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Posted: Thu May 21, 2020 11:05 am
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Roar! On it! So I reduced Reap them like wheat into an anti barrier boost when used as the name suits better than sending people flying lol And silence in the wind just affect their stats now.
Now just to confirm, silence in the wind beings a spiritual buff to the weapon for the attack it’s used with, that would mean the attack in question would be treated as spiritual on collision at that point or am I mistaken there, I just wanna know so I can write a little clarification note for future reference at the end of its description.
In the end I don’t mind toning the abilities down as I only made them for the weapon because I got them lol, honestly this is more my applying for a giant weapon for my giant companion >.<
Ahhh but the moment this ugly gigantic weapon is accepted my Kamaitachi is good to go biggrin
▰ Character: Hameline the kamaitachi (Hasakis ninja pet) ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Weapon Name: Squall Reaper ▰ Weapon Type: A horrendously large a scythe ▰ Weapon Size: The snath of the weapon is an extremely durable and resistant wood that has been treated and is 39 feet in Length, the blade is 15ft from base to tip, width would be well over three feet at widest points I dare not estimate thickness. ▰ Inventory Information: Large ▰ Weapon Weight: like a ton and a quarter, probably more ▰ Elemental Affinity: [ Crafted Weapons Only ] ▰ Description: please ignore the switch forms ▰ Ability Summary: Silence in the wind [ ] | Rank X | Passive[ Wind ]| Cost [ spiritual ] When riding wind Jutsu, manifesting wind techniques Hamline can also pay the cost of this technique for no additional activation and can wreathe the weapon with wind release chakra, this causes its form to be concealed within the winds making it benefit from “Ride the wind” technique and the wind sickle weasel TA. When this Ability is active the billowing winds from the surrounding chakra hide the weapons location and as a result reduces the opponents agility to dodge the attack by 1 when used from ranks E - C and + 2 from onward of the technique used.X
Reap them like wheat [ ] | Rank X | Passive [ Element ]| Cost [ Simple ] Due to the immense size and weight of this weapon and the sheer speed it is handled with despite it can slash through most things with terrifying efficiency The attacks from this weapon treat barrier and defensive techniques as one rank lower at ranks E - C and by two from B onward If the activation cost is paid when striking someone.
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Posted: Fri May 22, 2020 1:24 am
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▰ Character: Kotori Hyuuga ▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Armor Name: Dirge of Isetsuhiko | [1/2 Legendary Smithing Creation; -0 Slots] ▰ Armor Type: Accessory (Necklace) ▰ Inventory Information: N/a ▰ Armor Weight: 0.5lbs ▰ Stat Increase: +2 Endurance ▰ Elemental Affinity: Wind ▰ Description: A necklace named after and said to house a famous god of wind who surrendered his territory in the face of a threat from other invading gods. The wearer of this necklace is blessed with Isetsuhiko's regretful will to protect what he could not before. It is said to be capable of harnessing the power of air to guard the wearer from harm with an invisible shield of air only detectable by those attuned to natural energy. ▰ Ability Summary: Of the Wind | Passive Isetsuhiko is a spirit that resides in this necklace, making it a possessed "sentient" item. It cannot communicate with its wearer unless they are actively utilizing natural energy (sage mode, curse seal, etc.). He only has as much visual and auditory range as normal human abilities, and only feels what physically interacts with the pendant itself (not the string it is attached to). Genjutsu that alter the wearer's sense of hearing will block Isetsuhiko's ability to speak to the wearer as well; Isetsuhiko cannot tell if the wearer is in a genjutsu. As the Wind | Rank B | Wind | Spiritual The spirit of the necklace drains 40 chakra per post from the wearer into itself (not optional unless not worn). Can store up to 320 chakra within itself. The wearer cannot tap into these reserves by any means. By the Wind | Rank X | Wind | Spiritual The spirit in the necklace uses chakra stored within itself to compress and move air into a barrier to protect the wearer. It can be avoided entirely with extremely high-speed attacks (higher speed stat than the wearer) or bypassed with incredible brute force (attacks stronger than this effect). Blocks up to same rank techniques completely; fire element jutsu a considered 1 Rank stronger than this defense. The chakra cost can only deducted from Itsuhiko's reserves; cannot activate if insufficient reserves. This effect does consume the wearer's defensive activation, and it counts as a spiritual defense.
