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JUnk iunno, some crap i do in my spare time


buru-enkou
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These voices echo in my mind
telling me all sorts of lies
no matter how hard I try
I can't silence these lyrical cries.

Each come with a knife
all leave a jagged slice
my soul is battered
my heart soon to be broken?

They fester painfully
until an unstoppable infection spreads
and then I loose everything
sadly I loose you too

But what now?
will this infection grow more?
or will it be cured?
and our love returned?

Somehow I doubt this will come to be
I'm withering, drowning in a doubt filled sea
the voices still echo in my mind,
as there lyrical poison slowly takes my life.





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RikuryRhouse
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comment Commented on: Sat Nov 03, 2007 @ 02:09am
O.o I am wondering. Is there a certain person you adress your poems to? ^^ I like it. Sad, but kinda compelling.


comment Commented on: Sat Nov 03, 2007 @ 03:58am
@rikury-eviania-nirani: i know what you mean rikury, the poems all seem to be dirrected at one love!
@firebelow21: *thumbs up* good job, just like always!



thunderstruck13
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buru-enkou
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comment Commented on: Sat Nov 03, 2007 @ 10:49pm
to be honest i have no clue, sweatdrop sweatdrop

yeah i know its like awesome but.. these these poems are like always ... sad.. well most


comment Commented on: Mon Nov 26, 2007 @ 11:29pm
Good job, as always ^-^
Heh, XOXO

~Carrie~



[x]chibi.usa[x]
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paralyzer93
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comment Commented on: Wed Jan 09, 2008 @ 04:28am
good
sad but
draws you in
i use questions a lot in my poems too =D
makes the reader think you know?


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