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WOMM # 9 - Story included ^_^
Ok this is a short or perhaps even a long story I am working on in my spare time right now. Its not perfect nor is my writing anywhere near publishing material but I do my best either way. My spelling is 100% accurate. Anyways I hope you enjoy this first part of "The Meeting"




The Meeting

One fine and wonderful day I was riding on my peco through Payon and decided I would go to the Payon caves to hunt for some treasure. Once I got into the caves I knew right away that I was not alone in there. All sorts of creatures from the dead came to send me to my doom. As the walking dead thrashed at my arm I suddenly bashed with my shield causing the poor soul to be sent flying into the jagged cave walls. Then a skeleton that looked like an assassin came to me quick as the wind thrusting with his mighty daggers toward my chest plate. I used the power of holiness to send the damnation back to where it came from. Suddenly I heard a loud scream coming from further in the cave. I went to investigate right away trying to avoid the attention of other horrible creatures in the cave so I would not be chased.
Once I found the source of the scream I came across a giant undead warrior only known as a Kahiltzberg! As it held his dual sabers high in the air ready to strike the helpless crusader on the ground, unconscious peco beside her I charged in when the warrior least expected it. As my sword sunk deep within its skull I felt that I had saved another person in need. But I was horribly wrong. The sent of blood filled the air heavily and loud thundering footsteps arose.
Then from the shadows came a huge figure looking not as a man or a beast. It wore heavy armor smeared with the blood of thousands of hopeless victims. It could only be a Bloody knight! The Kahiltzberg must have been its minion searching for fresh meat. I rushed to the fallen crusader and put her over my shoulder. As the bloody knight swung his gigantic sword toward me I managed to dodge out of the way just in time but the force of the swing sent the woman and I crashing into the wall.
I got to my feet quickly and picked up the unconscious crusader and continued to run as fast as I could to the cave entrance so we could escape with our lives. The footsteps behind us made the ground shake with a thunderous force and chilled me to the very bone. Once we made it outside of the cave I jumped onto my peco and rode off into the wind leaving the bloody knight to his hideous roars. Once I found a safe spot in the Payon woods I dismounted my peco and put down the unconscious crusader to rest. I finally had a chance to sit down and catch my breath. I stared into the woman’s closed eyes and saw that she was very beautiful. Her armor was cracked and broken so I decided to remove it. Underneath she wore a beautiful sky blue robe with golden sleeves and golden lining on the bottom.
I felt a sudden reddening in my face as I noticed her eyes were now open. She noticed right away that she was only in her robe and blushed a bright pink then said. “Oh my! What am I doing out of my armor and where am I?” At first I said nothing then after a short while I replied “I saved you from facing you doom in the Payon caves…”

"As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest ******** in the whole valley"

-DeathlyDan
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  • User Comments: [1]
    Lady Oreo
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    Sat Jul 21, 2007 @ 03:55am


    I like the storyline, very suspenseful. Good luck with the rest of the story. I'm sure you have a lot of great ideas!


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