▰ Armour Name: Kotoshironushi | [2/2 Legendary Smithing Creation; -0 Slots] ▰ Armour Type: Kote ▰ Inventory Information: Heavy | Set ▰ Armour Weight: 700lbs (350lbs each) ▰ Stat Increase: +2 Endurance ▰ Elemental Affinity: Fire ▰ Description: A pair of kote created with the skill of the recluse Soren Tribe that protect the tops of the hands, the front of the knuckles, and up to the elbows along the outside of the arms (the palms and inner side of the forearms aren't protected). The layered plates effectively distribute forces that come into contact with the kote to minimize damage to the protected areas. However, the most notable feature of Kotoshironushi are their unwieldiness due to the absurd weight of the materials. ▰ Ability Summary: Burning Finger | Passive Kotoshironushi's wielder can throw a known fire-based ability/technique from the gauntlet as an alternate means of activating it. The technique functions as normal, but is released from the kote instead. Vault Breaker | Rank X | Fire | Complex Kotoshironushi becomes heated by the wearer's chakra allowing simple attacks or techniques involving the user's hands/forearms to deal more damage to armor (every two attacks higher rank than the armor's value will add up to three attacks worth against it), and defensive techs are treated as one [1] rank lower in a clash. The Best Defense | Variable | Fire | Spiritual Kotoshironushi stores excess energy from attacks it is used to defend against in the form of heat/flames. The wearer can release the stored heat for a devastating fire attack on impact with another person/obstacle (treated as spiritual when clashing with other jutsu) but must pay half of the value of the attack as stamina or else they suffer damage from the attack too.
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Posted: Tue May 26, 2020 3:31 am
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▰ Character: Aeleus ▰ Weapon Name: Étaín ▰ Weapon Type: Twin Halberd ▰ Weapon Size: → Scythe: 2.5-meters [ 8-ft ] → Kusarigama: 2-meter Kama, 12-meter chain. [ 4-ft, 40-ft ] ▰ Inventory Information: Large ▰ Weapon Weight: 2kg [ 4-lbs ] ▰ Stat Increase: ▰ Elemental Affinity: ▰ Description: Étaín is an ancient, sentient halberd fabled to have been bequeathed to a small, nomadic peon tribe. As a gratuitous blessing for the tribe's unwavering faith and worship to their creator, The Sun. Although classified as a halberd, Étaín more resembles that of a dual scythe or joint Kama. Étaín's power lies within it's hidden versatility. Whilst seemingly an individual dual-bladed scythe at first glance and while mostly used for it's reaping capabilities. Étaín is, in actuality, two large Kama merged together. Detaching at it's center to convert from scythe into dual-bladed Kusarigama. Residing within the scythe lie dormant her primordial spirit eternally bond to the weapon. Étaín passively feast on the host chakra, favoring chakra akin to the fire nature. She's very picky with whom she allows wield her, demanding a strong vessel. Super heating her exterior to burn any she deem unfit to wield her. ▰ Ability Summary: ___Etain - Sentient Communication | Passive | Spiritual Allows Étaín to communicate telepathically with her host. Often recognized as 'vibrational frequency' that becomes clearer the more attune the host is with Étaín. • Cannot decipher Genjutsu. ___Etain - Primordial Possession | Rank X | Spiritual While neither truly ally nor foe, Étaín ultimately has her own agenda to unseal her forsaken soul from the scythe. Continuously feasting on the host's chakra, allows for her to parasitically merge herself with the host. Subtlety influencing the host overtime. Garnering complete control when the host is stressed, typically during moments of emotional fragility/dire straits. Étaín's possession is often characterized by the iconic glowing golden irises that the host develop, alongside a feral, hedonistic persona. • Combative/Bodily Terms & Conditions apply. • Primordial Possession's cost is siphoned upon transformation. Granting one of the following: - Possession Reflect: Étaín's awakening expels the host feasted chakra outwardly, in a omnidirectional 'push' repelling Ninjutsu/Physical techniques equal to the cost paid upon transformation. - Possession Surge: Étaín's awakening floods the host's network with a surge of her feasted chakra, allowing for Genjutsu release equal to the cost paid upon transformation.
