*Niji mōfu: {Rainbow Blanket} - there is a lot going on here 1. See in color / other spectrums - OK!
2. "The eye is capable of processing the trajectory of oncoming projectiles and attacks. it allows the user even faster reaction times beyond the average individual. The eye shows exactly where an attack will land, and when at what angle while also giving the user increased acuity for their own techniques". - mimicking bloodlines - Not OK
3. By paying an [X]-amount of chakra the user can gain an equivocal amount of [Agility] or [Speed] but only for that post. - Please clarify this in context to our current systems. i.e how much does this give.
*Niji kiseki: {Rainbow Trajectory} -
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*Opponents have to be allowed to kai out previous; normal kai'ing rules
Niji Senkō : {Rainbow Glint} Rank - [D] Description: Rainbow glint allows any particular surface if matching the color of a pre-existing Hojo ink to be treated as that particular ink surface for means of transportation if its within the users vision. Thus the user can expend a use of Shunsin or Kawarimi when making eye contact with said particular color to teleport and hide themselves inside of it using [Tōsō inku: Getaway Ink] assuming the surface is accommodating.
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Indefensible - It shouldn't work based off of someone's person: their clothing etc
▰ Name of Mechanism: Ikakugan {Written as Devil Squid Eye} ▰ Type of Mechanism: Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Legendary ▰ Mechanism's Rank: S+ Monokuro mōfu: {Monochrome Blanket} Monokuro kiseki: {Monochrome Trajectory} Monokuro Senkō : {Monochrome Glint} Monokuro Shashin : {Monochrome Photo}
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The overall design of this item could create an issue of more players wanting to make custom doujutsu. The trajectory technique suggests an increase over time with tier strength, alternating a non-technology component. We've decided to deny this entire technology piece.
▰ Kara & Marī {Cala & Marie - joke being Calamari}
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- Are you paying against something that is being used against you? Explain yo' self.
▰ Haru keshiki {Spring View} Nijinagare: {Rainbow Flow}
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( Soap Bubble Ninjutsu [ Shabondama no Ninjutsu ] | Rank S) - is this a custom? Can you explain how the augment works in function? How do they augment his jutsu? How is this augmenting the base technique (Rank and power) (I probably asked the same question 3 times but yeah.)
▰ Name of Mechanism: T-Series: SQ-1B : a.k.a Squibs - Rank scaling issue - We've decided to implement similar scaling on technology as which has been implemented on mechanism crafting. Please pick a 3 scale. Any three.
Squibble Sacrifice
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Description: A set number of summoned squibs will all charge at a target location and self-destruct. This is far from spectacular with a few squibs but potentially devastating with multiple. This technique ignores any opposing [Overwhelming] tag it comes into contact with but as a caveat Toso cannot summon any further squibs for the day if the total amount of squibs sacrificed has reached 320.
*Please avoid negating other opponent's overwhelming.
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Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2021 11:17 pm
▰ Character: Toso ▰ Link to profile: ▰ Name of Mechanism: T-Series: SQ-1B : a.k.a Squibs ▰ Type of Mechanism: Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Advanced ▰ Mechanism's Rank: [E] ▰ Mechanism Description: Squibs start out as small cylindrical balls no bigger than a fist. After a Squib is thrown a jolt of chakra causes it to activate. It then becomes the iconic Squib where it floats around defying the local gravity. Squibs aren't very useful for much in combat but are capable little fellas when it comes to chores and doing things. Strong enough to move mundane objects such as broom etc despite their size. Squibs have the same range of movement a person's hands would have. It's uncertain how many Squibs Toso has in his possession but he uses them to do menial tasks. Like filing etc. They have a built-in voice recorder which lets them record sounds and play them back and a communicator which lets them transfer messages from other squibs to one another. All in all their just cute little janitors, custodians, and the like. It's only when a mass of squibs get together do they become a terrifying unit.
Squibble Squad: Rank - [E +1 Per Every Doubled Squib] i.e E is 1:Squib D: 2 Squibs C: 4 Squibs B: 8 Squibs A: 16 Squibs S: 32 Squibs S+: 64 Squibs Description: Activating any number of squibs costs [5] Chakra Per Squib. After the Squib is self-sustaining. Squibs are destroyed with a simple E-rank amount of chakra but destroying them all in a massive unit will prove difficult requiring stronger attacks. Squibs in massive groupings are not unlike ants. Not particularly strong alone but with their combined strength can destroy mountain ranges. Squibs, however, deactivate as soon as their task is fulfilled. Typically squibs are given a task in which they do and then after vanish if not self destruct into a tiny harmless spark. At their worst, they can assume shapes together, such as a fist before punching something. Toso typically dispatches Squibs from his sleeves or will splay them between his fingers like tiny smoke pellets before throwing them out when not many are necessary.
Squibble Stronghold: Rank + 32 Squibs Description: Squibs serving an additional function of essentially being street patrolmen have a unique feature in where if a criminal is detected they will inherently alert others of themselves in the vicinity they will then coordinate and form a cage around the target after interlinking with one another. They then shutdown, harden, and turn a dark bronze. The cage is then considered a S+ type of defense making it difficult to break with physical attacks but is still susceptible to ninjutsu and other methods that would allow someone to slip through them. Although most ninjustu will tend to backfire on the user inside considering the small amount of space they have.
Squibble Sacrifice: Rank [X] + X Squibs Description: A set number of summoned squibs will all charge at a target location and self-destruct. This is far from spectacular with a few squibs but potentially devastating with multiple. This technique ignores any opposing [Overwhelming] tag it comes into contact with but as a caveat Toso cannot summon any further squibs for the day if the total amount of squibs sacrificed has reached 320.
▰ Character: Toso ▰ Link to profile: ▰ Name of Mechanism: Nijiburōchi {Rainbroach} ▰ Type of Mechanism: Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Advanced ▰ Mechanism's Rank: [C] ▰ Mechanism Description: A golden squid broach which tends to change color. Inside is an internal speaker designed to pick up the users voice and react in accordance with designated functions.
Niji Fūkaku! : {Rainbow Style!} Rank - [D] Description: A seal located in the brooch when activated via voice commands allows Toso to perform a change of attire into any attire he happens to have contained in the Master Celestial Artists Armory in a flash. This is signified by the brooch glowing in a rainbow fashion. The seal allows for immediate arming and disarming of ones own armors, tech, weapons, etc for a chakra cost expanding the effectiveness of the Master Celestial Artists Armory. Arming and disarming weapons will not consume an activation, but changing out armors does. Voice commands are particular to the kage's diction but sometimes are rather out there.
Niji Kyōshin! : {Rainbow Resonance!} Rank - [E-S+] Description: A simple button pressed and essentially the wearer's voice is projected in such a manner that its amplified several times over. Essentially with enough chakra the users voice can be heard through and entire thread at S+ the entire sub-thread. Needless to say close proximity to this device when speaking in such a manner is subject to cause deafness starting at B-rank and resulting in shock-waves from A-rank onward from close proximity.
Niji Linku! : {Rainbow Link!} Rank - [Null] Nijiburōchi is linked to the Ikkakugan allowing it to use its features without vocal requirement although the vocal requirements are far more fun.
▰ Character: Toso ▰ Link to profile: ▰ Name of Mechanism: Rainbowomb ▰ Type of Mechanism: Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Advanced ▰ Mechanism's Rank: B ▰ Mechanism Description: Description: A triangular device with an internal storage meant for storing liquids. The sensory arrays located on its side trigger an explosive mechanism causing the device to explode spreading the liquid inside copiously. Essentially allowing even the mundane ninja to use Hojo ink with enough chakra dedicated to activating it.
