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 Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 11:08 pm
These are just some of my own sketches I decided to draw for practice. It's supposed to look like me and my boyfriend somewhat, only it's drawn in anime form, not realistic. redface In the picture, it shows of how sad this girl really is inside that she can't see the person she loves anymore. I really wanted to color them but I'm not sure if I should. crying Oh well...Please tell me what you think so I can better myself. whee 
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 9:06 am
Looks cute, love the chibi drawings for both of them.
EDIT: Sorry, ran out of time to write a real critique. Anyway, love the chibi's, they are too cute and well done. However, on the character sketches look a little out of proportioned. The heads look way bigger than the bodies. It might help to widen the shoulders a little bit more, especially on the male character to make him more masculine or shrink the female head so she maintains her femininity. Otherwise I can't think of anything else. Good luck
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Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:06 am
love the shadding. Really well done. I also like the chibi, so funny
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Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:08 am
the girls rt ear, the one farther from the viewer, doesn't need to be there. it looks funny
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 11:49 am
very cute ^-^ i especially like the hair.
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:26 pm
Aww! whee That's a cute one! 4laugh
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 1:21 am
I second the first critique. I also think that (if the heads should stay that size) the necks should be thickened a little bit. They're a tad too skinny. Anyway, I like your style. And it's a nice picture. 3nodding
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