Evanescently Magnificent EDIT: Updated with bullets. Slightly tweaked Primordial Possession to be more of a real technique ( was mainly there for cosmetic in-game tbh ). Reflect would reach no more than 3ft from the host's body. Both Reflect and Surge are one time effects only preformed/allowed upon the initial activation and cannot be used again thereafter.
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Posted: Wed May 27, 2020 8:42 pm
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▰ Character: Aeleus ▰ Weapon Name: Étaín ▰ Weapon Type: Twin Halberd ▰ Weapon Size: → Scythe: 2.5-meters [ 8-ft ] → Kusarigama: 2-meter Kama, 12-meter chain. [ 4-ft, 40-ft ] ▰ Inventory Information: Large ▰ Weapon Weight: 2kg [ 4-lbs ] ▰ Stat Increase: ▰ Elemental Affinity: ▰ Description: Étaín is an ancient, sentient halberd fabled to have been bequeathed to a small, nomadic peon tribe. As a gratuitous blessing for the tribe's unwavering faith and worship to their creator, The Sun. Although classified as a halberd, Étaín more resembles that of a dual scythe or joint Kama. Étaín's power lies within it's hidden versatility. Whilst seemingly an individual dual-bladed scythe at first glance and while mostly used for it's reaping capabilities. Étaín is, in actuality, two large Kama merged together. Detaching at it's center to convert from scythe into dual-bladed Kusarigama. Residing within the scythe lie dormant her primordial spirit eternally bond to the weapon. Étaín passively feast on the host chakra, favoring chakra akin to the fire nature. She's very picky with whom she allows wield her, demanding a strong vessel. Super heating her exterior to burn any she deem unfit to wield her. ▰ Ability Summary: ___Etain - Sentient Communication | Passive | Spiritual Allows Étaín to communicate telepathically with her host. Often recognized as 'vibrational frequency' that becomes clearer the more attune the host is with Étaín. • Cannot decipher Genjutsu. ___Etain - Primordial Possession | Rank X | Spiritual While neither truly ally nor foe, Étaín ultimately has her own agenda to unseal her forsaken soul from the scythe. Continuously feasting on the host's chakra, allows for her to parasitically merge herself with the host. Subtlety influencing the host overtime. Garnering complete control when the host is stressed, typically during moments of emotional fragility/dire straits. Étaín's possession is often characterized by the iconic glowing golden irises that the host develop, alongside a feral, hedonistic persona. • Combative/Bodily Terms & Conditions apply. • Primordial Possession's cost is siphoned upon transformation. Granting one of the following: - Possession Reflect: Étaín's awakening expels the host feasted chakra outwardly, in a omnidirectional 'push' repelling Ninjutsu/Physical techniques equal to the cost paid upon transformation. - Possession Surge: Étaín's awakening floods the host's network with a surge of her feasted chakra, allowing for Genjutsu release equal to the cost paid upon transformation.
Evanescently Magnificent REPOST: Updated with bullets. Slightly tweaked Primordial Possession to be more of a real technique ( was mainly there for cosmetic in-game tbh ). Reflect would reach no more than 3ft from the host's body. Both Reflect and Surge are one time effects only preformed/allowed upon the initial activation and cannot be used again thereafter.
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Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2020 7:55 pm
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So I made it complex because it does use chakra? Or should it be simple XD?
I think I understood exactly what you meant on what you said about real them like wheat and so I think I edited it correctly.
Yeah also here’s a character I have up for approvals full custom equipment list -_- vaguely integral to her XD not necessarily with the exact same abilities by the end but yeah.
Also any bit that mentions that PA, I’ll change those into whatever technique is developed >.<
Am I able to trade normal Jutsu slots for custom Jutsu slots >.<...? With this equipment I’m gonna need room for one more custom unless we get custom slots levelling up.