Nijibūmu! : {Rainboom!} Rank - [ B ] / Cost: [Blend] or [Nothing If filled with something else] Description: Packed inside of these little explosive devices are Hojo ink. They explode with the same force as a B-rank explosive tag. When any of its points come into contact with a surface it explodes essentially covering said surface in ink. It, however, doesn't cause any significant damages to sturdy fortifications. One of these taken head-on an opponent will suffer a full Tier-3 application of Hojo ink all at once. So they're definitely not to be underestimated. Must be handled delicately by anyone aside from the Hojo who filled it with their ink. It takes the Blend cost to reactivate the inert ink as a safety precaution but once its made live its a hazard. Will detonate on the following post if it isn't thrown by then. They may be filled with other liquids but this is typically not the intent.
Nijibramu! : {Rainblam!} Rank - [ B ] / Cost: [Blend] or [Nothing If filled with something else] Description: Packed inside of these little explosive devices are Hojo ink. They explode with the same force as a B-rank explosive tag. When any of its points come into contact with a surface it explodes essentially covering said surface in ink. This alternative method of use is setting it on a timer thus allowing it to detonate after an [X]-amount of posts pass. A safer alternative to its contact explosion.
Nijislammu! : {Rainslam!} Rank - [ B ] / Cost: [Blend] or [Nothing If filled with something else] Description: Packed inside of these little explosive devices are Hojo ink. They explode with the same force as a B-rank explosive tag. When any of its points come into contact with a surface it explodes essentially covering said surface in ink. The last alternative method of use is to throw it into without anything inside. Thusly its much like that of an explosive tag in every sense aside concussive force pushes targets away from blowback enough to get several feet of distance.
▰ Character: Toso ▰ Link to profile: ▰ Name of Mechanism: T-Series: SQ-1B : a.k.a Squibs ▰ Type of Mechanism: Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Advanced ▰ Mechanism's Rank: [E] ▰ Mechanism Description: Squibs start out as small cylindrical balls no bigger than a fist. After a Squib is thrown a jolt of chakra causes it to activate. It then becomes the iconic Squib where it floats around defying the local gravity. Squibs aren't very useful for much in combat but are capable little fellas when it comes to chores and doing things. Strong enough to move mundane objects such as broom etc despite their size. Squibs have the same range of movement a person's hands would have. It's uncertain how many Squibs Toso has in his possession but he uses them to do menial tasks. Like filing etc. They have a built-in voice recorder which lets them record sounds and play them back and a communicator which lets them transfer messages from other squibs to one another. All in all their just cute little janitors, custodians, and the like. It's only when a mass of squibs get together do they become a terrifying unit.
Squibble Squad: Rank - [E +1 Per Every Doubled Squib] i.e E is 1:Squib D: 2 Squibs C: 4 Squibs B: 8 Squibs A: 16 Squibs S: 32 Squibs S+: 64 Squibs Description: Activating any number of squibs costs [5] Chakra Per Squib. After the Squib is self-sustaining. Squibs are destroyed with a simple E-rank amount of chakra but destroying them all in a massive unit will prove difficult requiring stronger attacks. Squibs in massive groupings are not unlike ants. Not particularly strong alone but with their combined strength can destroy mountain ranges. Squibs, however, deactivate as soon as their task is fulfilled. Typically squibs are given a task in which they do and then after vanish if not self destruct into a tiny harmless spark. At their worst, they can assume shapes together, such as a fist before punching something. Toso typically dispatches Squibs from his sleeves or will splay them between his fingers like tiny smoke pellets before throwing them out when not many are necessary.
Squibble Stronghold: Rank + 32 Squibs Description: Squibs serving an additional function of essentially being street patrolmen have a unique feature in where if a criminal is detected they will inherently alert others of themselves in the vicinity they will then coordinate and form a cage around the target after interlinking with one another. They then shutdown, harden, and turn a dark bronze. The cage is then considered a S+ type of defense making it difficult to break with physical attacks but is still susceptible to ninjutsu and other methods that would allow someone to slip through them. Although most ninjustu will tend to backfire on the user inside considering the small amount of space they have.
Squibble Sacrifice: Rank [X] + X Squibs Description: A set number of summoned squibs will all charge at a target location and self-destruct. This is far from spectacular with a few squibs but potentially devastating with multiple. This technique ignores any opposing [Overwhelming] tag it comes into contact with but as a caveat Toso cannot summon any further squibs for the day if the total amount of squibs sacrificed has reached 320.
▰ Character: Toso ▰ Link to profile: ▰ Name of Mechanism: Nijiburōchi {Rainbroach} ▰ Type of Mechanism: Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Advanced ▰ Mechanism's Rank: [C] ▰ Mechanism Description: A golden squid broach which tends to change color. Inside is an internal speaker designed to pick up the users voice and react in accordance with designated functions.
Niji Fūkaku! : {Rainbow Style!} Rank - [D] Description: A seal located in the brooch when activated via voice commands allows Toso to perform a change of attire into any attire he happens to have contained in the Master Celestial Artists Armory in a flash. This is signified by the brooch glowing in a rainbow fashion. The seal allows for immediate arming and disarming of ones own armors, tech, weapons, etc for a chakra cost expanding the effectiveness of the Master Celestial Artists Armory. Arming and disarming weapons will not consume an activation, but changing out armors does. Voice commands are particular to the kage's diction but sometimes are rather out there.
Niji Kyōshin! : {Rainbow Resonance!} Rank - [E-S+] Description: A simple button pressed and essentially the wearer's voice is projected in such a manner that its amplified several times over. Essentially with enough chakra the users voice can be heard through and entire thread at S+ the entire sub-thread. Needless to say close proximity to this device when speaking in such a manner is subject to cause deafness starting at B-rank and resulting in shock-waves from A-rank onward from close proximity.
Niji Linku! : {Rainbow Link!} Rank - [Null] Nijiburōchi is linked to the Ikkakugan allowing it to use its features without vocal requirement although the vocal requirements are far more fun.
▰ Character: Toso ▰ Link to profile: ▰ Name of Mechanism: Rainbowomb ▰ Type of Mechanism: Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Advanced ▰ Mechanism's Rank: B ▰ Mechanism Description: Description: A triangular device with an internal storage meant for storing liquids. The sensory arrays located on its side trigger an explosive mechanism causing the device to explode spreading the liquid inside copiously. Essentially allowing even the mundane ninja to use Hojo ink with enough chakra dedicated to activating it.
Nijibūmu! : {Rainboom!} Rank - [ B ] / Cost: [Blend] or [Nothing If filled with something else] Description: Packed inside of these little explosive devices are Hojo ink. They explode with the same force as a B-rank explosive tag. When any of its points come into contact with a surface it explodes essentially covering said surface in ink. It, however, doesn't cause any significant damages to sturdy fortifications. One of these taken head-on an opponent will suffer a full Tier-3 application of Hojo ink all at once. So they're definitely not to be underestimated. Must be handled delicately by anyone aside from the Hojo who filled it with their ink. It takes the Blend cost to reactivate the inert ink as a safety precaution but once its made live its a hazard. Will detonate on the following post if it isn't thrown by then. They may be filled with other liquids but this is typically not the intent.
Nijibramu! : {Rainblam!} Rank - [ B ] / Cost: [Blend] or [Nothing If filled with something else] Description: Packed inside of these little explosive devices are Hojo ink. They explode with the same force as a B-rank explosive tag. When any of its points come into contact with a surface it explodes essentially covering said surface in ink. This alternative method of use is setting it on a timer thus allowing it to detonate after an [X]-amount of posts pass. A safer alternative to its contact explosion.
