Entry Tag: Mahogany Sunset | Unicorn | Unedited
I need a fresh start!Reason: Major instances of shading and/or maybe color being outside of the lines. Lines are not colored to match his green markings where they touch. That hair shading. (A lot of this is easiest to see on a white background.)
Edit Category: Unedited
Soquili Species: Unicorn!
Body Build: Draft
Gender: Male
Starting Stage: Adult
Concept Origin: He was a premade pony from the family event in 2011
WIP Needed? Yes pls
-- Colors & Markings -- Body: See refs! I'd like him to be put on the draft lines because he a big boi. I would like it if his markings could be smoothed out a bit and if perhaps some swirls could be added to his shoulder and his hip to give him a bit more continuity in the form of an almost blanket-like marking. (I'm thinking like an addition of a max of 2 swirls on each end of his existing back marking, plus some lil dots for continuity). Kind of curving over his shoulder and toward his tail/hip. (If this is too much, it's fine to leave off.) I do like his mottled blue but would like some of the muddiness to be cleaned up. My thought is that it could be that way because something isn't clipped?
Face: eye color: Maybe a clearer dark blue if that can be a thing? eyebrows: cleaned up, dark green is fine but need some definition in the shading/lines. inner ear: light blue is fine as-is. roman nose for drafts: yes! Facial markings: He has a dark spot on the top of his nose with a medium blue underneath it. Can we add a similar dark-ish gradient on his cheek bone for a little continuity? Facial hair: Chin scruff please!
Mane: Unedited. I'm okay with the green, maybe we can add a few very thin gray streaks? I'm not sure how I feel about him keeping the Crimped style, but I would love for him to have something with a little more length/elegance/long lines; alpaca hair if desired, but not required. Wavy if it can be managed because I'd like him to keep a semblance of the previous hair texture. Can definitely be spliced if you want to get creative!
Tail: Unedited unicorn tail. I'm thinking the classical tail with a spliced tuft might balance best with his beefed up form? I would like the tuft style to match the mane style if possible, in like line/shading texture.
Hooves/Fetlocks: Cloven hooves. Can we try to splice on the warhorse fetlocks? I managed this with Garlan but had to do each foot separate. Let me know if you want template! I would like his hooves to be a brighter silver-gray, shading might be a little muddy currently.
Reference Image(s): Bedwyr Uncert |
Bedwyr Cert |
Garlan for template ref (WIP of my 2019 Christmas custom still in progress... go me)
-- Physical Breed Traits -- Horn(s): Unicorn horn, classic or curved, up to you depending on the balance. I would like the silver to be brighter/more well-defined than current.
Other Notes: Itemless-version please!
-- Accessories & Edits --Trading Post Items: Bedwyr is a healer, mostly magical but also traditional. It would be really cool if items associated with herbal medicine could be included in his makeover. I'm down with whatever you'd like, CC, maybe matching him since he's "natural" woad/green dye colors. My primary thoughts are: satchel, bottle(s), pouch, maybe a basket or bowl of flowers [tiki necklace type?]. Maybe an olive branch. Go wild; I would just like to have an itemless version! (Please SKIP candles, tea stuff, crystals, skulls/bones, anything spooky as a general concept.)
Custom Items: n/a
Reference Image(s) for Items: 
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