"Why Not" Post Your Lyrics

[Seferius Slyferin]

Okay, music fans! here's what's up. We, the writers of song lyrics will post them in this thread and then you, the lazy or writing challanged rate it. It's quite easy if you think about it, swearing in your songs is aloud, however posting songs you didn't write is NOT aloud.

I'll go first, please excuse the spelling mistakes and shortness of this song, I was pissed off when I wrote it, however it's been rated the best so far.

The Reaper


Give into me
Give into me
Give into my pain
let me hear you scream (Aaaah)

I am the haunted, the acursed twist of fate
Do you feel it? The pain in your,
your heart b***h!

[Pre Verse]
I died for you
I lied for you
and you left me for dead
Now I reap the souls of damned

[Chourus]
Oh No!
the reapers here
soul reavers curse
damned to immortality
watch your back, cause'
you never know when I'm near

[instramental]

watch your back...
your soul is mine

[high pitched scream]

[preverse]

[chourus]

I've decided that it needs more work, I'll just wait for a mood and add more.  

[Not Importante]

Moving this to the YMS subforum.  

[Seferius Slyferin]

LingMing

Moving this to the YMS subforum.

Yeah..smart on sefer, I forgot to put it there...Anyways...you got rid of my thread name>.>  

[bloodlust_angelkel]

I've written about 500 songs on 2 of my computers and it keeps growing so yeah I'll share some of my lyrics each a day

I don't want to grow up
if it means changing the way
Iam I can't be happy
being a productive member
of your grown up ******** you
I want to grow young again
I'm sick of being told
when to grow up
I've had to my whole life
so now I just want to
grow young

tired of fighting
tired of feeling
depressed
people don't
know how
it feels to be
me in the past
let me be immature
while I still have
the chance
my life was bad
I had no mother
I don't remember no past
I was alone for so long

(lyrics r)

^grow young again  

[Seferius Slyferin]

I think it's quite good^-^

That reminds me..
I need to start singing again, my voice isn't used to it anymore domokun
That and learn to write music, I'm planing to start a band.  

[bloodlust_angelkel]

thanks good luck with the band I sing and play keyboards but I will probably never be in a band  

[StalkerGirl]

Normally I NEVER Share My Songs With People, But Today I Will Share One. Here Goes:

Things Said

Your Memory Still Stays With Me
Because Of The Things You Said To Me
When You Said I Dont Love You... Anymore..
The Imprint Of Those Famous Words
Has Left Me All But Your Curse
But Love Shall Live On... Forevermore..

Chorus:
All The Things Said To Me
Helps The Way That I See
I Think About All Your Lies
And It Makes Me Wanna Lie Down. And Cry..

I Think About The Things I Say
And It Helps Me Live Another Day
'Cuz Whats Life Without Moving On?
What About The Lives You've Hurt?
How About The Lines You Blurt?
Screw That, I'll Keep Writing This Song....

Chorus:
All The Things You've Said To Me
Helps The Way That I See
I Think About All Your Lies
And It Makes Me Wanna Lie Down.. And Cry

(Repeat 'And Cry' til music ends.)

 

[bloodlust_angelkel]

pretty ^_^

(girl)
maybe I'm just
a face
in your party
of memories

(boy)
lost in
a crowd
you won't
call my name
anymore

(lyrics)
tell me
you weren't
just a dream
children dream
show me you
were once here
with me in bed
it sucks
to be all alone

(boy)
but I'm fine
I couldn't
make you love me
I couldn't make you care
so I'm done being
a sex toy fed to the wolves

(lyrics r)

(girl)
maybe I'm just
a familar place
locked in your heart

(boy)
but I hope you
find someone
else to please
your every sexual whim

(lyrics r)

(girl)
and maybe
I was always
in just a race
against time
to get to you

(boy)
and to get away
from you when
you said you
wanted kids
I said yeah right
you couldn't
even get horny
from being with me

(lyrics r)

(girl)
and I hope
someday
we'll figure
out how
to apologize
about life
and death

(boy)
or apologize
about being fed
to the wolves
I don't love you
and I hope you
die in jail
how dare
you not
protect me
you liar
I trusted you
told you all
my secrets
how dare
you ******** me
and not even care
you jerk-off

(together)
you were
a much needed
lesson I needed
to learn and I hope
you know I'm better
off without your
constructive criticisms
bringing me down

^dj..  

