You have 8 cust slots at start. so technically you have 13, less you jus wanted to privatize the five your getting from keystone anyway aside that Gucci Gang
Posted: Mon Apr 01, 2019 2:44 pm
NecroPlant
GalagaHero
Gucci gang
Odoeb
You have 8 cust slots at start. so technically you have 13, less you jus wanted to privatize the five your getting from keystone anyway aside that Gucci Gang
Alright. Though i do want to ask, if keystones are supposed to be around the strength of Kamui would just having it have no extra cost or just +5 extra cost be too strong? Tried to have it at a decent strength without being to OP or underwhelming.
Nindo: "Don’t kill if you can wound, don’t wound if you can subdue, don’t subdue if you can pacify, and don’t raise your hand at all until you’ve first extended it." Personality: Kameyo is a pretty lazy person, but in order to be genuinely lazy, she's learned to be impressively efficient at the things she has to do in order to get as much time as possible for herself. She naps frequently and likes to do low-pressure, low-energy things. She's hard to get motivated but once she gets going, she does the task as well as possible, as quickly as possible, so she can get back to resting. She values her friends deeply and is much more a lover than a fighter, which is why she pursues medicine. She's fairly perceptive but often opts to ignore it in favor of chilling.
She's idealistic and, unfortunately, optimistic. She believes in the best in people and finds herself disappointed frequently because she expects too much of others. This breaks her heart and, when surrounded by tragedy, she appears to wear her heart on her sleeve because of her deep sense of empathy for others and willingness to cry.
She loves philosophy and loves being promised that the world will be better, but she'll eventually need to wake up. Definitely a dreamer, Kameyo is out to experience that the world is a painful place, but if she doesn't lose her faith in humanity, then she'll be invested in making it a better place.
Village: N/A Title: N/A
Background: Kameyo was raised by her mother until she was about five years old, when her father left all of a sudden and her mother was swallowed by her grief. Kameyo was adopted by her grandmother and never saw her mother again; later on, she was told her mother died of a broken heart. Kameyo was very angry at her father as a child and acted out frequently, but through her grandmother's love, patience, and faith, Kameyo was tamed early on and grew to be a fairly respectable young lady. Her grandmother had owned a clinic and Kameyo was fully invested in helping every day to make the community healthier.
One night, the clinic was set on fire in an attempt to scare the community into paying for protection to a local gang. Kameyo pushed her grandmother out of the way when the ceiling collapsed, finding herself pierced by a wooden support beam. She passed out, presumably dead, but woke up a few hours later to see her grandmother by her side, dead from smoke inhalation, and herself alive but without a beating heart. Utilizing the tendrils that have lived inside of her body since birth, she extracted her grandmother's heart and inserted it into herself, living again. She vowed to live her (and her grandmother's) life to the fullest.
The dated nature of her grandmother's heart has given Kameyo a near-constant sense of tiredness that aches in her bones, leaving her to sleep most of the day when given the opportunity, but it has also granted her a deep capacity to love and make close friends. Finding Tokiyama and crew has helped her move out of her shell and quit guarding herself so sternly. Only time will tell if she learns to love openly.
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Medical ▱▰▱ Support Specialist: → The user is capable of conferring a moderate stat boost to any ally that they desire. This stat boost can be what ever the medic wishes, however it can only go on one ally for as long as the medic wishes. Additionally to this, the medic is able to use healing eseijutsu on an ally from a distance as opposed to having to touch them. The range for this is fifty [50] feet. Second Class: Sensor ▱▰▱ Resolution: → You are more determined to get fine details from your sensory techniques, but in order to get this type of clarity the range of your techniques is reduced by half. You are able to discover things such as demon chakra, or the type of technique that is about to be active (Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, etc.), even specifics such as Bloodline type and rank. At body ranks D and C users of this discipline able to sense their enemy’s ninjutsu attacks and their composition, which grants a -1 rank deduction to dodging with the dodge mechanic X-ranked skill if you know the technique that was used. This only works for techniques which originate within the sensory area of the user.
