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xXxVampyGenxXx
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this one is about love
An endeavor at love for chance
is to emulate its border.
a copy is not the etheral even at a glance
much less the essence conquered.

Thee may be at dissention
but love comes not at thine own will
for that is small consolation
and thus a hard fall.

No, love comes by its will
and bend not to thine own rules.
with love you do not have your fill
and if you do then thou are fools..

For how can one be filled to the brime
of something that unlimited and everflowing?

dedicated to a friend of mine who i've tried to convince time and time again and ill repeat again: "live your life and dont waste it waiting for love. it will come when the time is right"





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Cristal_watera_dragon
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comment Commented on: Sat Jan 12, 2008 @ 12:47am
omg!COOL te puedo preguntar algoesa persona...a quien se lo dedicas a es a mi hermano..pq si es..yo le e dicho lo mismo><


comment Commented on: Sat Jan 12, 2008 @ 01:02am
Very nice...and true. Love...true love can't be controlled. It is its own master and no one else can completely control it...At least, that's what I think.



Kaibaknight
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huggles-me-im-emo
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comment Commented on: Sat Jan 12, 2008 @ 03:32am
umm i give it a.....8/10 3nodding hehe^^


comment Commented on: Sat Jan 12, 2008 @ 04:44pm

I must say for me is really hard to live life without wanting someone to love sweatdrop
although I know you meant it for a friend of yours I think its really good



- I AM THE NOT-KNOWN -
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evilwings4
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comment Commented on: Sat Jan 12, 2008 @ 06:09pm
i actually agree
we must enjoy life as it comes 3nodding
cuz love will come when we r ready to face it

very nice poem =D


comment Commented on: Sun Jan 13, 2008 @ 12:11pm
sweet peom did u make it ur self????



St_Twillight
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Kayetayo
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comment Commented on: Fri Jan 25, 2008 @ 12:42pm
Hmm I wonder who that friend is -wink wink-

Anyway look at this

Desolation, grief, despair,insanity, desperation...those are the thoughts and feelings of one who dont feel loved.

Weve experienced those only by our will, thinking about finding love like people say,when actaully finds us, but im not talking just about 1 love

When one misses those who are dear to one self, family, friends. One feels like this cause the world is cold and wont give you love. Thereby one looks for the means to feel love, sometimes oone receives letters, messages, little bits of love, but the company and the psychedelic experience of the spending of time with the real persons that love you is necesary, specially when one is alone and away from the nurting home.

So we gota ask ourselves...Is just 1 love im looking for and waiting for?


comment Commented on: Wed Oct 15, 2008 @ 01:14am
this sounds beautiful darling.



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