Rate me! (Avatar Arena Submission)

[sara-ane]

Athene, Holy Warrior

As we go about our daily lives, none of us have any idea of the battle that is constantly going on all around us. The angel seen here, Athene, is pictured in a grueling battle with a very dangerous agent of evil. He may look small but he packs a big punch!
Her faithful companion, Elden is shown around her neck both protecting her and battling the shadow demon.
All of creation sits waiting for the outcome of this war. Everything we know and love hangs in the ballance...

That's my submission. I want to know what yo guys think. Do I have a chance of winning this week? I think it's really origional and I really like the idea. I'm biased though. I would like several other openions.
Do I have a shot?

Copy Catters in the arena will be shot. ^_^ 3nodding  

[Ali R in da house]

This submission is a decent idea, I don't see anything wrong with it so you could make it into the top 10. However try experimenting with the Shadow demon via the inventory, maybe when he's in a different shape/form he'll look more menacing.  

[sara-ane]

I have gonk Any other position and the MIDDLE only the middle of the sword melts into it and it looks really weird. crying