Chakra Pool: 415 (classes) + 400 (tiered) = 815 Stamina Pool: 260 (classes) + 400 (tiered) = 660 Chakra Element: Doton [Second Heart: Suiton] Chakra Color: White Chakra Materialization: Appears like tendrils
Strengths: • Encouraging people to be lazy • Shaming people Weaknesses: • Extremely empathetic, hates close combat/seeing others in pain • Judgemental Fears: • Romance - Kameyo was told her mother died of a broken heart after her father left her; Kameyo is a closet romantic but is deathly afraid of falling in love because she doesn't handle disappointment well. • Claustrophobia - Kameyo is specifically scared of being stuck in a small building she cannot escape, as it ties to her memory of the clinic being burned down. • Suffocation - Kameyo doesn't fear fire, though she is rightly apprehensive, but she does fear smoke and suffocating from it. She believes this stems from her grandmother's heart but hasn't been able to prove her theory of a new heart carrying old scars yet.
Modifiers: • Jiongu users learn 1 extra Ninjutsu per post. • Jiongu threads are roughly the width of an index finger. • Jiongu threads are roughly three times as long as their owner's height. • Jiongu users have two special attributes, listed below. xxxxxxxx• Fooling Death: If a killing blow is struck, a spare heart is expanded and used as a replacement. xxxxxxxx• Organic Alteration: Able to rearrange internal organs on a whim, though this takes a small amount of time. • Learn 3 extra Medical techniques per post. • Learn 3 extra Ninjutsu techniques per post. [+4] • Learn 3 extra Genjutsu techniques per post. • Resolution 2: Members of the Resolution discipline can gain similar information about any chakra source in your sensory technique's range, including what bloodline the person possesses and approximately how large the chakra source is. At body ranks B and A you’re able to sense the chakra pool of the opponent and what classes they belong to, which gives you a -1 to dodging their attacks with the X-ranked dodge skill if you dodge with a type of skill they have access to. Personal Attributes: • +10 Eiseijutsu Slots • Heartless: The Jiongu user can exist without a heart for one day. They will also retain the hearts element until the end of combat. Still, this does not mean they cannot be rendered unconscious. • Stitched Together: When having two elemental hearts the Jiongu may combine them to be treated as [1] heart for the purpose of slots. The slots are then halved granting up [4] techniques of a corresponding bloodline combination. I.e having a Wind and a Fire heart will grant access to Shakuton. Once the [4] techniques are chosen they cannot be changed. If Still Beating is Taken the number of techniques increases to [6]
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 {starts at 0} AC: 0 {starts at 0}
Missions Complete: {all start at 0} D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Mission, Training, and Job Claims
Missions Claim: [ x ] Training Claim: [ x ] Jobs Claim: [ x ]
▰▰▰ INVENTORY • A bag of butterscotch candies • • • • •
Maruton: • Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default
Doton •
Suiton (Heart 2) •
Bloodline - Jiongu •
Genjutsu •
Taijutsu Tame Za Kyokudo - Ultimate Kickboxing • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Not entirely certain what you mean by 'cost' also not sure if Eva told you I figured you may have thought to apply it later but at 25k ac you fulfill the chakra stamina milestones so the actual totals you have I believe are 750 chakra 650 stamina. How we generally approach Keystones is while the normal custom does maybe 1 or 2 things a keystone can do upwards of about 3 to 4. The higher amounts mediated by two decent effects as oppose to one super good one.
Posted: Mon Apr 01, 2019 4:12 pm
NecroPlant
Odoeb
Not entirely certain what you mean by 'cost' also not sure if Eva told you I figured you may have thought to apply it later but at 25k ac you fulfill the chakra stamina milestones so the actual totals you have I believe are 750 chakra 650 stamina. How we generally approach Keystones is while the normal custom does maybe 1 or 2 things a keystone can do upwards of about 3 to 4. The higher amounts mediated by two decent effects as oppose to one super good one.
