Art | Lit Critique/Help

[oO Starling Oo]

Need a little help with your work? We're here to help!
Art -Post your questions or a thumbnail wip of your art and one of your fellow artists will give you a hand. biggrin
Lit- Post a sample of what you have and we'll be glad to give suggestions

 

[Kamahi]

Great Idea blaugh I'll post mine sometime!~  

[SetsunaYori]

Cool! I'll be here when i need help :3  

[Sakura Kaite Pendragon]

Where should I place mine? Can I placed M-rated or not?  

[oO Starling Oo]

saku78

Where should I place mine? Can I placed M-rated or not?

You would post it in here. I would say only up to pg-13 because that is the level set by Gaia, but if it is above that you could message me on DA or anyone else who would like to look it over.  

[Sakura Kaite Pendragon]

Thant would be nice! Thank you biggrin  

[Drencrom Radosty]

Critique please?

Eeh, I need lots of help xD

Also, got any name suggestions?  

[FallingFreely]

Drencrom Radosty

Critique please?

Eeh, I need lots of help xD

Also, got any name suggestions?

wow. that's pretty good. The only thing that looks a little weird to me is that the neck looks to far forward on the chin. As for name suggestions...the only name that comes to mind is Darien.  

[Ladyblacksword]

I don't draw people, but the ear seems a little low on the head, and the top edge of it could be rounder.  

[SetsunaYori]

Yea, the ear on his head does seem kinda low...  

[SetsunaYori]

I really really want constructive critism on my art work. I guess i'm a beginner artist. I've been drawing for a year now. I know I have a long way to go.


Link to My DA:
http://zenichiru.deviantart.com/

Sample of my work:


Please comment on DA  

[oO Starling Oo]

Wow, I really like your work! I can't find much that needs correction, but maybe you could add more layers of shading/highlighting for a fuller look.  

[SetsunaYori]

[.ti.amo.]

Wow, I really like your work! I can't find much that needs correction, but maybe you could add more layers of shading/highlighting for a fuller look.

Thank you. biggrin I plan to to expirement with it a little so i'll try that.  

[SetsunaYori]

"Angel Boy"

Critiques please.

Critiques I recieved.
-His right leg is wierd.
I couldn't stand like that. It's too far over, and his right heel is behind his left.
Sorta like his knee is broken.
 

[oO Starling Oo]

I do agree about the leg bit, I would make it a tad longer and straighter.
I really love the wings though, they're done quite beautifully