[Seferius Slyferin]

I should post more of my own songs now. Since you are all so brave to blaugh  

[lucy-rulz4eva]

i would write some of my lyrics but (im not saying anyone here would) im scared of people stealing them!  

[eddievedder#1]

I smoke two joints.... just kidding.

Social Acceptance (SKA)

Social Acceptance this might start a riot. These people a.k.a. hot you call me burn out right on the spot then there realy is a riot like a hot spot on the sun fire a blaze and know you get what you deserve a punch in the face feelin like a disgrace whantin to escape this hell well have a taco.(I did this to lighten up the song) Now were friends on the beach both burnt up and feelin alright know we get a buzz feelin even more alright. The we started talking and we were like ******** it were all the same playin this life game whirlwind tradgedy leavin many behind see the gun you think you're innocent but hey hey hey 2 tone warrior put put the the gun gun down and we'll talk about me and you so let's sayyyyyyyyyyyy peace fight is are way so let's fight with are guns down and were all gonna get down tonight and party alright another hobo in a insane asylum what's new no social acceptance. And after this day everyone with social acceptance is a victim but I think social acceptance isn't something wrong but somethin that's good and right.


There's more soon.  

[eddievedder#1]

"Drug Song" (Metal/Alternative)

I had a friend who was down so lift him high I thought but he was to broken so I did everything he told me to do now he's dead dead and cold now everyone wants to kill me fine with me cause i'm cause i'm already dead inside my mind paranoia all around me feels like a tornado searching in this dark storm of my mind I find a place with all my friends and their not dead thank god their still in my head but I still worry if the mental agency is outside of my house don't worry probaly the sound of the dead filling thoughts in my head bad thoughts dangerous thoughts until this person came around who was kinda loving kinda caring or I was on xtc(Pause) (Solo) Death Torture it's me inside so why why can't I gain control of my mind so I sing this song drug song and something about the past is done.



This song is dedicated to my friend who recently died of od.  

[Seferius Slyferin]

Awe, that's allways sad to hear. More lyrics from Snuffles:

Defier

You immortal fools
think yourself to be,
true god

My life! my life a sham
all for you, you raped
my innocence, broke my will!

[chourus]

Defy! Defy!
never again will I be fooled
raped and scared by your blasphemy
stand..stand up!
~pause~
dear fear
salvation riped through me
vengance will be mine

you b***h and scream
crying at my utterance
rectify! decimate
fools, not even god
can stop me now!

[chourus]
D-d-die!
D-d-die!

~The song will be finished soon. Couple more verses  

[Seferius Slyferin]

Battle The Dark

lo and behold the stormy skys
Once clear of far
Dark clouds and mist defy
What right we used to have
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Chorus]

Oh wo darkness
shall we be
Oh wo darkness
No light for our lives
Oh wo darkness
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
You've left us bare
Raped are lands, killed our weak
We stand and defy!
Be ready, the light is here
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Chorus]
~~~~~~~~~~~~
[chant]
Embrace the dark |
|X3
Let in the light |
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Take, take what I want
Bleed, bleed you shall!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Stand ready, It is our time
Be brave now!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Chorus] X2
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Oh wo

 

[bloodlust_angelkel]

eddievedder#1

"Drug Song" (Metal/Alternative)

I had a friend who was down so lift him high I thought but he was to broken so I did everything he told me to do now he's dead dead and cold now everyone wants to kill me fine with me cause i'm cause i'm already dead inside my mind paranoia all around me feels like a tornado searching in this dark storm of my mind I find a place with all my friends and their not dead thank god their still in my head but I still worry if the mental agency is outside of my house don't worry probaly the sound of the dead filling thoughts in my head bad thoughts dangerous thoughts until this person came around who was kinda loving kinda caring or I was on xtc(Pause) (Solo) Death Torture it's me inside so why why can't I gain control of my mind so I sing this song drug song and something about the past is done.



This song is dedicated to my friend who recently died of od.

that's so sad and so beautiful

yeah the rest of my songs are in my journal now