Nijislammu! : {Rainslam!} Rank - [ B ] / Cost: [Blend] or [Nothing If filled with something else] Description: Packed inside of these little explosive devices are Hojo ink. They explode with the same force as a B-rank explosive tag. When any of its points come into contact with a surface it explodes essentially covering said surface in ink. The last alternative method of use is to throw it into without anything inside. Thusly its much like that of an explosive tag in every sense aside concussive force pushes targets away from blowback enough to get several feet of distance.
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Name of Mechanism: T-Series: SQ-1B : a.k.a Squibs ▰ Type of Mechanism: Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Advanced ▰ Mechanism's Rank: [E]
- Rank scaling issue - We've decided to implement similar scaling on technology as which has been implemented on mechanism crafting.
Now that my head is on straight let me reword this without a bunch of hallaballoo. You can scale this among any three ranks should you choose to.
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Squibble Sacrifice: Rank [X] + X Squibs Description: A set number of summoned squibs will all charge at a target location and self-destruct. This is far from spectacular with a few squibs but potentially devastating with multiple. This technique ignores any opposing [Overwhelming] tag it comes into contact with but as a caveat Toso cannot summon any further squibs for the day if the total amount of squibs sacrificed has reached 320.
Please avoid negating other opponent's overwhelming.
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▰ Name of Mechanism: Nijiburōchi {Rainbroach}: Niji Fūkaku! : {Rainbow Style!} Rank - [D] Description: A seal located in the brooch when activated via voice commands allows Toso to perform a change of attire into any attire he happens to have contained in the Master Celestial Artists Armory in a flash. This is signified by the brooch glowing in a rainbow fashion. The seal allows for immediate arming and disarming of ones own armors, tech, weapons, etc for a chakra cost expanding the effectiveness of the Master Celestial Artists Armory. Arming and disarming weapons will not consume an activation, but changing out armors does. Voice commands are particular to the kage's diction but sometimes are rather out there.
Please give this ability an activation cost and it's in the clear.
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Niji Kyōshin! : {Rainbow Resonance!} Rank - [E-S+] Description: A simple button pressed and essentially the wearer's voice is projected in such a manner that its amplified several times over. Essentially with enough chakra the users voice can be heard through and entire thread at S+ the entire sub-thread. Needless to say close proximity to this device when speaking in such a manner is subject to cause deafness starting at B-rank and resulting in shock-waves from A-rank onward from close proximity.
Pick one status effect for the whole ability please. Deafness was recommended.
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Niji Linku! : {Rainbow Link!} Rank - [Null] Nijiburōchi is linked to the Ikkakugan allowing it to use its features without vocal requirement although the vocal requirements are far more fun.
It's attached to the Ikkakugan we can fully address this one once the parent custom is adjusted.
▰ Name of Mechanism: Rainbowomb * Ghost suggests name change Is also approved.
** Sorry about the jumbled responses in my previous post. I basically slapped my notes down off a disorganized notepad. Let me know if I left any weird comments or something doesn't make sense.
Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2021 4:34 am
Notable Changes: •Clarity provided for Rainbow Blanket. •Rainbow Trajectory changed entirely as truly the whole pin thing was an overall half-hearted creation on my part. •Clarified Niji Senko •Ikakugan(Devil Squid Eye) For simplicity sake we'll go with an expansion of an already existing ocular mechanism to such a degree could lean into a full fledged artificial Doujutsu and that being somethin we don't want so shall it be tabled with only the first iteration to remain. La-Z-Bo1 replaces it. •Assuming the rest of customs are fine with the minor changes made
I'll clarify Spring view and Kara Marie here.
•Kara Marie is essentially a device that projects an aura around whose wearing it. Menacing i.e kinda like the Overwhelming presence or Irrelevant. Basically it could be compared to a justu effecting a person chakra sense because it would make a sensor see an inflated chakra number. The aura more or less intense depending on which one is used and a body rank difference. Only unlike a genjutsu or presence it doesn't do anything particularly mechanically aside from instilling an oppressive or unimpressive aura.
•Soap Bubble Ninjutsu [ Shabondama no Ninjutsu ] is in the suiton list. It requires a pipe. Spring view is the pipe. Spring view augments the bubbles made by Soap Bubbles blown out of the pipe to be hallucinogetic. The severity of the hallucinogetic is paid when making the bubbles with Soap Bubble Ninjustu. Nijinagare basically allows the bubbles to be shaped following the Ink-well formation and Choujuu Giga guidelines for the cost relative.
▰ Character: Toso ▰ Link to profile:lunk ▰ Name of Mechanism: Ikakugan {Written as Menacing Squid Eye} ▰ Type of Mechanism: Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Legendary ▰ Mechanism's Rank: E-S+ ▰ Mechanism Description: Occular Implants, inspired by Doujutsu users but not truly a Doujutsu. Toso realizing he has been unable to see in color for so long came to the realization that he could simply use technology to remedy this birth defect. As such when the Ikakugan is in use it allows Toso to finally see in colors like the typical eye among other unique features. Activated via chakra like most Doujutsu. The Ikakugan requires [15] Chakra to activate and from then on persists so long as the user sees fit. Typically it changes colors depending on its current spectrum matching said spectrum.
Ability Summary: Niji mōfu: {Rainbow Blanket} Rank - [Null] / [X] Description: When Activated the Ikakugan grants the user access to the RGB color spectrum. It also allows them to toy with said spectrum. Thus granting them the ability to see in Infrared, Nightvision, Ultraviolet, X-ray, and even see radio waves. Along with mundane features like binocular vision. Additionally, there are two more spectrums. The chakra spectrum and the physical spectrum. The physical spectrum tunes out the ability to see any artificial manifestations made with chakra as anything other than a blacked-out form and shape. The chakra spectrum does the opposite where anything physical is blacked out while accentuating anything made of chakra. This, however, does not function like the other types of Doujutsu which can see internal chakra. Only external ambient chakra. Essentially they are spectrums which function as highlighters. Omitting the opposing spectrum from vision by darkening them and simplifying them to their base shapes. An excellent method for spotting clones as they appear highlighted on the chakra spectrum when a real body would appear on the physical spectrum. Despite this though its limitations are still connected to the user's sensory nervous system making it unable to discern Genjutsu any better than the actual user would naturally. The eye is capable of processing the trajectory of oncoming projectiles and attacks. While its no Sharingan, it allows the user even faster reaction times beyond the average individual. The eye shows exactly where an attack will land, and when at what angle while also giving the user increased acuity for their own techniques for clarity I can errata this is a bit, unlike the sharingan it doesn't give a person insight nor is it as precise. It does calculations essentially. So for example a person who throws a kunai the eye will know where it will go when thrown based on speed velocity and flight path, if it hits a wall and bounces where it will mathematically land. The distance betwen person A and person B how long it would take on average to get from point A to point B." By paying an [X]-amount of chakra the user can gain an equivocal amount of [Agility] or [Speed] but only for that post. Clarity: Essentially the same scaling amounts that concentration provides per rank e=1 stat 2=2 etc. Although to make this clear in 'why not just use concentration' etc is that this is reactive meaning once the Ikakugan is on its simply added on in cost to do so, otherwise it would less of a feature and more of a glorified concentration method. I'm not married to the concept though. Just thought it mechanically neat that ones reflexes are enhanced based on calculations instead of insight and inherent reflex. Of course calculations instead of insight is susceptible to only what a brain can process quick enough.
