The Line

[Pensakura]

I was looking through my box of memories and found this poem BlackBloodJin gave me. I didn't ask her if I could post it, so if I die you know you to tell the police to question. It didn't have a name, so I named it The Line.

A thin line separates us from death.
But what lies between them?
Is it a true line? Or a lie?
Is life a constant mockery of death?
Does death truely exist?
You cannot see it, speak itm or feel it,
Or is death a state of mind?
Is it a light brush of wind beckoning to you?
Or the whisper you push to the back of your mind in uncertainy?
Or is the true line between sanity or insanity?
Not being able to tell the difference between life and death, is that insanity?
What is true sanity?
Day after day of the same routine.
Or the thought of not knowing what will happen next.
A thin line separates us from insanity.  

[Aagark]

Yum Yum... Tasty Poetry There... Give My Thanks To The Poet

Top Hat
xXx  

[toricmpbll]

it's so cool i don't think she will kill u





















to slow  

[Pensakura]

I hope not. gonk  

[Angel Muerto]

it's a good poem so you might live  

[toricmpbll]

Angel Muerto

it's a good poem so you might live

might wink  

[The Power of Cheese]

Wow... It's a really good poem. 3nodding  

[BlackBloodJin]

I kind of remember writing it. I've slept since then. sweatdrop

I'm not mad Kit. Just kind of surprised. I'm iffy on my writing. Everyone tells me it's really good. But I just think their trying to be nice.  

[Pensakura]

Yay! The artist is here! Let's give her a big round of appluase for not killing me! *claps around the room, some booing* Come on now people! sweatdrop You don't really want me dead do you?  

[BlackBloodJin]

I think I have some more poems around here somewhere. I gave a bunch to my mom for mothers day. They aren't as deep as that exept my If I could Change The Past poem.  

[Pensakura]

*squee* Post it! Post it! 4laugh  

[Angel Muerto]

Pensakura

Yay! The artist is here! Let's give her a big round of appluase for not killing me! *claps around the room, some booing* Come on now people! sweatdrop You don't really want me dead do you?

sorry! i was the one booing rofl  

[Angel Muerto]

BlackBloodJIn

I kind of remember writing it. I've slept since then. sweatdrop

I'm not mad Kit. Just kind of surprised. I'm iffy on my writing. Everyone tells me it's really good. But I just think their trying to be nice.

i think your writing is great. you write some good stories. you make them interesting and funny. that and your poem is awesome.  

[[KookieMunzta]]

i thought it was awesome
1 thing you should know > i dont try to be nice...
i tell how it is no matter what
ask angel 3nodding

 

[Angel Muerto]

yea Kookie doesn't hold back... she's brutal wink