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The wood can be set ablaze in conjunction with the technique used for an additional +10 chakra cost
Is what I mean. Changing the +10 there. After I get an answer ill do the edits as necessary, ty for the fast approval
Combat Outfit: Makara normally doesn't wear clothing, though she has no real exterior organic parts that can be seen.
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY
Nindo: "..." Personality: Makara is a very unusual individual. She's silent and tends to be far more physical when relating to her experiences and moods. While innately curious towards the world, she has a very open mind and tends to explore and investigate each and every little thing. The girl has a very primal mindset and tends to react poorly to being touched or handled without permission or prior agreement.
Village: Wanderer Title: N/A
Background: A lone axolotl would wade in waters of Iron Country, untouched by the forces of the shinobi world. Free to live its life in content isolation had it not been for its captor's intervention. In its new prison, the creature would be subjected to such horrible experiments. Her body would turn a pale, sickly color, slowly gaining less than ideal features. The short and bestial body would soon become human sized, and soon a full woman. A great carnivorous hunger would take a hold of the axolotl. Her meals of smaller aquatic beings wouldn't do it for her anymore. The prey would grow in size and each time, she would eat a little more. Her body changed, grew better. She gained abilities that people could only dream of. The ability to control her blood, soon the ones of her enemies shortly after. It was a glorious evolution. Thin red streaks of blood would be able to be seen darting across her body before vanishing in the pale skin. Eventually she was able to take down larger prey. Pretty soon, her captor. Out of all of the bodies, his tasted the sweetest. After freeing herself from her bounds, the creature would venture out into the world. She skulked around before coming across a house. It was only the touch of the resident within that would cause the creature to hesitate her consumption. With the joys of headpats and affection, the monstrosity would be given a name, Makara. Life with Kameyo would be quiet, her days spent exploring around or digging in the yard for any kind of water.
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Bloodline ▱▰▱ Dual Ancestry → Dual Ancestry allows you to have full access to two bloodlines upon creation including all techniques, abilities, and personal attributes associated with them. Your primary bloodline's roster is where your name appears. For biographical purposes, your secondary bloodline may be genetic or implanted at your discretion. The Rinnegan may not be chosen as a secondary bloodline. Combo Element Kekkei Genkai and Jiongu users do not have access to Dual Ancestry nor can they be chosen as a secondary bloodline. Dual Ancestry users do not have access to the implant system including the Genetic Palette personal attribute. Second Class: Bloodline ▱▰▱ Blood Knight → Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses. You can cast bloodline techniques through one-handed seals.
Chakra Pool: 300 {Base} + 100 {Power of Blood} + 250 {Bonus} + 75 {Crew} + 50 {Event} = 775 Stamina Pool: 290 {Base} + 250 {Bonus} + 75 {Crew} + 50 {Event} = 665 Chakra Element: Suiton, Fuuton Chakra Color: Dark Red Chakra Materialization: Thick, Whirling Aura
Strengths: • Tracking Prey • Durable Fighter Weaknesses: • Feral; Prone to Going Berserk • No Way of Verbal Communication Fears: • Freezing to Death • Losing All of Her Blood
Modifiers: • {Bloodline Specialist} Bloodline techniques cast by this specialization are cheaper in cost as determined by the users body rank. At body rank D and C costs are reduced by five[5]. At body rank B and A, costs are reduced by ten[10]. Finally at body rank S and S+ costs are reduced by fifteen[15] These reductions DO NOT stack and override their previous totals. (D+C -5, B+A -10, S beyond -15). Gain an Additional 5 Custom slots dedicated to your bloodline. • {Bloodline} Learn 4 extra Bloodline techniques per post. • {Saiketsu} Learn 1 extra Suiton [ Water ] ninjutsu per post. • {Kemono Shinzō} Learn Taijutsu at a rate of +1 per post. • {Kemono Shinzō} Access to animal taijutsu • {Kemono Shinzō} May speak with their own species in its native tongue • {Kemono Shinzō} Treated as a body rank higher when forming pacts • {Kemono Shinzō} May revert to their original form at any time for no chakra cost. This form is roughly the size of the original species which can maximally only be the size of an average human. I.e dog Kemono Shinzō can turn into a dog and back into its anthro state. This functions essentially as a