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Daily Happenings Of My Boring Life This is a journal about the daily happenings of my life. Now, I can't promise that I'll update everyday, but I'll try. Of course, I doubt anyone is interested in my life, but I can't be so sure. Well, about me...hm...let's see here....I dunno, just a


FoxehFury
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Poem of a Broken Girl
I wrote this when I was having a very rough day, and when I lost someone very close to me...

Have you ever...

Have you ever seen a Goth girl cry,
And supress the urge to ask her why?
Why she's showing emotion for a first,
And what could cause her dam to burst.

Have you ever seen an Emo bleed,
Ever ask her what planted that seed?
The seed of self-hatred abd low self-esteem.
What could stop that fast flowing crimson stream?

Have you ever seen a Punk depressed,
Or seen her when she's greatly stressed?
When her demeanor's drastically changed,
Her behavior cold, which is quite strange.

Have ever seen any of these things,
And the recognition never rings?
That maybe you just pass by,
And never stop to ask why.

Why she's crying; showing emotion for a first.
Why she's cutting; making the pain worse.
Why she's depressed; What brought her down?
Could you be the cause of her frown?






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Ronan_Shade
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comment Commented on: Sun Sep 17, 2006 @ 06:32pm
I like the way the words have a rythm of their own...melding together in a river of expression. Some of the syllables are a bit bumpy, but otherwise a great poem with a good message!

NIce!


comment Commented on: Wed Oct 04, 2006 @ 02:18am
It's good! but sorta depressing



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