Niji kiseki: {Rainbow Trajectory} Rank -[Rank of Technique Redirecting] Description: With a glint coming from one of the two Ikakugan the slant in the eye will turn sideways and a locking sound clicks. This is an indication of the mechanism being activated. This mechanism adds enhanced malleability to Toso's chakra when molding specifically projectile ink techniques. After a technique is used, the opposite eye then turns and performs the same the moment the technique is released. From that point on, any technique that the opposite eye has clear sight of will change its trajectory a number of times equal to how many times the opposite eye is clicked, the amount of clicks is determined before release. In doing so the second part of the technique triggers one of the eyes to reset. In a sense there is always one [mold eye] and one [manipulate eye]. What makes this a tricky thing to deal with is even after, if there are remnants of that technique essentially where the technique landed it can be used as the focal point using the remnants of the technique to produce the same technique again. Of course if this is the case and it wasn't redirected live the technique is treated as 1-rank weaker while still imposing its original cost.
Niji Senkō : {Rainbow Glint} Rank - [D] Description: Rainbow glint allows any particular surface if matching the color of a pre-existing Hojo ink to be treated as that particular ink surface for means of transportation if its within the users vision. Thus the user can expend a use of Shunsin or Kawarimi when making eye contact with said particular color to teleport and hide themselves inside of it using [Tōsō inku: Getaway Ink] assuming the surface is accommodating.Particularly limited to surfaces,puddles, etc.A persons clothing or person wouldn't be very accommodating in fitting a person inside but clarified.
Niji Shashin : {Rainbow Photo} Rank - [E] The Ikakugan is capable of recording everything it sees on the three dimensional spectrum. A minuscule amount of chakra can then be used to project a three dimensional recreation of what the eyes recorded along with optional audio albeit its only the color of users chakra manifestation. These recordings are then often preserved by Toso in actual albums. Useful for espionage but also useful for keeping fond memories and perhaps a small distraction.
▰ Character: Toso ▰ Link to profile:lunk ▰ Name of Mechanism:La-Z-Bo1 ▰ Type of Mechanism: Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Legendary ▰ Mechanism's Rank: E-S+ ▰ Mechanism Description: Since getting his Ikakugan in order The La-Z-Bo1 was made as a testament to Toso's recent lackadaisical nihilism. The La-Z-Bo1 is essentially a highly advanced wheel chair that has the capability of hovering and flying. It's features designed to capitalize on using as little effort as possible for whomever is seated in it. [Battery Capacity: 2000]
Ability Summary: Riben-sei: {Convenience} Rank - [X] Description: Having tentacle like limbs that pop out its back to grab things and what seems to be a massive storage compartment make it live up to the name. Fuuin links the compartment to Toso's scholar storage capacities and Master Celestial Artists Armory. As the name implies items and techniques can be reproduced from the chair as a focal point. Connected to the Ikakugan via its Link connection the chair can reposition itself where ever and whenever needed. Seeing as its connected to Toso as-well via fuuin can vanish and be summoned needed via the enclosing and opening techniques. BUT...really the most powerful thing about it is because of its link Toso only has to look at something for the chair to attempt to get it for him and bring it to him.
Sainamu: {Suffering} Rank - [X] Description: The chair isn't all bells and whistles, it can prove to be quite a frightening thing all its own. When someone other than Toso or someone with clearance sits in the chair or comes into contact with it in such a way several synthetic chords and straps emerge from the chair as they are immediately restrained. It is then later made apparent that Toso's sadistic side was at play when creating the chair as several torture implements appear from whirling saws, to eye clasps, the chair being conductive etc. Rank determines the strength of the restraints and the unfortunate is considered grappled on all fronts.
Bunseki-sha : {Analyst} Rank - [Target Body Rank] Description: A remnant from Toso's earlier creation [Looking Glass] the La-Z-Bo1 is able to produce interactive chakra screens that hover in front which can then be used for basic things such as looking up information or watching tv etc. It can create, produce, and keep track of records and contains old records from Arashi among some newer records from Ame that he was allowed viewership. A glorified scanner it can reproduce information on a subject that the Ikakugan has seen displaying their chakra, stamina, and stat levels. The system can be set in such a way that a sensory or jamming technique that Toso knows can essentially function indefinitely to the capacity of the battery turning said techniques to upkeeps if they aren't already upkeeps and maintaining multiple upkeep costs for said techniques and documenting the information simultaneously until it runs out of energy.
Hakudatsu : {Deprivation} Rank - [X] Description: A reactive barrier that can surround the chair when the sitter is attacked. Can be turned on manually if desired but shuts out all sound sight and senses to the world outside of it. All attacks made against the barrier automatically drain the battery to oppose while the individual inside is essentially enveloped in a personalized white shell. Made to counteract all forms of tampering including fuuin among all else. This function was initially made for Toso to be alone with his thoughts when the maddening spurs of his religion rears itself or when quite literally he is in no mood to engage with anything or anyone.
▰ Character: Toso ▰ Link to profile:lunk ▰ Name of Mechanism: Kara & Marī {Cala & Marie - joke being Calamari} ▰ Type of Mechanism: Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Special ▰ Mechanism's Rank: S+ ▰ Mechanism Description: Twin Cufflinks which are worn on the left and right cuffs respectively. While they aren't particularly noted worthy the gear like intricacies in their internal design shows its making required the patience of a true craftsman. Each one activated when pushed or via the Ikakugan.
Ability Summary: Sora no kararorī : {Empty Calories {Joke being the Kara in Calories is written as Kara meaning the Cala in Calamari} Rank - [E / Upkeep] Description: The left cuff when activated continuously emanates an aura of..well nothing. The wearer isn't invisible by any stretch of the matter but individuals who see them simply find that their presence is well 'lacking'. To enemies, the user is perceived as either weak or 'not worth the time'. All actions the user takes even if they seem powerful at first glance seem inconsequential. In battles involving multiple targets, the user is often targeted last. When making attacks or the like, the user is believed to be non-hostile. Even if they're taking hostile actions. This comes across at times as eerie or an unpleasant feeling. The feeling is compared to noticing a stalker who's been following you for some time or to some people a person with a sadistic streak that carries no intent behind their actions. Those under the influence know very well the user is on the premises if looking directly at them but can't make heads or tails of their intentions. If by avoiding eye contact after a while they'll typically forget the user was just there assuming there are other things to pay attention to. Although not necessarily true all the time for an extremely vigilant individual. (Purely roleplay flavor)
Maricious Akui: {Malicious Intent {Joke being Maricious is engrish for malicious and adding the mari from Calamari Akui also means malicious or malicious intent so its pun on redundancy essentially Maricious Maliciousness} Rank - [E-X / Upkeep] Description: The right cuff when activated continuously emanates an aura of maliciousness. The wearer isn't invisible by any stretch of the matter but individuals who see them simply find that their presence intimidating even when doing nothing. To enemies, the user is perceived as either incredibly strong or 'should seek backup'. All actions the user takes even if they seem weak at first glance seem to be part of a bigger plot. In battles involving multiple targets, the user is often targeted first as a priority threat. When making evasions or the like, the user is believed to be always-hostile. Even if they're taking defensive actions. This comes across at times as a uncomfortable or a paranoid feeling. The feeling is compared to knowing your mom is coming and you said you were turning in for the night and you don't have enough time to hide your playthings and you know she's going to ground you or in its most extreme case killing intent. Those under the influence know very well the user is on the premises and if anything believes them to be fit to murder any second. Sensors will believe the users chakra levels have increased 5x their natural limits and the users chakra manifestation will assist in this bluff also increasing and causing slight tremoring. Body-ranks equal to the users feel the user is holding back, one-rank less and they feel as if they'll be attacked any moment at all times, two-ranks less and they will often be incredibly frightened or shaken of what's to come, and at three-ranks less or more the individual will believe that they may be killed if they so much as lift a finger. By continuously paying an opponents body-rank as upkeep the user can apply the strongest feeling, that being an overwhelming killing intent. The intimidation's level can be adjusted as needed. But is essentially a glorified 'bluff' and to those who are already within their convictions to die for a cause or have made their peace, even the strongest effect will often prove ineffective (Purely roleplay flavor)
Network Linked Rank - [Null] Kara and Mari are linked to the Ikakugan and may be activated or deactivated through it as opposed to manually activating through the sleeves.