henge. • {Saiketsu} Regenerates blood very quickly. This can be used to offset bleeding, but does not regenerate enough to offset arterial wounds. Personal Attributes: • Stalwart Skin l {Reptillian, Bear} Gain +1 Taijutsu Slot, Learn Taijutsu +1 Faster, and gain a [Slightly] increased fortitude every two body ranks. Your scales or hide are harder to penetrate than your other brethren. When using [Jujin-Kaiki {Man Beast Regression} your physically defensive techniques are treated as Overwhelming] • Blood Moon Magic l Use of blood as a component can be quite costly no matter who or what you are, but the Saiketsu learned that their own Chakra need not be the only fuel for their jutsu. Especially when it is so abundant. Blood Moon Magic allows a Saiketsu user to use the opponent's blood rather than just their own to fuel techniques the Saiketsu user uses so long as it's no longer in contact with the opponent's body and has been around for one post. Taking this Pa will grant a pair of fangs hearkening to the day of the blood moon and while not necessary will come with possible vampiric tendencies. Grants access to Kenketsu, and Chi - Saikuru. • Power of Blood l Saiketsu users can perform Suiton [ Water ] and Saiketsu jutsu without the need for handsigns. Instead these are replaced with either verbal commands or somatic gestures. Furthermore users start with an additional 100 chakra.
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 AC: 14,600
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Maruton: • Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default
Hair Color: Blue with red streaks Eye Color: Yellow and sharklike Height: 4'3" Weight: Secret
Bloodline: Hoshgaki Clan First Bloodline,Yōton Lava Release Second Bloodline
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY
Personality: Breezy has a bad personality in general. She is naturally resistant to authority and hates any attempts to control her. She makes friends rather easily but loses them quite quickly too. She isn't very good at planning and tends to make spur of the moment bad decisions. She isn't exactly quick to anger or irritable just impetuous.
Breezy isn't quiet exactly as she's loud and constantly making a noise but isn't very talkative. She prefers to stare awkwardly at people which is often unsettling as she looks like a shark.
Village: N/A Title: N/A
Background:
Breezy had the misfortune to be born out of wedlock. Worse still she was born to a lady of high noble standing and the moment she popped out everybody knew something was wrong. Two Yoton users should not be having a baby that blue and frankly "sharky".
From that moment on she was ostracized by her mother and her half siblings. Always treated the worst of her family. Her misfortune was to be the product of one brief night of passion.
Breezy eventually grew fed up with her treatment. By the age of 11 she made herself scarce and left the village in search of her father. She'd heard whisperings of him. A handsome and powerful pirate who took what he wanted. So for a number of years she sought out his vessel.
When, eventually, she found him she was not unimpressed but also not too impressed. He was an ordinary man of no particular importance. She demanded to join the crew and her father seeing her as a potential asset to his crew took her own.
For the next few years along with the other pirates she pillaged and took what she wanted getting to know her father and coming to understand him a little better. He'd not even known he had a daughter and was rather embarrassed by the whole affair.
Breezy was a good pirate in the sense that she was objectively quite good at piracy. Her strange abilities made her good at the job however she'd burnt as many allied boat as friendly ones and after getting her very drunk one night her crew left her at shore.
Understandably she was annoyed but decided not to pursue them further. She had been feeling like there was something missing. It was a happy time for her but it had not filled her heart with any joy.
At 21 with 8 years of piracy under her belt Breezy has returned to the world of Ninja to find her purpose.
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Bloodline ▱▰▱ Dual Ancestry → allows you to have full access to two bloodlines upon creation including all techniques, abilities, and personal attributes associated with them. Your primary bloodline's roster is where your name appears. For biographical purposes, your secondary bloodline may be genetic or implanted at your discretion. The Rinnegan may not be chosen as a secondary bloodline. Combo Element Kekkei Genkai and Jiongu users do not have access to Dual Ancestry nor can they be chosen as a secondary bloodline. Dual Ancestry users do not have access to the implant system including the Genetic Palette personal attribute.