▰ Character: Hameline the kamaitachi (Hasakis ninja pet) ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Weapon Name: Squall Reaper ▰ Weapon Type: A horrendously large a scythe ▰ Weapon Size: The snath of the weapon is an extremely durable and resistant wood that has been treated and is 39 feet in Length, the blade is 15ft from base to tip, width would be well over three feet at widest points I dare not estimate thickness. ▰ Inventory Information: Large ▰ Weapon Weight: like a ton and a quarter, probably more ▰ Elemental Affinity: [ Crafted Weapons Only ] ▰ Description: please ignore the switch forms ▰ Ability Summary: Silence in the wind [ ] | Rank X | Passive[ Wind ]| Cost [ Complex ] When riding wind Jutsu, manifesting wind techniques Hamline can also pay the cost of this technique for no additional activation and can wreathe the weapon with wind release chakra, this causes its form to be concealed within the winds making it benefit from “Ride the wind” technique and the wind sickle weasel TA. When this Ability is active the billowing winds from the surrounding chakra hide the weapons location and as a result reduces the opponents agility to dodge the attack by 1 when used from ranks E - C and + 2 from onward of the technique used.X
Reap them like wheat [ ] | Rank X | Augment [ Element ]| Cost [ Simple ] Due to the immense size and weight of this weapon and the sheer speed it is handled with despite that fact allows that with a little extra effort the user can easily slash through most things with terrifying efficiency The attacks from this weapon treats barrier and defensive techniques as one rank lower. This is an augment and requires the user to pay for its activation when making an attack and lasts 3 posts with a E-rank upkeep in chakra.
▰ Character: Tomoe ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Armour Name: Jingasa hat supreme ▰ Armour Type: Helmet ▰ Inventory Information: Heavy ▰ Armour Weight: 25lbs ▰ Description: a splinter circular helmet vastly simmilar to its wooden or straw counterparts but with metal plates. It nearly covers the eyes and thus has small sight holes in the front for when looking downward. Black with blue trim ▰ Ability Summary: Shockwave deflection [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank - | Passive [ ]| Cost [ ] Defends the user from jutsu and other physical concussive effects (I.e. shockwave), this doesn’t work against crashing to the ground and striking their head very fast in doing so, if a technique ignores armor or doesn’t interact with the helmet, I.e. someone manages to fit a punch into her jaw on beneath the helmet into her temple this wouldn’t come into play.
Break away [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | supplement [ Element ]| Cost [ Simple ] The plates are layered in such a way that causes parts broken to flake away, this allows her to pay an equal amount of chakra to the technique that would degrade the users armor to suffer the degradation but allows the user to avoid the damage of the attack at no additional activation, although can only be used once any given post and applies only to strikes against this.
▰ Character: Tomoe ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Armour Name: Rouge plate ▰ Armour Type: Body armor ▰ Inventory Information: Heavy | Set ▰ Armour Weight: 85Lbs ▰ Description: Form fitting samurai armor, front and back, complete with shoulder guards. black coat with blue trim ▰ Ability Summary: Chain undershirt [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank - | Class [ Element ]| Cost [ - ] The armor comes complete with a chain undershirt that treats the exposed parts of her arms and body, down to her hips are protected by medium armor. form fitting [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Class [ Element ]| Cost [ Spritual/Complex/Simple ] This armor is finely built and much less cumbersome and bulky than it might appear, this allows her to be able to wear loose robes and/or cloaks overtop over her armor and hide the majority of its bulk, needing someone of equal body rank to casually perceive the armor, although a few posts of studying her will make it apparent. She can remove the shoulder guards and her front and side armoured flaps to make the armor worn only detectable upon search or any reason they could see through the clothes or physical contact, although lowers all areas affected a armor value down to medium
▰ Character: Tomoe ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Armour Name: Steadystride Greaves ▰ Armour Type: Foot/Legwear ▰ Inventory Information: Heavy ▰ Armour Weight: 55lbs ▰ Description: Form fitting armoured boots and greaves that go a bit beyond her knees. Again black and dark blue trim. ▰ Ability Summary: Silently built [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Passive [ ]| Cost [ ] Form fitting just like her other armor and well built allowing her to walk as quietly in her armor as she can without it and with no restriction upon her movements. Burst [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Augment [ Element ]| Cost [ Complex ] This can either be activated alone or as part of a technique that augments movement speed. It increases movement distance by 10 feet per rank used, doubling any stat bonus to movement speed or leg oriented attacks for 3 posts, during this any bonus to the users speed stat bonuses are mirrored to their strength stat for kick or shoulder check/tackle type attacks during this abilities duration.
