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Okay, I made my own plot and my own characters, tell me what you think!
Characters:
Merlin
Warrior: Black Mage. Leader.
Age: 22
Weapon: Satin's treasured Scythe
Merlin, at the age of 10, wittnessed that Celia, Princess of Tipa, was kidnapped by the evil warrior Renard, and began his journey to find her, for he had fallen in love with the princess, and had spent his childhood with her. He teamed up with a warrior named Victoria, A Alchamey user, Cid, and a white mage Marie. If they did not rescue the princess in time, their villages would be taken by the miasma, for the princess held holy powers to keep the village safe from the miasma, but the aura surrounding the villages would soon be engulfed by it, for the aura would eventually die if the princess was gone for long. It had been twelve years sence Merlin and Celia had seen each other, and the aura surrounding the villages was on the edge of dieing off. On Merlin's journey, he meets up with his closest friend Marcus, another black mage, who had dissapeared out of Merlin's sight 10 years ago, Marcus was looking for the man who had killed his mother, and he comes to find out that Renard had murdered her, the same man who kidnapped princess Celia. Then came along Rune a black mage in training. Rune was an orphan who had run away because of the way he was treated, abused, which is shown in his attitude, stubborn. He teamed up with Merlin, for he might see a better life. Through the journey, Merlin finally met up with Renard... And another familliar looking man to Merlin. After the death of Renard, he went after the mysterious man. But when Merlin came face to face with the man, he had remembered... It was his elder brother Zaeo. But that was after he had cut through him with his scythe. Merlin, upset by what he had done, he couldn't forgive himself. But he was reassured by Zaeo last words saying, "Do not grieve for me dear brother, you were'nt the one who killed me. Renard took over my soul, and turned me against you. But there is one thing left to tell you.... I love you dear brother... Take care of Celia." Merlin finally was reunited with Celia once again, after 12 long years. All of the villages of the warriors were safe once more from the miasma, for princess Celia had returned to the kingdom. "May your soul rest in peice Zaeo" Merlin declared.
So... Waht did you think? Sorry if it was a bit confusing, it's so much easier to talk it out, then write it out. Hope you liked it!
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