Lilah's personality contradicts itself with these three statements: "She doesn't quite care if she hurts others along the way..." and "She will do anything to achieve her goals, rules be damned, and could care less about people or things being broken along the way." yet "She is also rather aware of how others feel and feels guilty when she hurts their feelings (it doesn't stop her from doing it though)". While it is possible to be aware of how other's feel and just not care, this indicates that Lilah does indeed feel remorse and guilt for her actions, which doesn't align with 'she doesn't care/could care less about the feelings or well-being of others'.

If she feels remorse and guilt, she does care, so either the personality should be modified to make her far less sensitive/empathetic, or to make her far less callous/ruthless, because both can't exist in this manner at once. If she doesn't care about what she breaks, then why is she then described as in fact caring so much she strives to fix them? It further contradicts 'wouldn't hurt a living thing on purpose' when it's previously stated that other people being broken doesn't bother her at all.

Additionally, her bio should contain a bit more description of the effect losing her father at such a young age had on her, since it's pretty brief as it stands. Also, is there a reason she has a particular distaste for 'fat people'? Thanks! - Weasley


xxxxL I L A HxxxL U C YxxxW H I T E T H O R N E xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

          xxxB A S I C S xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
              NICKNAMES Lilah, and Lu

              AGE 11

              BIRTHDAY 09 April 2032

              BLOOD STATUS Pureblood

              WAND 12.5 inches, Alder, Phoenix Feather, Inflexible, Spiraled Shaft (pending)

              GENDER Female

              SEXUAL ORIENTATION Unsure

              FACECLAIM Sophie Turner [x]


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              TO ATTEND Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry

              HOUSE House

              YEAR First Year

              BEST LESSONS
                  Transfiguration
                  Defense Against the Dark Arts
                  Alchemy

              WORST LESSONS
                  Divinations
                  Astronomy
                  History of Magic

              OWL SCORES
                  Astronomy ~ X
                  Charms ~ X
                  Defense Against the Dark Arts ~ X
                  Herbology ~ X
                  History of Magic ~ X
                  Potions ~ X
                  Transfiguration ~ X
                  Elective~ X

              NEWT SCORES
                  Astronomy ~ X
                  Charms ~ X
                  Defense Against the Dark Arts ~ X
                  Herbology ~ X
                  History of Magic ~ X
                  Potions ~ X
                  Transfiguration ~ X
                  Elective~ X

              CURRENT EMPLOYMENT Student

              DREAM JOB Quidditch maybe?


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              ■ DEVIOUS She knows how to get what she wants and she's good at it. She can turn any situation into a favourable one for her. She doesn't quite care if she hurts others along the way... unless the others are her siblings or friends. They get the beneficial side of the deal.
              ■ BRILLIANT She's smart. Not just book smart, but street smart too. She can learn anything she sets her mind too. She is exceptionally clever. She also is rather talented at musical instruments which she thinks comes from her Aunt Ver.
              ■ REBELLIOUS She doesn't like rules and is great at breaking them. She loves to get in trouble, or more likely, she loves to cause trouble and never get caught. She is also prone to temper tantrums if she doesn't get what she wants. She will do anything to achieve her goals, rules be damned, and could care less about people or things being broken along the way.
              ■ BOLD She's very confident in herself and is prone to risk taking and adventures. She isn't afraid of anything and doesn't let anything get in her way. She would jump off a cliff if what she wanted was at the bottom. She is perfectly capable of taking care of herself and isn't afraid to do something that has to be done for her ambitions.
              ■ GENTLE At the heart of her soul she is gentle and kind. She wouldn't hurt a living creature on purpose and always takes care of the things she breaks. She's not afraid to break things, but she will always fix the mess she makes and make sure everyone comes out on the other end alright.
              ■ SENSITIVE She has feelings and she doesn't like them to get hurt. She is sensitive about what happens to her and is easily prone to being upset or crying. She is also rather aware of how others feel and feels guilty when she hurts their feelings (it doesn't stop her from doing it though). She is also feels great empathy for others and can usually understand what someone is going through and help them through it.

              LIKES
                  Animals
                  Winning
                  Lilith
                  Kory
                  Chance

              DISLIKES
                  Losing
                  Failures
                  Bullies
                  Being Left Alone
                  Fat People

              HOBBIES
                  Quidditch
                  Violin
                  Piano

              STRENGTHS
                  Getting What She Wants
                  Loyalty

              WEAKNESSES
                  Sensitivity
                  Lack Of Imagination

              FEARS
                  The Dark
                  Butteflies


      xxxH I S T O R Y xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
          CHILDHOOD She was born into a family of 6. She has an older brother, an older sister, her mum, her da, and her twin sister Lilith. She has had a pretty uneventful life so far and spends most of her time toddling around with Lilith, or napping, or eating, or talking up a storm to her mum or da. He father died right in front of her three years ago, and she is still recovering from it. She got her letter for Hogwarts though, and is happy to be going.

          SCHOOL YEARS
              FIRST YEAR Information
              SECOND YEAR Information
              THIRD YEAR Information
              FOURTH YEAR Information
              FIFTH YEAR Information
              SIXTH YEAR Information
              SEVENTH YEAR Information

          POST GRADUATION Information


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          FAMILY Michael McHalen - Grandfather, Laura Edgeworth - Grandmother, Verily Holt - Aunt, Kenneth Holt - Uncle, Chance Whitethorne - Brother Kory Rowley-McHalen - Brother, Lilith Whitethorne - Twin, Chalmes Whitethorne - Father, Elliryanna McHalen - Mother, Gearvin Whitethorne - Grandfather, Nicole Whitethorne - Grandmother, Chris Whitethorne - Uncle Adalaide Whitethorne - Aunt, Eretria Borson - Aunt, Magni Borson - Uncle, Desiree Whitethorne - Cousin, Zachary Whitethorne - Cousin, Grace McHalen - Cousin, Aiobheal Tierney - Cousin, Blake Warren -Great Uncle(deceased), Maggie Warren - Great Aunt(deceased), Bethany Borson - Cousin, Wesley Edgeworth - Great Uncle, Damien Edgeworth - Cousin, Gideon Edgeworth - Cousin, Deveron Whitethorne - Great-uncle, Zephyros Whitethorne - Cousin, Michelyn Whitethorne - Cousin, Clementine Fenwick - Cousin, Issac Whitethorne - Uncle, Michelle Blythe - Aunt, Timothy Whitethorne - Uncle, Tanya Whitethorne - Aunt.
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          BEST FRIEND Name
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          ENEMIES Name
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