▰ Character: Tomoe ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Armour Name: Give it a name! ▰ Armour Type: Gauntlet/ arm armor ▰ Inventory Information: Heavy | set ▰ Armour Weight: 38lbs ▰ Description: Form fitting armor from fingers all the way to her elbows with claw like tips and knuckle serrations, special red half orbs exist in the palms. ▰ Ability Summary: Jutsu absorption[ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Class [ Element ]| Cost [ Spiritual] Once every three posts when defending against spiritual techniques, she can choose to pay the chakra cost of the technique being used, this will absorb the chakra involved in the technique and add it too her own reserves, nullifying the technique, this ability can be sustained for free against continuous ninjutsu, however can only do so for up to three posts, on the fourth if the user doesn’t stop immediately, the crystal and the gauntlet used will break three ranks of durability. The orbs in her armor are treated as one rank lower in durability and defence than the armor rating of her gauntlets, every level of durability lost lowers the efficiency of the chakra draining by 1 rank, meaning if she could perform up to b-rank absorption and they were damaged she could on do so at c-rank and so on, this applies to life drain as well. Costs a defensive activation to use and same to maintain on other posts
Life drain [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Class [ Element ]| Cost [ Spritual ] Alternatively and not limited in use the user can activate these gauntlets when gripping a person By paying the activation cost of this technique, this absorbs resources equivalent equal to the activation cost as if it were Complex, this ability stacks with her energy vampire PA(if it gets approved that is.) and can be maintained each post constant is continued at a cost two ranks below its initial cost per post. (Can only affect one activation a post?)
▰ Character: Tomoe ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Weapon Name: Voracity ▰ Weapon Type: Katana ▰ Weapon Size: 28.5 inches ▰ Inventory Information: [ Medium ] ▰ Weapon Weight: 1.4 Kg ▰ Stat Increase: [ Crafted Weapons Only ] ▰ Elemental Affinity: [ Crafted Weapons Only ] ▰ Description: ▰ Ability Summary: channeled consumption [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Passive [ Element ]| Cost [ simple ] This weapon can be used to channel her energy vampire pa (if accepted) and her life drain PA, which can drain with the same force through striking techniques, she is capable of activating life drain by paying its cost for no additional activation when making a strike
consume their essence [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Passive [ Element ]| Cost [ Passive ] Upon a successful strike on an opponent with this sword and the life drain ability is active, she can opt to immediately use the gained resources and inject it directly into her life force. Instead of gaining any resources she can cure one status effect she suffers up to a tiered rank of one below the amount chakra of chakra used to a minimum of one tier of status cured, she can only be if it from this once a post.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2020 9:15 am
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Prince_yureil JUST looked back on what I wrote and realized it was a lot. Don't worry it's not as and as it looks! xD
Heya! unfortunately, no trading custom slots from normal ones can't be done but you can gain them form a whole bunch of other places! We had them out from events, you can use the narrative system to gain them as a reward, or they can be made from grandmaster Scroll Crafting! (alternatively, if you really needed more you COULD use a PA to transfer normal to customs at a rate of 10 normal to 2 custom but I wouldn't recommend it since it's easy to get a lot)
Oh and before I forget since it seems relevant here, the normal custom items are actually gone with the new crafting update! If you want custom weapons and armor then you have to use the crafting system found here which actually has its own limits! Don't worry too much since you're mid approval process we decided to be nice and allow everyone to keep their items and just gain titles equal to what they'd need to have made their customs so congrats! Your characters with these items just hit Master Weaponsmithing and Armorsmithing! (Also you get to add stat points and an element to your weapons now just for free).
That said let's get on with the approval since I'm sure you're eager xD For Reap them like wheat all it needs now is to say that the initial cost needs to be equal in power to the firs technique it is augmenting then it should be good!
Now for the new goodies! So for Shockwave deflection, your armor is already providing you a passive defense just by being armor. There's more detailed information here but since your helmet is heavy tier you're safe from attacks up to A! ^ ^ if more defensive stuffs is what you want, however, then I would actually suggest making this technique a purely defensive one like in tai or buki! Something along the lines of "It's an X ranked technique and then you pay an amount to set the rank of the Jutsu, Like say you use it S+ rank, and then everything less than that is blocked and doesn't hurt your armor. If you REALLY wanna get defensive I would add-in that for the cost of not making offensive actions in the post this skill is used in, and with this effect preventing you from making them every post you keep it up for, then it can be upkept for a lower cost ('d be willing to grant up to E) and continued past the first post without losing its strength. (Most defensive jutsu can't be used this way) That's just a suggestion though!