Second Class: Bloodline ▱▰▱ Keystone → You receive an additional 5 custom technique slots to be used only on bloodline and bloodline-related techniques. Additionally, you may create a "keystone" technique; this technique is essentially a Bloodline ninja's signature move, with power and versatility similar to a technique such as Kamui. This technique must be submitted as a custom jutsu and approved. It also does not take a custom jutsu slot. In addition, you are able to use your third activation for any Bloodline Jutsu, whether it is offensive or defensive, once every two turns. This discipline may not be taken in conjunction with another Keystone Discipline.
Keystone: Ascendant Sage Mode: Scion of the First Sea All members of the Hoshigaki Clan have the potential to access Sage Mode however genetic mutations and the changes to Breezy's form have allowed her to access a stronger version of Sage Mode. She is however unable to use the basic Sage Mode but can use its techniques.
Ascendant Sage Mode as mentioned previously is a stronger form of Sage Mode. Like the Hoshgaki Clan sage mode the user is able to move freely while using it but unlike with that transformation Sage Mode is able to last much longer lasting for as long as the user can stay on the ground. Unlike other Sage Mode transformations which take natural chakra from the air Ascendant Sage Mode draws nature chakra from the planet itself in the form of geothermal currents. Heat from the planet it drawn directly to the user and then turned into chakra. However notably this is also a weakness. The transformation ends the moment the user loses the planet's heat meaning it is weak against aerial combatants though it is not completely without its means of combating them and has a number of techniques to create land on which to walk.
Upon losing Sage Mode 50% of the user's current Chakra and Stamina total is taken so the transformation incurs significant risk as leaving the ground will trigger the end of Sage Mode.
The transformation makes Breezy's hair a glowing orange that flows like molten rock and changes her eyes from the usual Hoshigaki Clan's into a deep emerald green version of those eyes. Her usual blue skin also takes on the same orange glowing tone.
Ascendant Sage Mode grants the following enhancements Generates 50 Nature Chakra each post provided one foot is in contact with the ground. Water Techniques become Yoton Release Techniques. All water is replaced with lava (or magma if she's fighting underground). While active Sage Mode provides a supreme bonus to Fortitude and Reflex. Yoton Techniques overwhelm techniques of the same rank While this transformation is active and another is within 50ft they gain one rank of Dehydration for each full post they remain within that range. The effect doubles for each 25ft closer they move. All bodily fluids are replaced with molten magma until the end of the transformation and the body is modified to withstand this while the transformation is active. This renders Breezy resistant to Fire and Water techniques as Fire techniques are simply not hot enough and Water largely turns to steam before it can make contact.
As a Keystone the transformation also gives access to its own special techniques some of which are available only in the transformed state and some which are merely enhanced by it.
Chakra Pool: 440 Stamina Pool: 390
Event Bonuses April Fools +50 Stamina
Chakra Element: Fire, Earth, Water Chakra Color: Bright Orange Chakra Materialization: Like a rush of white hot air it heats the surroundings
Strengths: • A capable seamstress • Can do a handstand Weaknesses: • She can't touch her toes with her legs straight • She dislikes small dogs Fears: • Abandonment • Loss of Freedom
Modifiers: • Learn 2 extra Bloodline techniques per post. • Techniques that form a fling sharks made of water do not require slots to learn. • Learn water techniques and bukijutsu at a rate of +1 per post. • Hoshigaki are capable of harnessing natural energy while moving so long as the are in water, and have their own sage mode as well. This sage mode cannot be maintained for long while on dry land, but because they can continuously refresh their own natural energy while in water they are capable of using it for much longer than normal. Requires A rank to access. It only requires 5 posts of deep meditation on their connection to the sea itself for them to access it. This sage mode follows its own rules, and gives the listed Senjutsu techniques as well. Incompatible with another sage mode simultaneously. • Immune to heat and lava stemming from one's own techniques. • Bloodline cast by this specialization are cheaper in cost as determined by the users body rank. At body rank D and C costs are reduced by five[5]. At body rank B and A, costs are reduced by ten[10]. Finally at body rank S and S+ costs are reduced by fifteen[15] These reductions DO NOT stack and override their previous totals. (D+C -5, B+A -10, S beyond -15).
