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Yes, I am writing my second "Random passage"(on the computer from my mind )!
NOTE:

I do not want anyone criticizing my writing for any reason. Unless you know that you, by far, have better writing skills than me, then please, go nuts. Just keep in mind that I'm the one writing a novel...(well, actually, I'm re-writing it...). So none of this critique stuff.
And while I'm on the critique subject, I was quite bothered when one of you (who can not draw anything for crud) said my drawing sucked! I don't like any of this "critique" stuff. Its an insult...

Thanks...

Theme: Discovery
Vol. 2



The moon was in the horizon when Edric had pulled the cart with Scheizka chained to it.
Her fangs were visible, and she was writhing inpain due to the small exposure of the sun still left in the sky. It was a very successful torture: not enough to kill, but enough to cause an agonizing sting.
"This is the one you call 'Serenity', yes?" Edric questioned in a velvetine voice. The kids could only nod to the intimidating man. He only smirked and pulled the cart into a room and walked back in. Her friend were curious on why he was acting so curious and mysterious.
"She and I had made a bet about 600 years ago. She'd been doing so well, until she met you guys." He glared a them.
He thought about slicing every single ignorant child's throat right then and there. He simply sighed and pointed to the moniter. "I know how you humans like to watch something, otherwise you lose interest." He flipped the switch.
There sat a beautiful woman of lovely red curls that rested peacfully on her delicate shoulders. She was attired in a forest green corset dress with a little green hat with black lace.