Rouge plate's plates effects are small enough that I wouldn't make them require it but with Steadystride Greaves, its passive effects can't exist without some kind of trigger as per our custom rules! With Silently built if I can offer another bit of advice! The armor style Soko Sento since it gives you what you're trying to get here and with the benefit of not having to be on a trigger since it's a guild technique! Also, Arcane Knight Order that's just a little bit up from it (has to do with shields!) Burst is approved, however, remember to take into account your stat caps! Nothing can go past them unless your cap gets raised by one of our guild effects ^ ^
Life drain you can get rid of "and can be maintained each post constant is continued at a cost two ranks below its initial cost per post" if you like. Having to hold contact is enough and the way you worded it it would just weaken your technique : P That nameless armor is approved!
Aaaaaaaand the last one is approved too! C:
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2020 1:34 pm
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Evanescently Magnificent Prince_yureil JUST looked back on what I wrote and realized it was a lot. Don't worry it's not as and as it looks! xD
Heya! unfortunately, no trading custom slots from normal ones can't be done but you can gain them form a whole bunch of other places! We had them out from events, you can use the narrative system to gain them as a reward, or they can be made from grandmaster Scroll Crafting! (alternatively, if you really needed more you COULD use a PA to transfer normal to customs at a rate of 10 normal to 2 custom but I wouldn't recommend it since it's easy to get a lot)
i built this character a little after the most recent events unfortunately XD
(Wait the narrative system allows me to earn a new custom slot or two >.< eeek I’m gonna have to go reread that!! I just filled all my customs as I still was hoping we could work something out for that energy vampire Jutsu :p
Oh and before I forget since it seems relevant here, the normal custom items are actually gone with the new crafting update! If you want custom weapons and armor then you have to use the crafting system found here which actually has its own limits! Don't worry too much since you're mid approval process we decided to be nice and allow everyone to keep their items and just gain titles equal to what they'd need to have made their customs so congrats! Your characters with these items just hit Master Weaponsmithing and Armorsmithing! (Also you get to add stat points and an element to your weapons now just for free).
Holy crap are you serious?!? That’s great but Urgh I feel I accidently bent past the new system a little :/ but I won’t complain biggrin !! Would that mean these don’t take my custom Jutsu slots and Jutsu take up normal equipment slots(which in my case only the sword would because the rest is heavy armor and she is a juggernaut, which makes a heavy armor not count for an equipment slot. So I’d just need to post that in the crafting claims thread? Or should I just list it’s achievement due to then update
That said let's get on with the approval since I'm sure you're eager xD For Reap them like wheat all it needs now is to say that the initial cost needs to be equal in power to the firs technique it is augmenting then it should be good!
Now for the new goodies! So for Shockwave deflection, your armor is already providing you a passive defense just by being armor. There's more detailed information here but since your helmet is heavy tier you're safe from attacks up to A! ^ ^ if more defensive stuffs is what you want, however, then I would actually suggest making this technique a purely defensive one like in tai or buki! Something along the lines of "It's an X ranked technique and then you pay an amount to set the rank of the Jutsu, Like say you use it S+ rank, and then everything less than that is blocked and doesn't hurt your armor. If you REALLY wanna get defensive I would add-in that for the cost of not making offensive actions in the post this skill is used in, and with this effect preventing you from making them every post you keep it up for, then it can be upkept for a lower cost ('d be willing to grant up to E) and continued past the first post without losing its strength. (Most defensive jutsu can't be used this way) That's just a suggestion though!
so with shockwave deflection I might have goofed up. So every so often I see a Jutsu that uses the explicit phrase “concussive shockwave” the helmet is specifically meant to counter the concussion aspect of those as that sounds like so if an affect, its anti concussion gear..
Rouge plate's plates effects are small enough that I wouldn't make them require it but with Steadystride Greaves, its passive effects can't exist without some kind of trigger as per our custom rules! With Silently built if I can offer another bit of advice! The armor style Soko Sento since it gives you what you're trying to get here and with the benefit of not having to be on a trigger since it's a guild technique! Also, Arcane Knight Order that's just a little bit up from it (has to do with shields!) Burst is approved, however, remember to take into account your stat caps! Nothing can go past them unless your cap gets raised by one of our guild effects ^ ^
SOKO SENTO!!!!! I was looking for that tbh but confused it with the kote art and trained that instead whilst stopping my search -_-
Life drain you can get rid of "and can be maintained each post constant is continued at a cost two ranks below its initial cost per post" if you like. Having to hold contact is enough and the way you worded it it would just weaken your technique : P That nameless armor is approved!