Personal Attributes:
• Fire Release • Herald of the First Sea: Breezy can convert any water jutsu or bloodline technique into a Lava Release Jutsu whether or not she used it. She has to pay an additional cost to do so of 10 chakra. She can do this to allied and her own water element jutsu and bloodline techniques. This can change non-offensive abilities into offensive ones on a case by case basis. • Newton!? Because of it's nature as a Non-newtonian solid, Lava techniques are all capable of being switched between lava, rubber and wet cement. This PA also gives the user access to 100 additional chakra. • Somatic Bloodline: Breezy can perform her bloodline techniques with somatic motions rather than having to use handsigns
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: {all start at 0} D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: {all start at 0, remove this} D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Missions Complete: {all start at 0} D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Mission, Training, and Job Claims
{This spoiler is where you'll link to your character's relevant claim posts for missions, training, and jobs.} Missions Claim: [ x ] Training Claim: [ x ] Jobs Claim: [ x ]
▰▰▰ INVENTORY • • • • • •
Weapon Specs
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Maruton: • Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default
Water •
Fire •
Earth •
Yōton •
The Hoshigaki Clan
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
▰▰▰ FORMLESS STYLES → 00 / 00 {REMOVE. Current formless slots.} {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Formless Styles • {Formless style name}
Formless Techniques • {Formless technique name}
▰▰▰ ACADEMY STUDENT Learned E Rank Formless • {Formless type learning}
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Edits made again. I think that's correct for D-Rank. I basically just subtracted 350 from both my Chakra and Stamina Scores.
Posted: Tue Apr 02, 2019 5:10 pm
▰▰▰ PERSONAL DATA
Full Name: Chadmium Hammerslammer Nickname: --- Age: 38 Birthdate: Jan. 1 Gender: Male
▰▰▰ PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS
Body Rank: B-rank
Hair Color: Bald Eye Color: Brown Height: 6'0" Weight: 100 kilos
Bloodline: N/A Courage: +2 PA, ten jutsus
▰▰▰ SOCIAL AND PERSONALITY Personality: Chadmium Hammerslammer is a prideful and somewhat avaricious man who holds himself to high standards. While one may call him principled, his principles are of his own logic and making. Sometimes this puts him at odds with the principles of others. One could almost call him an anarcho-capitalist except it wasn't always the case. He is pragmatic and logical in his usual approach but may experience bouts of dwarven madness when he so desires to create something. Chadmium Hammerslammer is an intellectually driven man as well, constantly seeking new knowledge and expertise.
Village: N/A Title: N/A Background: Chadmium Hammerslammer was an orphan adopted and renamed by the relatively obscure but locally renowned Hammerslammer blacksmith clan. The clan was generally commissioned by local peasants, merchants, and warlords alike to slam hammers down onto things. For the most part these things were bits of steel or metal but sometimes these things were bits of people's fingers or heads. As an adopted child, Chadmium rigorously learned the craft of hammer slamming alongside his siblings. Of course, when he became old enough to set a path for himself, he found little place for him in the workshop run by the Hammerslammers. He'd either hold an eternally subservient role as an apprentice or be cast out. Not being of Hammerslammer blood was reason enough for the clan elders to rule out a position as a branch family.