▰ Character: Toso ▰ Link to profile:lunk ▰ Name of Mechanism: Haru keshiki {Spring View} ▰ Type of Mechanism: Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Special ▰ Mechanism's Rank: S+ ▰ Mechanism Description: The name was decided upon via the famous line spoken by the legendary Goemon Ishikawa told in kabuki fables where he is seen smoking a large silver pipe. "The spring view is worth a thousand gold pieces, or so they say, but 'tis too little, too little. These eyes of Goemon rate it worth ten thousand!". Haru keshiki isn't designed to smoke hair tobacco like it's predecessors however, instead it functions as a bubble pipe for Soap Bubble Ninjutsu allowing more fine manipulations of the Bubble formations, it does this by using special mechanisms where when a button is pressed it determines the future functions. Not very useful when used as a weapon.
Ability Summary: Harunoniji: {Spring Rainbow} Rank - [Augment] Description: When using any [Shabondama] technique when a soap bubble bursts with ten or twenty feet of an opponent the bubble will induce visual hallucinations and cause an individual's perceptions of colors to start becoming jumbled causing them to see things in a rainbow-like a gradient similar to soap bubbles. The intensity of the effect is reliant on the amount of chakra used to augment the bubbles. An appropriate Kai is required to snap out of the ongoing effect. E- Rainbow Gradient Applied to Vision D- Rainbow colored Figments Appear C- Rainbow colored Figments of the target appear B- Rainbow colored Figments of the user appear making discerning the true target difficult without sensory assistance. Anywhere from 3-10 figments may appear. A- Rainbow colored Figments of the user taking actions appear making discerning the true target difficult without sensory assistance and increasing paranoia. Anywhere from 10-20 figments may appear. S- Severe visual hallucinations occur. Several hundreds of Figments may start to appear. This essentially starts resulting in a psychedelic level of hallucinogenic drug intake. Fears may manifest, anxiety may increase, conversations with people who aren't real may occur. Entirely decided by the target.
Nijinagare: {Rainbow Flow} Rank - [Augment] Description: When using any [Shabondama] technique allows manipulation of the size and shape of the bubbles produced. Thus allowing for much more intricate designs. These sizes follow the same progression and uniqueness as [Ink-well Formation] and [Choujuu Giga] when it comes to Rank, Number, Size, and Power. However, like [Shabondama] techniques will last until popped or dismissed.
Nijikemuri: {Rainbow Smoke} Rank - [X] Alternatively to [Nijinagare] Toso can actually produce smoke from the pipe. After inhaling the smoke exhaled is of a multi-colored nature. This smoke induces the same effects as [Nijinagare] but can be slightly lead and manipulated. The smoke unlike its bubbly counterpart however, lingers. It will continue to linger for [1] post even after it has initially been blown away. Thus making it an effective zoning deterrent.
▰ Name of Mechanism: Clay Converter ▰ Type of Mechanism: Regular ▰ Mechanism's Rank: B-S ▰ Mechanism Description: Clay Converter is a mechanism made especially for Sumika’s human puppet, Sixty Seven. It modifies the original Sixty Seven’s chakra mouths with a sealing structure, allowing the puppet to turn the explosions from hostile clay, Ignition Release, explosive tags, and even weapons into a clay creation of a comparable rank to the technique that was used.
▰ Name of Mechanism: Tactical Tongue Tool ▰ Type of Mechanism: Regular ▰ Mechanism's Rank: B-S ▰ Mechanism Description: A somewhat disgusting mechanism, at least aesthetically, the Tactical Tongue Tool is capable of grappling, stabbing, lifting, and slapping anything within 40ft of Sixty Seven. In addition Sumika may channel raiton or suiton chakra to shocking or slippery effect. Finally, if removed forcefully, the tongue detonates at the rank it was deployed at. The tool is especially useful against armor and barriers that create a confined space around their user, as it does not destroy them, but instead punches through and continues its business.
▰ Name of Mechanism: Detcord Deployment Device ▰ Type of Mechanism: Regular ▰ Mechanism's Rank: A-S+ ▰ Mechanism Description: Installed on Sixty Seven’s arms like an exposed rail, this mechanism provides for the creation of ropes of explosive clay. The ropes formed may be as long as the puppet’s current wingspan, assumed to be the puppet’s height if no other mechanisms that modify this are in play. These can then be launched from the rails in the direction of wherever the puppet’s arms are pointed.
▰ Name of Mechanism: Cranial Creeper ▰ Type of Mechanism: Regular ▰ Mechanism's Rank: C ▰ Mechanism Description: A small sound device, this mechanism applies Tier 1 Mental Stress to anyone within 40ft of the puppet, and Tier 2 Mental Stress to anyone within 20ft of the puppet via a high pitched sound. This mechanism activates for up to 4 posts at a time, and leaving the area of effect will cause the Mental Stress to immediately dissipate.
▰ Name of Mechanism: Sculpted Physique ▰ Type of Mechanism: Regular ▰ Mechanism's Rank: S+ ▰ Mechanism Description: Passively active, this technique’s rank denotes the quantity and quality of clay used, not resistance to damage. Sixty Seven’s “skin” is composed entirely of explosive clay, allowing it to mimic both the look and feel of real flesh. This mechanism is also capable of concealing externally visible mechanisms when they are not in use. While broadly this mechanism is simply a source of clay and tool of disguise, it also serves to support the function of other mechanisms in the puppet.
Hurrak
Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2021 1:16 pm
▰ Character: Yuuto, Hirotaka ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Puppet Name: Raijin Mk.I ▰ Puppet Tier: 1 ▰ Puppet Appearance:Clicky ▰ Puppet Description: A medium-large sized Puppet capable of utilizing Raiton element attacks. It will eventually be able to combine with it's brother puppets to form the Storm Deity Puppet. It is currently made from wood, and protected from the elements with a laminate coat. Mechanism Summary: Lightning Drum Ring: (unique) The Metal spheres on the ring on the puppet's back create a magnetic field that generates electricity by ionizing the molecules in the air. Raiton techniques are fired from them. Battery System: (unique) a system for storing excess electricity created by the Lightning Drum Ring. The electricity can be diverted to the Tesla Coils on the wrists of the puppet's arms for more Raiton technique fueled mayhem.
