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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2014 4:45 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2014 9:47 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2014 10:32 pm
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Aazhie I think if the flame lanterns are always with her, you should include them in the description! XD I am curious about them... Can they burn things all the time or are they more an illusory thing until battle? (Imagining some RP situations where she has to learn to be careful around those who aren't fireproof, etc...) I am assuming they are part of her body, yes? Can she absorb them if she needs to be discrete? If they are 'killed' does it cause her any damage aside from making her sad, or do they just fizzle out? Is the lantern she carries just symbolic, or would the little flames live in it? Because she is flame based, is she leery of snow or water based entities? Or is she the sort who would be curious about them as they are very different from her? I like her backstory! I am a tiny bit unclear on why she is a disappointment- were they hoping for a boy? It sounds like she ought to have been the favorite, but I don't know know why they suddenly were upset with her. I may be missing something ^^ This is all the stuff I could think of! I'll post if anything else occurs to me...
Awesome! I'll fix this up tomorrow when I wake then throw it back at you? Is that okay? Thank you so so much.
Also, her family wanted a women who would be graceful and elegant and desirable for a worthy and wealthy man to marry. She, instead, was a prankster who disgraced her family.
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2014 12:28 am
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2014 10:50 am
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2014 10:51 am
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2014 10:56 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2014 4:21 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2014 4:43 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2014 4:52 pm
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Blade Kuroda Yushika Blade Kuroda Yep! That's better now, I think. Wonderful! Anything else I should tidy up, or is she good? O u O Hmm I'm not spotting anything that sticks out to me that needs tweaking! Thank you dear!
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Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2014 1:29 pm
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