So instead, Chadmium Hammerslammer departed, or perhaps more accurately escaped, his clan. It was the middle of the day and instead of haggling for charcoal to fuel the furnaces he simply started found a trading caravan leaving the town and departed with it. He traveled until the name of Hammerslammer first meant nothing and then was ridiculed before he was content to settle down. Though he had left the clan assuming there was a possibility he'd be hunted for his knowledge of some clan secrets, he had a pride in holding the last name of Hammerslammer, of the kind parents and siblings who had taken him in as family. Chadmium threw himself at any work available, even certain illegal ones, to create a name for himself. Even without the blessings of the elders, he hopes to establish a more "tolerant", as tolerant as a pseudo-mafia can be, Hammerslammer branch and for that he's made himself useful to a Rogue group, the Shishin.
▰▰▰ CLASSES AND STATS
First Class: Worker ▱▰▱ Legendary Worker → The user is able to create one additional legendary weapon for one rpc. In addition, the user can also create one additional weapon for their village or their rogue group that the character is a member of. Second Class: Worker ▱▰▱ Lifetime Disciple → This discipline allows the user to half the mission requirement in order to reach the next rank of the crafting tree. This makes it easier for the user to craft further in the branches. Specialization: Worker – Worker: If this class is taken as the first and second class, you can choose two of the disciplines. Reduces the cost of all worker based missions by two. Increase the number of [Special] items craftable to 4 specifically for the Worker-Worker.
Chakra Pool: 720 Stamina Pool: 800 Event Bonus:
April Fools Event: +50 Stamina
Chakra Element: Suiton, Doton, Katon (PA) Chakra Color: Clear and Colorless Chakra Materialization: A shimmering, heat-wave like aura.
Strengths: • Chadmium Hammerslammer holds tremendous expertise at various crafting branches. This is supplemented by his age and experience allowing him to continue picking things up. • Chadmium can appear, and indeed is, quite intimidating with his shaven head and general demeanor. This aids him in his negotiations or haggling with those who aren't looking to test his or their strength. Weaknesses: • Chadmium Hammerslammer is, at heart, not a fighter. He was a craftsman by trade and despite entering into a shady underworld as part of his craftsmanship, he is ultimately at somewhat of a disadvantage in a head-to-head if he cannot rely on the strength of his creations. • Chadmium is a believer of the phrase "If you want something done right, do it yourself" when it comes to creative efforts. This means that he is often running multiple projects by himself at any given time and can easily stretch himself thin that way. There are definitely times he has forgotten to eat for days before realizing. Fears: • The original Hammerslammer clan tend to be insular and are very far from where Chadmium Hammerslammer has set himself up. However, there is always the possibility and fear that should they discover their prodigal adopted son by some happenstance, they may attempt something. • Chadmium fears the destruction of his ability to create. As such, he highly prizes his hands. Though he has considered contingencies for losing other parts, such as his sight, most contingencies require his own hands to craft. Should he find a highly responsive prosthetic, it would allow him to sleep easier.
Modifiers:
• Lifetime Discipline: This discipline allows the user to half the mission requirement in order to reach the next rank of the crafting tree. This makes it easier for the user to craft further in the branches. • Specialization: Reduces the cost of all worker based missions by two • Learn 6 extra of every jutsu type per post (Worker specialization) • 4 free job title upgrades (purchased) + 6 job titles from Class. • 10 free training posts • "Grandmaster" in two smithings --- (-1) post to all missions.
Personal Attributes: • Forged in Fire: Gains the Katon chakra element • Forged in Forgery: Having spent many years operating in the underworld, Chadmium can replicate the works of others if he recognizes the material and has a chance to study the item in detail. While a superficial forgery can be made of anything, if Chadmium wishes to create an effective forgery of an item he must first be able to craft on the job rank of the item, and accept that his forgery will likely be defective in some way. When creating a forgery of a legendary item, it will take either twice the time (posts) or material/costs to create, the proper material to craft, and cannot be replicated again for one month. A forgery is not perfect by any means and very careful inspection of the original and the forgery side-by-side will reveal differences. • Using Your Own Supply: Chadmium gains an additional buki style to better understand his weapon and armor crafting. • Meaningless: Chadmium gains an additional PA. • Variable Technique: Chadmium can change a rank-stated technique into an X-rank technique. [Currently Unchosen]
Worker Job-centered PAs • Toxin Chemist - Extra-Strength Dosage: The first application/tick of a Light Poison crafted by Chadmium on an individual body can apply an additional dosage. • Weapon-Crafting - Reinforced: Weapons crafted by Chadmium are considered reinforced and cannot be broken or destroyed by Simple techniques.
