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Story Pt.2
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A crowd had gathered, something was being pounded against wood. Marian and Pierre, best friends whom both had scars on there cheeks, were joining the crowd as a few glances were shot in there direction. A bullentine was posted.
'Ye whom bring thee murderer of Knight Larame shall get 50 pounds' Signed by the king. Marian was aghast, that the king wanted the murderers head so badly. Pierre tugged her away and they left. Pierre had the same long wavy black hair as Marian on his eyes were sapphire blue. Pierre had his hair tied back in a loose ponytail. Marian had her head bent in respect for they were in public.
Pierre had a deep passion for Marian but also a respect, she could possible kill him if she ever had a sword. Sometimes he just wanted to hold her close and kiss her. He even wanted to marry her but she had turned every suitor away so far. Pierre unconciously started running his finger along his scar, her remembered the day perfectly well.
They were only 5 and Marian and Pierre were playing outside the house. The horse was the first thing the two saw. Black as the hellish night and the man who stepped down looked fiercer and angrier than the devil. That man was now the king, but then the prince. The Prince stepped down and looked apon them with an evil smile.
Pierre shuttered at the thought as they hurried to the farmhouse Marians mother owned. By then Marian was angry. She ran into the house as Pierre sensed the iminate and unshealthed his sword. Marian ran back out in trousers and a loose blouse, her bronze laiden rapier out. She and Pierre took their stance and Marian took the first step. And they were off. Each blocking then attacking soon, Pierre got into it and was driving Marian back, for once. Unknowingly he had cut Marian on her upper arm and soon she was disarmed and fell back. Quick as lightening, Pierre Caught her before she fell into a puddle of mud. Her face was inches from hers as he realized how content she looked as she looked into his eyes.
"Are you....?" She managed to say before he kissed her.

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    AmoraxSangre
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    Mon Mar 10, 2008 @ 11:59pm


    Your story has potential to go so far, I love the characters that you have created. Excellent Job! wink


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