Aaaaaaaand the last one is approved too! C:
▰ Character: Tomoe ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Armour Name: Jingasa hat supreme ▰ Armour Type: Helmet ▰ Inventory Information: Heavy ▰ Armour Weight: 25lbs ▰ Description: a splinter circular helmet vastly simmilar to its wooden or straw counterparts but with metal plates. It nearly covers the eyes and thus has small sight holes in the front for when looking downward. Black with blue trim • Element Lightning • stats +2 Endurance ▰ Ability Summary: Crouching wall [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Bukijutsu [ ]| Cost [ complex ] The user may choose to lower their body and crouch partially, leaning their head down and bracing their helmet with an arm, their other Leaning on a leg for support, the user can turn but effectively shielding herself and her armor from any attacks that would be of a lower Tier than this techniques activation cost, the users Foregos any and all actions that round and on consecutive posts may pay an D-ranked cost in resources and spend all their activations to maintain this technique, the user may hop a total five feet as the only movement they can perform during this action besides turning. This technique can not be activated the post after its end.
Break away [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | supplement [ Element ]| Cost [ Simple ] The plates are layered in such a way that causes parts broken to flake away, this allows her to pay an equal amount of chakra to the technique that would degrade the users armor to suffer the degradation but allows the user to avoid the damage of the attack at no additional activation, although can only be used once any given post and applies only to strikes against this.
▰ Character: Tomoe ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Armour Name: Life hands. ▰ Armour Type: Gauntlet/ arm armor ▰ Inventory Information: Heavy | set ▰ Armour Weight: 38lbs ▰ Description: Form fitting armor from fingers all the way to her elbows with claw like tips and knuckle serrations, special red half orbs exist in the palms. Element Earth stats +2 Strength ▰ Ability Summary: Jutsu absorption[ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Class [ Element ]| Cost [ Spiritual] Once every three posts when defending against spiritual techniques, she can choose to pay the chakra cost of the technique being used, this will absorb the chakra involved in the technique and add it too her own reserves, nullifying the technique, this ability can be sustained for free against continuous ninjutsu, however can only do so for up to three posts, on the fourth if the user doesn’t stop immediately, the crystal and the gauntlet used will break three ranks of durability. The orbs in her armor are treated as one rank lower in durability and defence than the armor rating of her gauntlets, every level of durability lost lowers the efficiency of the chakra draining by 1 rank, meaning if she could perform up to b-rank absorption and they were damaged she could on do so at c-rank and so on, this applies to life drain as well. Costs a defensive activation to use and same to maintain on other posts
Life drain [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Class [ Element ]| Cost [ Spritual ] Alternatively and not limited in use the user can activate these gauntlets when gripping a person By paying the activation cost of this technique, this absorbs resources equivalent equal to the activation cost as if it were Complex, this ability stacks with her energy vampire Jutsu(when it gets approved that is.) and can be maintained each post constant is continued at no cost until the opponent is released, although In the case of it being channeled through her sword voracities ability, she must pay an d-rank upkeep unless the blade is embedded into the person and they can’t get her to release it.
▰ Character: Tomoe ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Weapon Name: Voracity ▰ Weapon Type: Katana ▰ Weapon Size: 28.5 inches ▰ Inventory Information: [ Medium ] ▰ Weapon Weight: 1.4 Kg ▰ Stat Increase: + 2 Strength ▰ Elemental Affinity: Lightning ▰ Description: ▰ Ability Summary: channeled consumption [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Passive [ Element ]| Cost [ simple ] This weapon can be used to channel any chakra draining abilities that require an activation and contact. This allows her blade to drain with the same force through striking techniques, she is capable of activating life drain by paying its cost for no additional activation when making a strike
consume their essence [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Passive [ Element ]| Cost [ Passive ] Upon a successful strike on an opponent with this sword and the life drain ability is active, she can opt to immediately use the gained resources and inject it directly into her life force. Instead of gaining any resources she can cure one status effect she suffers up to a tiered rank of one below the amount chakra of chakra used to a minimum of one tier of status cured, she can only be if it from this once a post.