▰▰▰ JOBS AND MISSIONS
Ryo: 両0 AC: 25,000
Missions Complete: {all start at 0} D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Maruton: • Kai | Rank X | Default • Henge no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Bunshin no Jutsu | Rank E | Default • Substitution Technique | Rank E | Default • Art of Walking on Water | D Rank | Default • Art of Walking on Walls | D Rank | Default
Doton •
Suiton •
Katon •
Genjutsu •
Bukijutsu {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▰▰▰ FORMLESS STYLES → 00 / 04 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Formless Styles • {Formless style name}
Formless Techniques • {Formless technique name}
▰▰▰ ACADEMY STUDENT Learned E Rank Formless • {Formless type learning}
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Posted: Tue Apr 02, 2019 10:10 pm
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Okay! So I'm approving your keystone separately so for profile wise there's only a few things C: Take out the turning enemies jutsu into lava part and then it's good, next up we actually changed chakra and stamina training missions to be unlocked automatically at certain ac levels here, thirdly the April's fools reward is chakra or stamina not both.
So assuming you choose +50 chakra your new levels should be 840 chakra and 690 stamina. (I included the AC increases, your class increases, your PA increase, the holiday reward, so if I missed anything else let me know)
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I can't get over that picture it's the best xD EDIT: Your forged in forgery pa is a no go. After some deliberation on we've decided it was too vague on it's weaknesses. If you want to continue working on said PA just make sure in it's next iteration that any forgeries count torwards your characters crafting limit, along with you still having to approve them in custom weapons forum as normal.
Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2019 11:13 am
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Made my edits.
I added a note to clarify that certain techniques which weren't directly offensive could become so. Lava being obviously a lot more dangerous than water.
I also clarified it's intended to work on bloodline techniques. Obviously all the Hoshigaki Techniques are Water Based but they aren't explicitly water techs.
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Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2019 7:02 pm
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I can't get over that picture it's the best xD EDIT: Your forged in forgery pa is a no go. After some deliberation on we've decided it was too vague on it's weaknesses. If you want to continue working on said PA just make sure in it's next iteration that any forgeries count torwards your characters crafting limit, along with you still having to approve them in custom weapons forum as normal.
Hehe, thanks. I started with the name but knew I had to choose that FC for this name when I saw it.
Just to be clear, the below is what you're referring to by the character crafting limit right? Can only make one legendary item for one RPC. Can only make two legendary items for the village or rogue group the character is a member of.
Edits to Forged in Forgery made below, will update profile with it if it's good to go. Reiteration:
• Forged in Forgery: Having spent many years operating in the underworld, Chadmium can replicate the works of others if he recognizes the material and has a chance to study the item in detail. While a superficial forgery can be made of anything, if Chadmium wishes to create an effective forgery of an item he must first be able to craft on the job rank of the item, and accept that his forgery will likely be different in some way. When creating a forgery of a legendary item, it will take either twice the time (posts) or material/costs to create, the proper material to craft, and cannot be replicated again for one month. An effective forgery (e.g. one that mimics some or all the abilities of the original) counts towards Chadmium's crafting limits and are to be submitted for approval in the Custom Weapons Forum as per normal. The submission will note any differences from the original. A effective forgery of a Legendary item may only be used by the RPC and/or group it is intended for. Attempts by others to use it make it only as effective as a superficial forgery, which is to say none of its special abilities will activate. In terms of RPCs defecting from a group or village, the current wielder of the copied legendary has priority. A forgery, superficial or effective, is not perfect by any means and very careful inspection of the original and the forgery side-by-side will reveal differences.
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