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[Candidate] Laredda [QC'd]

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InsaneWhitey28

PostPosted: Wed Jun 26, 2019 12:21 pm
Name: Laredda
Age: 24
Nameday: 3550.10.16
Sex: Female
Sexual Orientation: Asexual
Craft: Starcrafter
Rank: Journeyman Starcrafter
Location: Western Weyr
Physical Description:
Seemingly a Northerner through and through, many people tend to act like she's from the North even if she corrects them. They see the pale skin, the prim and proper way she holds herself and just assume whatever they want about her. It's not entirely pleasant, but when Laredda looks in the mirror she certainly can't blame them. Much.

Laredda's skin tends to turn red rather than tan and she's been on the receiving end of terrible sunburns more than once. Her skin is a healthy pale peach, as long as she makes sure she takes care of it. That means lots of creams for her and constant sunblock.For many reasons. Laredda is used to using her hair to hide behind it, not out of shyness, but out of her desire to keep herself out of the sun. But she recognizes the more practical route of putting your hair up in the heat so that's what she does. Her dark rowan locks most often found pulled into a tight bun at the back of her head, only a few loose strands escaping. Laredda's eyes are almost always kept clear, her gray green gaze keen and observant when nothing is blocking her sight.

Not necessarily small, and not necessarily average. Laredda is petite, slim, and vastly underestimated. It's not that spends all her time training her body, working to make sure she's able to take on anyone and anything. But she does make sure no one is able to get the jump on her. She's more than able to throw around her own weight, and more than willing to do so. Her dedication shows when she's not sporting her favored light and airy blouses. Well defined muscle seen in her arms, and neck, a testament to the rest of her athleticism. Without the seeming frailty her clothes give to her most might think twice about saying a cross word to her face.

As said Laredda prefers light and airy clothing, often found in flowing gowns or just as loose blouses. Her work clothes are even a little on the airy side, though she wears a simple corset to keep the blouse confined to her figure. She can't have it getting in the way after all!! Most of her clothing is simple in design and simple in color, she's not one to go for extravagance. Dyes are expensive, Laredda has better things to spend her marks on and she isn't keen on looking like a terran peacock.
Personality:
Quiet - Confident - Simmers - Forceful - Teasing - Earnest


Self-assured. The single most common word used to describe Laredda. A woman who knows who she is and knows where she's going. It's a quiet confidence that she radiates, not aggressive or demanding. It draws people in, asks them to listen to her and when they do she returns the favor.

Laredda is a quiet sort of person, not one to be overtly noisy or draw attention to herself. It's not that she sneaks around, she just doesn't make much noise herself. Her movements light and airy, her footsteps soft. Even her voice is a low gentle tone, and though she knows how to harden it, how to raise it above a crowd, she rarely does. Laredda enjoys her peace and quiet and there's very little that will encourage her to give it up. She's confident enough in herself in fact to make sure that other people around her know this too. Somewhat like a grumpy archivist when her quiet is disturbed, Laredda is sure enough of herself to hush those around her if they get a little too rambunctious for her tastes. She doesn't try to oppress, just impress that they're being quiet rude.

It takes quiet a bit for her to truly lose her temper, but Laredda is the type to simmer. To sit and stew over one matter or another until it bursts forth from her like an eruption. On one hand, this means she isn't going off on anyone without reasons, on the other hand when she does go off she gets quite nasty. It doesn't help that the force of her words is truly backed by her own forceful personality. Sharp, biting, she puts weight into them even when she may regret them later. Laredda has ruined more than one friendship this way, and is often on the look out to make sure she doesn't ruin another.

She's not usually a forceful woman, but when she needs to be she can be. Perhaps oddly enough the strength of her personality comes through in her teasing. Laredda isn't shy to put a quick witty little comment here or there, but she is polite about it. She reads the mood of the room and acts accordingly, knowing when teasing would be welcomed or when it would just make the entire situation worse. Lighthearted jokes only work if there's laughter after all, not awkward silences.
Positive Trait List Astute, Dedicated, Patient
Negative Trait List Reclusive, Workaholic, Single-Minded
History:
Laredda's life was a quiet one. Born on the Southern Continent, she lived at Southern Hold for most her life. Her father was a passing rider who visited her mother every now and again, there were plans at one point for the pair of them to join him at the Weyr but that all changed when her father lost his life in a betweening accident.

It was the biggest blip in Laredda's life that she would ever have, losing her father. But where she lost one father, she gained another in the man who eventually married her mother. Her step-father would be the one to encourage her to join the Starcrafters, beginning her apprenticeship at the young age of twelve. It would be the first time she was ever away from home, but her time at the Hall would be some of the best Turns of her life. There was very little that could keep her from completing her apprenticeship and at the age of twenty-one she walked the tables.

At her request she was stationed back at Southern Hold near her family. And it was from Southern Hold she was Searched for Western Weyr. A great surprise to her and a new adventure, it was time to enter a brand new world.
Other: N/A

Candidate Specific Questions
Do you want them to have an official Search RP? Yes please!
Do you understand they will age every passing year regardless if you're there to RP the or not? Yes!
Do you want them to have a possible Stands Impression? No.  
PostPosted: Fri Jun 28, 2019 4:44 pm
Hello Whitey!

Laredda's looking great! Since she's meant to be a Western Candidate, we'll need you to mention in her history that some time after she returned to Southern Hold, she was Searched to Western Weyr--even if you plan to RP the Search. We've had people come from various Pern RPs around the internet with different rules than we have, so just in case you were concerned about it, I can assure you that an actual Search RP is not required to have your candidate be part of the Hatching!  

Teiha


InsaneWhitey28

PostPosted: Fri Jun 28, 2019 7:41 pm
And edited the last little bit at the end. I honestly just like RPing the Search, but thank you! <3  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 28, 2019 6:39 pm
Hey Insane!

First off let me apologize for taking so long to get to this. Between preparing for a Hatching and then RL vacation, things fell a bit behind. That said, I think the only thing I'm seeing here is that her listed Positive & Negative traits don't appear to match what you've written of her--and the traits you listed also don't seem to match. So I'm getting conflicted signals, and since she is meant to be a Candidate, we need a clear idea of what she's like. :3

For example, her first line is how self-assured she is, and yet I'm not seeing that as one of er listed trait; you also mention how she simmers and can be prone to grumpy outbursts, but again, I'm not seeing that in her listed traits either. You talk about how she likes to tease or joke, but again, I seem to be missing this in the listed traits. emotion_bigheart

Is it possible to go in and refine her traits a bit? If nothing else, we absolutely need the 3 Positive and 3 Negatives expanded upon in the personality write up so we can check them against our future baby dragonets during Hatchings. Or, if it's easier, just change up her positive and negative traits to match what you've already written. :3 I think with that polished, she should be good to go!
 

Uta
Captain

Shy Mage

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