▰ Character: Tomoe ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Armour Name: Steadystride Greaves ▰ Armour Type: Foot/Legwear ▰ Inventory Information: Heavy ▰ Armour Weight: 55lbs ▰ Description: Form fitting armoured boots and greaves that go a bit beyond her knees. Again black and dark blue trim. Element Wind stats +2 Speed ▰ Ability Summary: Mean streak [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank C | Augment [ ]| Cost [ simple ] The armor of her foot is designed with sharper folds and razor edges sharpened into any thin edge that could cut if moved right when being touched. When a kick based attack lands she may pay the costs of this technique at no addition activation to add an additional tier of trauma and counts as a bladed attack. This causes significant pain to light armor level opponents(and non armoured) who don’t successfully defend the attack.
Burst [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Augment [ Element ]| Cost [ Complex ] This can either be activated alone or as part of a technique that augments movement speed. It increases movement distance by 10 feet per rank used, doubling any stat bonus to movement speed or leg oriented attacks for 3 posts, during this any bonus to the users speed stat bonuses are mirrored to their strength stat for kick or shoulder check/tackle type attacks during this abilities duration.
▰ Character: Tomoe ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Armour Name: Rouge plate ▰ Armour Type: Body armor ▰ Inventory Information: Heavy | Set ▰ Armour Weight: 85Lbs ▰ Description: Form fitting samurai armor, front and back, complete with shoulder guards. black coat with blue trim.
▰ Character: Tomoe ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Armour Name: Rouge plate ▰ Armour Type: Body armor ▰ Inventory Information: Heavy | Set ▰ Armour Weight: 85Lbs ▰ Description: Form fitting samurai armor, front and back, complete with shoulder guards, it is also black with blue trim • Stat increase +2 agility • elemental affinity Wind ▰ Ability Summary:
Chain undershirt [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank - | Class [ Element ]| Cost [ - ] The armor comes complete with a chain undershirt that treats the exposed parts of her arms and body, down to her hips are protected by medium armor. form fitting [ Japanese Technique Name ] | Rank X | Class [ Element ]| Cost [ Spritual/Complex/Simple ] This armor is finely built and much less cumbersome and bulky than it might appear, this allows her to be able to wear loose robes and/or cloaks overtop over her armor and hide the majority of its bulk, needing someone of equal body rank to casually perceive the armor, although a few posts of studying her will make it apparent. She can remove the shoulder guards and her front and side armoured flaps to make the armor worn only detectable upon search or any reason they could see through the clothes or physical contact, although lowers all areas affected a armor value down to medium
▰ Character: Hameline the kamaitachi (Hasakis ninja pet) ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Weapon Name: Squall Reaper ▰ Weapon Type: A horrendously large a scythe ▰ Weapon Size: The snath of the weapon is an extremely durable and resistant wood that has been treated and is 39 feet in Length, the blade is 15ft from base to tip, width would be well over three feet at widest points I dare not estimate thickness. ▰ Inventory Information: Large ▰ Weapon Weight: like a ton and a quarter, probably more ▰ Elemental Affinity: [ Wind!! ] • stat increase : +2 strength. ▰ Description: please ignore the switch forms ▰ Ability Summary: Silence in the wind [ ] | Rank X | Passive[ Wind ]| Cost [ Complex ] When riding wind Jutsu, manifesting wind techniques Hamline can also pay the cost of this technique for no additional activation and can wreathe the weapon with wind release chakra, this causes its form to be concealed within the winds making it benefit from “Ride the wind” technique and the wind sickle weasel TA. When this Ability is active the billowing winds from the surrounding chakra hide the weapons location and as a result reduces the opponents agility to dodge the attack by 1 when used from ranks E - C and + 2 from onward of the technique used.X
Reap them like wheat [ ] | Rank X | Augment [ Element ]| Cost [ Simple ] Due to the immense size and weight of this weapon and the sheer speed it is handled with despite that fact allows that with a little extra effort the user can easily slash through most things with terrifying efficiency The attacks from this weapon treats barrier and defensive techniques as one rank lower. This is an augment and requires the user to pay for its activation when making an attack and lasts 3 posts with a E-rank upkeep in chakra. The activation cost is equal to the same as the rank of technique it is used with
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