1:16 pm
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The Jolly Victini Vice Captain
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WritingWithLove Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 1:26 pm
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2012 12:02 pm
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2012 3:29 pm
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Posted: Wed May 23, 2012 12:49 pm
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Posted: Wed May 23, 2012 1:11 pm
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Posted: Wed May 23, 2012 1:32 pm
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