▰ Character: Yuuto, Hirotaka ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Puppet Name: Fuujin Mk.I ▰ Puppet Tier: 1 ▰ Puppet Appearance:Clicky ▰ Puppet Description: A medium sized puppet capable of utilizing Fuuton element attacks. It will eventually be able to combine with it's brother puppets to form the Storm Deity Puppet. It is currently made from wood and protected from the elements with a laminate coat. Mechanism Summary: Bags of Winds: (unique) A simple pair of sacks capable of inflating with air. The sack is located in the cheeks of the puppet, and supplies the puppet with the air pressure needed to utilize Fuuton techniques. The sacks are made of a thick, elastic material. Vacuum System: (unique)a system for sucking in and blowing out air. Used to fill the Bags of Winds, as well as to perform Fuuton techniques
▰ Character: Yuuto, Hirotaka ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Puppet Name: Suijin Mk.I ▰ Puppet Tier: 1 ▰ Puppet Appearance:Clicky ▰ Puppet Description: A large sized Puppet capable of utilizing Suiton element attacks. It will eventually be able combine with it's brother puppets to form the Storm Deity Puppet. It is currently made from wood and protected from the elements with a laminate coat. Mechanism Summary: Aqua Mantle: (unique) A Blue Cloak that flows like water. It's cool to the touch and collects condensation from the water vapor in the atmosphere to fuel the Puppet's Suiton Techniques. Hydraulic System: (unique) A storage tank for water collected by the Aqua Mantle. The tank is connected to a nozzle in the mouth of the puppet for shooting pressurized jets of water capable of cutting through steel. The Nozzle can be adjusted, allowing for greater volumes of water to be released in exchange for weakened pressure.
▰ Puppet Appearance: Clicky ▰ Puppet Description: A medium-large sized Puppet capable of utilizing Raiton element attacks. It will eventually be able to combine with it's brother puppets to form the Storm Deity Puppet. It is currently made from wood, and protected from the elements with a laminate coat. Mechanism Summary: Lightning Drum Ring: (unique) The Metal spheres on the ring on the puppet's back create a magnetic field that generates electricity by ionizing the molecules in the air. Raiton techniques are fired from them.
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** Unless this is a speciifc, singular chakra (electrical) technique then it is worth noting that the wording of this line: "Raiton techniques are fired from them" may nod to a feature granted by Arcane Puppeteer which allows the user to implement the RPC's known jutsu through a puppet. Please note that Iron sand release also uses magnetism but we are not barring creation of lesser, specific magnetic fields (i.e something that may oppose an iron sand user) at this time but I will allow this aspect if only to negate opposing fields or to directly supplement the other unique mechanism only, until another mod has any objections. You can make the effort to use fuuin later in your career to reason how you have captured elements [such as lightning] from combat or in-story situtaions.
Battery System: (unique) a system for storing excess electricity created by the Lightning Drum Ring. The electricity can be diverted to the Tesla Coils on the wrists of the puppet's arms for more Raiton technique fueled mayhem.
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** We do allow batteries! We have chakra batteries available for crafting that can power mechanisms (in this case) to save you some chakra! They're very useful. However, I don't feel comfortable in granting this particular battery because it reads as if it creates access to an entire element for your character. If you would like to instead capture opposing lightning techniques and fire them back at your enemy with some sort of "catch and release" function with some slight payment requirements that is an acceptable alternative. The coils may be lightning rods, perhaps?
Combination abilities with puppets and combining puppets are very "grey area" at this time. I don't know what benefit truly combining this puppet with another puppet would provide without a specific mechanism. I've considered concepts myself and haven't found luck yet. If the combination is descriptive flavor to modify its appearance then I'm not going to sweat it.
▰ Puppet Name: Fuujin Mk.I
▰ Puppet Tier: 1 ▰ Puppet Appearance: Clicky ▰ Puppet Description: A medium sized puppet capable of utilizing Fuuton element attacks. It will eventually be able to combine with it's brother puppets to form the Storm Deity Puppet. It is currently made from wood and protected from the elements with a laminate coat. Mechanism Summary: Bags of Winds: (unique) A simple pair of sacks capable of inflating with air. The sack is located in the cheeks of the puppet, and supplies the puppet with the air pressure needed to utilize Fuuton techniques. The sacks are made of a thick, elastic material. Vacuum System: (unique) a system for sucking in and blowing out air. Used to fill the Bags of Winds, as well as to perform Fuuton techniques
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* ** Similar issues with this puppet that we saw in Raijin concerning the use of creating access to an element without having the element/or correct discpline. In the past, we have accepted means of in-taking air on mechansims for wind bursts. Since these are unique mechansisms I also invite you to read the section about Puppet Rules and Custom Mechanisms to better understand is currently available to embellish unique mechanisms.
▰ Puppet Tier: 1 ▰ Puppet Appearance: Clicky ▰ Puppet Description: A large sized Puppet capable of utilizing Suiton element attacks. It will eventually be able combine with it's brother puppets to form the Storm Deity Puppet. It is currently made from wood and protected from the elements with a laminate coat. Mechanism Summary: Aqua Mantle: (unique) A Blue Cloak that flows like water. It's cool to the touch and collects condensation from the water vapor in the atmosphere to fuel the Puppet's Suiton Techniques.
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*I wouldn't refer what the puppet has available to them as "water techniques" because it implies they have a vast resource when it's just the other mechanism. The collection method is good to emphasize on. Does this have a chakra cost? Does this require an activation per use? How many times until this is emptied? How does this work in warm/hot environments? What if your opponent uses water? Can you pay to catch their technique if it doesn't break your technique?
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Hydraulic System: (unique) A storage tank for water collected by the Aqua Mantle. The tank is connected to a nozzle in the mouth of the puppet for shooting pressurized jets of water capable of cutting through steel. The Nozzle can be adjusted, allowing for greater volumes of water to be released in exchange for weakened pressure.
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** Similar issues with this puppet that we saw in Raijin and Fuujin concerning the use of creating access to an element without having the element/or correct discpline. I can encourage emphasizing the collection alternative? Perhaps indiciate the volume of water is being collected? How many D-ranks can this use? How many C-ranks can this use before refilling is needed? Water pressure isn't in the systems but you can work that as flavor. Do note that when reviewing status effects are class locked when it boils down to the higher Tiers of effect. You do have unique mechanisms here but you also have a limited chakra pool. I would encourage crafting unless you plan to write a whole lot a propell into the next ranks.
Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2021 3:34 pm
Hurrak
Raijin: 1. The electricity generated and stored in Raijin doesn't use chakra. It's just regular electricity. The ring acts as a capture system for the electrons that are pulled off of the molecules in the air by the magnetic field generated by the three magnets. the two mechanisms are meant to work together, so yes, the ring is meant to supply the battery with fuel. 2. The battery is a rechargeable type, So I should edit the name. It's meant for storing electricity, not Chakra. As such i intended it to be different from Chakra Batteries. It's meant to store the electrons stolen from the ionized air molecules created and captured in the Lightning Drum Ring.
Fuujin: 1. Again, I should of specified that the Puppet does not use chakra, and instead utilizes air pressure to create strong bursts of wind (and later pressurized air bullets once the puppet reaches a higher tier). turning the vacuum on, off and in reverse would require chakra consumption, but it'd be done through a chakra string connected to the system.
Suijin: 1.Yeah, it's a collection method, not actual chakra fueled techniques. Yes, the atmosphere collection does have a chakra cost, I'm just unsure of what it should be as of right now. I have no experience in these kinds of mechanics, and would more than accept any chakra cost you deem reasonable 2. Honestly it was just going to be that water jet for slicing stuff right now, or widening the valve on the nozzle to lower the pressure to let the water flow more naturally, which can be done with a chakra string. Later on when I upgrade the Puppet to higher tiers, I was going to add a modification to the mechanism to allow it to fire water bullets (and at a further upgrade rapid fire water bullets) for blunt damage rather than slicing damage.
Combining: 1. Combining is for Aesthetic purposes mostly. Combine three already weird looking puppets into a towering behemoth that's like, 15 feet tall. Combining the puppets into one also makes it easier to keep track of, rather than needing to focus on three puppets in tandem.
