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there once was a girl from Nantuckit....just kidding! but anyways.....Once apon a time there was a boy that lived in a castle. Most people were jealous of him and so hated him. He was a lonely boy because everyone hated him and no one was his friend. One day there was a girl walking towards the boy's castle. "What a nice place." She just admired the person who owned it instead of hating. They met and became friends and the people who hated the boy began hating the girl too. The hating people became an angry mob and grabbed their pitch forks and torches and headed for the castle. They set the castle on fire and the boy and girl died. The angry mob rejoiced.

THE END


lovely wasn't it?
of course it was....

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  • User Comments: [10]
    SuperCons
    Community Member





    Tue May 09, 2006 @ 01:06am


    That was hilarious!!! I never would of seen that coming! *winkwinknudgenudge*


    kipples
    Community Member





    Tue May 09, 2006 @ 01:08am


    yeah i got bored of writing towards the end xd


    cross country dude!
    Community Member





    Thu May 11, 2006 @ 01:02am


    heh nice. cool ... i say as i run past you with a bunch of ninja's chasing me. oh no! i yell as you trip me and laugh...ouch ouch ouch i cry out as they hit me and kick me. i jump up and i spin around and i punch one in the face. he screams out in pain and then one more jumps from the sky and joins them. i start sprinting away and i grab a stick as i pole vault over a wall. ah! yes that will stop them...oh no i cry out again as they kick down the wall and run after me. i look back and see you laughing again.


    kipples
    Community Member





    Thu May 11, 2006 @ 01:03am


    course it's nice. your trying to compete with my story, aren't ya ben?


    indieannajones
    Community Member





    Fri May 12, 2006 @ 12:45am


    quite, quite lovely, kipples. biggrin

    except that they died. that's not all that lovely. because... they died... of death...which killed them...


    indieannajones
    Community Member





    Fri May 12, 2006 @ 12:55am


    also, anna thinks that ben should have written ben's little story in third person, because third person POV rocks like a garage band on a sunday afternoon. and ben said "I" about 8362828778967892389362 times and it was very... monotonous. razz


    kipples
    Community Member





    Fri May 12, 2006 @ 01:06am


    quite right basil


    cross country dude!
    Community Member





    Fri May 12, 2006 @ 01:34am


    what does monotonous mean...man i hate not being in honors english with your peole... cry


    emmafini49
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    Fri May 12, 2006 @ 09:16pm


    XD Lovely story Kimmy


    katdatfat19
    Community Member





    Tue Aug 15, 2006 @ 06:36am


    I WANT A FIREY CASTLE!!!!! Because I don't have one I'm going to burn some one elses *forms a mob*


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