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	Daniel~before darkness 2
	Daniel~before darkness 2


It was raining when I woke up. I was sitting in the trees, when I realized I stayed to long. I saw a light coming from the north, that drew me towards it. With desperation I ran to it. "Daniel!" Someone called. I stopped in my tracks, and realized it was my father who was calling me. He was angry, for a reason I desperately didn't want to know. I quickly turned around and ran the other way. "Daniel! You cannot run away from me!" The next thing I knew, I was enveloped in a sheet of pure darkness. In enabled me from moving, and even breathing. I closed my eyes in fear. "Daniel, you're coming with me. Run away like that again and you'll be punished greatly." I heard footsteps by my head, then I was released. I coughed with a desperate need for oxygen. My father pulled me up by my collar so I could see him. "Why are you taking me?" I asked. "You're a weakling, Daniel. A light being. You belong to something greater." He dropped me, and started to walk away. I gathered myself up, and started walk away. Something stopped me. "Don't try it," he said. "Ease him," he commanded. I looked around, but I didn't see anything. Something hit me in all directions, suddenly causing me to fall onto the ground. I felt an unbearable sharp pain in my head, then I fell unconscious. Noir Lacrymosa Knight · Sun Nov 25, 2007 @ 04:16pm · 1 Comments


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Thu Jan 03, 2008 @ 09:29pm

that is extremely good. much better than what i could have done

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