i wrote a story awhile back and i thought u'd like it...dont expect any punctuation,im skipping the intro,im also skipping none important stuff
As i turned 2 talk 2 him i was surprised 2 c him staring at me. "What?"i asked."im srry"he said "i mean...u know i love u."he said as he tried 2 kiss me. I backed away."U know i cant ur engaged it cant happen." "Wat?!"i could tell he was starting 2 get mad................................"Im srry"i said as i started 2 walk away. He grabbed me by the armand yelled "y not! scream ". "ur hurting me crying "i siad my eyes brimming with tears."Y WONT U LOVE ME?! scream "he roared."i did"i replied in a small voice as i broke free. ............................(hear i dribble on and on and on)..........................................................As they walkd into an area with thick underbrush they were ambushed. Both of them being highly trained fighter s defeated their enemies in a shower of dirt and blood.When it was all over the groung felt like a swamp that kept sucking at ur feet as if the dead that lay there were calling u 2 join them.John made it out without a scratch,but while fighting he failed 2 realize that his partner had been taken. When John was fending off the man his partner was stabbed in the chest by. As John realized this i was busy fending off numerous soldiers. Normally i would have been able to in an instant and i should have been able 2 sense someone was there.No, i was captured and brought to a campsite where i was 2 b executed.I spent the night there for the bonds that were holding me were tremdously strong and i couldn't break free.
Meanwhile John had finished burying his partnerand continued with the task at hand,just as i had insructed when he heard sounds coming from a clearing.He quickly dove into the underbrush and inched closer.What he saw infuriated him more than anything.Chained 2 a tree was a helpless girlaround his age and gathered around her were about half a dozen of the king's soldiers laughing and taunting her. She hung her head so he could not c who she was.She looked up,John was astoinished2 c that the girl was me.As i looked up from my prison and awiated my fate i cursed the men before me a 1000 times."Alright lets get on with it!"said one of the soldiers.He drew his bow.I held my head high if i was going 2 die i might as well do it with dignity.Just when he was about 2 shoot a voice rang out"STOP!".A man came out of the shadows...it was John.
well thats part of my story hoped u liked it 4laugh i know there r still a few bugs 2 work out but i think its pretty good comment plz? sweatdrop
 fencer258 · Thu Apr 06, 2006 @ 11:45pm · 2 Comments |