Edit: I'm just gonna wait until I can craft tier 3 puppets before I submit these guys again. if that's okay.
She only a Veteran rank crafter in technology currently but will be grandmaster when I get to this. ▰ Character: Hokinsha ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Name of Mechanism: Nexus tesseract ▰ Type of Mechanism: Legendary Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Legendary ▰ Mechanism's Rank: D - S+ ▰ Mechanism Description: What one can basically call a cube constructed by innumerable nano machine like things. They are very solid an capable of dismantling/restructuring/creating themselves and other things and are highly conductive and capable of interacting with chakra and solid matter alike, usable to dismantle or weaken techniques or for offensive means as well as able to use as a chakra focus point to release her techniques. The cube floats and tends to be multi segmented much like a Rubik’s cube, able to reduce to the size of a sugar cube when inactive and able to expand to much greater sizes and separate fragments from itself, it is worn as an earring when inert. Despite being sorta of metallic, this holds zero properties in common despite being hard and is considered to be more or less quasi-solid chakra when active.
Ability Name: Activation Protocol Rank: A-rank This technique turns her cube on which allows it to autonomously act much like a shadow clone, capable of taking orders through a variety of methods as well as the ability to access and react with appropriate measures. This is treated somewhat like creating a shadow clone, granting the cube a two actions to use how it pleases and the capacity to channel Hokinshas jutsu through(requiring her to pay.), able to float and move off of its own accord and targeting people through chakra, visuals, sound, heat and contact making it quite difficult to avoid. When active it’s other abilities drain a rank beneath the amount doesn’t from chakra based collisions or striking the foe and returns it to the cube as the chakra is broken down, this works even in lost collisions, meaning the opposing technique is still weakened even if it wins the collision, this is active for 8 posts or until the cube totally runs out of power, this cube is extremely hard to destroy unless one is trying to break it or god forbid a corrosive field. The cube moves with Hokinsha if she has it orbiting herself(within 5M) is treated as if it were an equipped weapon, otherwise it’s considered to be functioning separately and does not benefit as being treated as equipped(meaning if she dodged while it’s beside her, then it is a part of that dodge, should she body flicker it goes with her, if out of that range then it does not.)
Ability name: Atomic orbit Rank: A - S+ The cube when active is able to shatter apart and increase in quantity, forming hundreds of tiny cubes that orbit the user in a several rings much like the depiction of an atom, with Hokinsha being the center. For six posts up to 10, these orbiting fragments will intercede with incoming attacks an either prevent them entirely or otherwise reduce the power of the technique by the difference in power, destroyed fragments being reproduced shortly after. Physical contact with this field causes tiered trauma as it tends to grind through things that make contact. Despite not deactivating when defeated in a collision it still requires half its activation cost paid to maintain this ability.
Ability name: Particle bombardment Rank: D - S+ The cube or participles split apart or form up into a few large or many small cubes, then proceed to unleash them at high speeds after a single/multiple targets, splitting its power between them and only able to target a person once each, these cubes chase after their target for 2 posts if evaded for no cost. When these break through and defeat Nin-jutsu techniques the power and attributes of said technique are added to the attacks own, meaning it carries their status and other side affects(AoE affects absorbed make the cubes impact have a 5ft per rank of power affect from its point of contact), however in these circumstances the cube doesn’t gain any power from the collision. The projectiles tend to glow with chakra much more so than it’s other affects and the move in extremely fast, zig-zag like patterns, however are extremely accurate and powerful
Hurrak
Posted: Sun Jul 25, 2021 6:38 pm
▰ Character: Yuuto, Hirotaka ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Puppet Name: Reaver ▰ Puppet Tier: Tier 2 ▰ Puppet Appearance:Clicky ▰ Puppet Description: A Puppet made of redwood reinforced with metal, and coated in a flame resistant laminate. It has no unique mechanisms, but plenty of gimmicks. The scythe it wields is just a scythe, and has no special mechanisms in it. It's weapons are coated in a slow acting paralytic poison harvested from toads which slowly numbs the body over time. Mechanism Summary: Grappling Claw: A D-Rank Mechanism. this mechanism, located inside the forearms of the puppet, launches the hands at enemies in a rocket punch, or to grab enemies from afar. The hands are then reeled back quickly on the metal cords connected to them. The range of this attack is 15 feet. Senbon Launcher: A D-Rank mechanism. There is a senbon launcher inside the mouth of this Puppet. It can hold a total of 500 senbon, and shoots 25 at a time, for a total of 20 shots before it needs to be reloaded manually. 360° Rotor: An E-Rank Mechanism. There is a gyroscope in the waist portion of this puppet, allowing it full 360 degree rotation from the waist up. Flamethrower: An A-Rank mechanism located in the chest cavity of this puppet. it is composed of two tungsten chambers, each filled with a different chemical. Though the chemicals are inert on their own, when mixed together they create a highly pressured stream of a liquid compound that combusts when exposed to air. This particular puppet utilizes the technique by detaching it's head and aiming the exposed hole at it's opponent like a cannon. It is a one-time use mechanism that requires the chest portion of the puppet to be replaced in it's entirety in order to be used again.
Is this like a redirection mechanism? Nothing wrong with it. I'm just curious. Then this is a chakra mechanism, I think. Cool beans.
Tactical Tongue Tool
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- I like this mechanism but for a regular mechanism you can only have two abilities. I'm counting at least three. I would consider shocking and slippery as two abilities. Maybe have a slippery/explosion with removal. Or a shocking/slippery? Maybe a second mechanism?
Detcord Deployment Device
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- What is the puppet's wingspan? What is the potential reach of this whole mechanism? * Otherwise there aren't any real issues with this mechanism.
Cranial Creeper
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I am hesitant to let this pass because I don't know how other moderators feel 100% about Mental Stress on anything but genjutsu despite what we have in the guild's official elemental jutsu roster. If I get input from another mod I can give a better determining answer.
I highly recommend the safest surefire route of approval: reroll this for a custom genjutsu and let it be something you utilize with the puppet. 1) I feel that it is in your best interest to break this mechanism up with rank scaling. 's swap out C-rank for: D rank - C rank with Tier 1 and Tier 2 effects respectively. Mostly because I feel like other players won't take the distances seriously if it means they get to avoid a Tier 2 de-buff and would hate for you to waste chakra, among other things.
2) Swap out the 4 post duration with: have a duration of 2 posts maximally per rank. Techniques that wish to exceed this must have an upkeep cost of two ranks below the technique's executed rank."
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I would have to ask the choice of restricting this passive to S+ when it is an aesthetic. Does it lowkey have the power to explode? Does it have T1 sensory jamming seal of some sort implanted in it? I say T1 sensory jam because of the weirdness of sensory customs.
Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2021 4:42 pm
Prince_yureil
▰ Character: Hokinsha ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Name of Mechanism: Nexus tesseract ▰ Type of Mechanism: Legendary Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Legendary
This technology is overall denied. Its design feels like a pseudo bloodline where Dust and Iron had a baby and it became nearly indestructible. Activation protocol appears to be asking for activations which is no-go among custom jutsu therefore I cannot approve it for crafted items. It seems to still have an advantage in collisions and we can't encourage means to bend collision rules. It gets messy. At this time, I cannot allow custom items that mimic bloodlines in this fashion.
▰ Character: Hokinsha ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Name of Mechanism: Nexus tesseract ▰ Type of Mechanism: Legendary Technology ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Legendary
This technology is overall denied. Its design feels like a pseudo bloodline where Dust and Iron had a baby and it became nearly indestructible. Activation protocol appears to be asking for activations which is no-go among custom jutsu therefore I cannot approve it for crafted items. It seems to still have an advantage in collisions and we can't encourage means to bend collision rules. It gets messy. At this time, I cannot allow custom items that mimic bloodlines in this fashion.
EDIT: After chatting on VC and hearing what some of the issues with this was, ima just simplify and reapply it! I hear it was somewhat confusing so I’ll remake it and change a teeny bit of it’s fluff
Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2021 3:24 am
▰ Character: Achana Sonozaki ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Name of Mechanism: R.A.I.N. Mask MK.1 ▰ Type of Mechanism: Crafting System ▰ Tier of Mechanism: Advanced [Worker : Tier 4 (+1 Extra Ability, +1 Element)] ▰ Mechanism's Rank: B - S ▰ Mechanism's Element: Water ▰ Mechanism Description: The R.A.I.N. Mask MK.1 (Rebreather Anti-Intoxication Negation) is the first generation of anti-poison rebreathers created by Achana Sonozaki and Bloodmoon Labs to combat the stench of lowborn scum. It has a couple of useful effects to the user. The first is the ability to purify the air into a more pure O2 than one breathes naturally, eliminating the odors and stenches from the scum of the world. The other is the ability to breathe under water for a limited time, as batteries do run out eventually.
Ability: Anti-Poison Filtration Rank: B-S Cost: By Rank - From Chakra or Chakra Battery Pool Effect: Reduces the effects of Poison by filtering the air and the user's blood through a small needle connection in the cheek. Whenever the user becomes Poisoned [By Natural Poison, Gas-Based], they may reduce the Poisoned Status Effect; without an activation; by 1 Tier at B-Rank, 2 Tiers at A-Rank, and 3 Tiers at S-Rank. (Down to 0). - Since it does not remove the poison, any poison that lasts multiple posts must have the cost paid to filter it each post during it's duration, or it's full effects set in.
Ability: Water Breathing Rank: B Cost: By Rank - From Chakra or Chakra Battery Pool Effect: By spending energy from their batteries, the R.A.I.N. Mask can allow the user to breathe under water, by converting H20 into breathable O2. The user can ignore Suffocation status effect by paying the cost each post the status effect starts without consuming an activation. This only applies to Suffocation inflicted by Water/Suiton-based effects. - Once the cost isn't paid, Suffocation begins to set in, and this effect cannot be reactivated to negate it as water is now already filling the lungs.
Hurrak
I hope these aren't complex. I did my best to simplify them. In a TL;DR fashion. They don't cancel or cure anything, simply delay it in a hopes of either waiting out the duration or until a cure can be administered.
▰ Character: Kiku Fujioka ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Puppet Name: Royal Soldier Mk 2 ▰ Puppet Tier: Tier 2 ▰ Inventory Information: [ Small ] ▰ Puppet Appearance:Here ▰ Puppet Description: Royal Soldier is a close quarters puppet. Durable and sturdy Soldier is made of mostly metal Mechanism Summary: Secret Sword [Rank D-A] : A hidden blade that is stored inside the arm of Royal Soldier. The hand bends back at the wrist, allowing for the blade to be draw rather quickly. Allows basic sword attacks to be used with Royal Soldier. The blade can be launched from the puppet at the scaling of the mechanism at 5 feet per rank. By paying the cost of the technique in chakra again, for no activation, the puppet can magnetically recall the blade to attack once again. The blade can be augmented with any of Kiku's liquid based custom poisons for no cost.
ElectroField [Rank D-A]: Royal Soldier's metallic body allows for excellent electric conductivity. When this mechanism is activated, Royal Soldier is surrounded in a shortrange forcefield of electricity. Blocks in coming Ninjutsu of it's rank in potency or lower, with elemental strengths and weaknesses. Gives Tiered Paralysis when blocking Tai/Buki techniques of its rank in potency or lower.
Shining Civalry [D-A Rank]: By activating nodes along the body of Royal Soldier, the puppet's armor will begin to shine brightly and cause Tiered Blindness with Tier 1 at D-C and Tier 2 at B-A rank.
▰ Character: Kiku Fujioka ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Puppet Name: Royal Archer Mk 2 ▰ Puppet Tier: Tier 2 ▰ Inventory Information: [ Small ] ▰ Puppet Appearance:Appearance ▰ Puppet Description: Royal Archer is mostly metallic puppet that specializes in long ranged combat. With an arm mounted crossbow, Royal Archer is able to fire wooden arrows made with Senju chakra. Mechanism Summary: Rapid Fire Launcher [Rank D-A]: Royal Soldier is able to fire 2 arrows per rank applied to this mechanism when activated. These arrows, powered by Kiku's Senju Chakra, inflict 1 point of Tenketsu Rot per arrow. [Max: 10] Arrows can apply any of Kiku's liquid based poisons for no cost.
Snipe Shot: [Rank D-A]: Instead of firing a volley of arrows, Royal Archer Mk 2 will form one giant arrow by momentarily combining its arms together. This arrow is capable of inflicting [10] points of Tenketsu Rot per rank [Max: 50] This mechanism also treats armor one tier lower.
Camouflage [Rank D-A] : A chakra mechanism within Royal Archer that allows the puppet to blend into it's surroundings. Lasts for 1 [Max: 5] post per rank that the mechanism is activated at. Attacks made during this time reduce the target's Agility by 1 every two ranks (Max: -2)
▰ Character: Kiku ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Puppet Name: Crimson Dragoon ▰ Puppet Tier: Tier 3 ▰ Inventory Information: [ Medium ] ▰ Puppet Appearance: The dragon ▰ Puppet Description: A serpentine dragon puppet that Kiku has floating around her. The first puppet she ever made, Crimson Dragoon has undergone some upgrades. Mechanism Summary: Ouroboros Drive D-A: Description Crimson Dragoon as a cylinder in it's maw that fires a a blast of gold Raiton chakra in a single direction. Applies Magnetic Manipulation to anything hit by this blast, as well as anything standing within 10 feet per rank of the blast. [Max: 40] Plasma Cannon D-A: Description Nodes open up along the side of Crimson Dragoon, firing plasma orbs at [3] per rank of the mechanism. [Max: 12] These orbs can home in on a target that has been placed under the effects of Magnetic Manipulation, requiring an extra rank to evade. Kaiser Flare D-A: Description A second cylinder located within the max of Crimson Dragoon, this one fires a blast of flame. Causes Tier 1 Burns/Burning at Ranks D-C and Tier 2 Burns/Burning at Ranks B-A Judgement Reflect D-A: Nodes on the face of Crimson Dragoon can release magnetic chakra. This pulse wave defends against on coming ninjutsu at the Rank of this mechanism and below and reflects them back upon the enemy. Can be used once every [3] posts.
▰ Character: (Who will use this mechanism?) ▰ Link to profile: [x] ▰ Name of Mechanism: Decoy Launcher ▰ Type of Mechanism: Regular Puppet Mechanism ▰ Tier of Mechanism: (Crafting Only - Basic, Advanced, Special, or Legendary) ▰ Mechanism's Rank: C-S ▰ Mechanism Description: A launcher mechanism to be placed on a puppet. This launcher will deploy balloon versions of Kiku, deploying 1 per rank of the mechanism [Max: 4] These balloons can take damage up to one rank below their rank, but explode once they do, inflicting Tier 2 Burns and Tier 2 Trauma. If not destroyed by a technique, the balloons last for [3] posts before the automatically explode.
