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User Image Walls around my heart that can't be knocked down by force, but of pure love.
This is the first chapter of a fanfic i am typing.
No place like One Piece

Chapter: 1 A dream come true


Me (Dani): This will be my FIRST Fanfic!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!! Well……….I hope u like it.
Zoro: Good luck with that.
Me: YAY!!!!! –Glomps Zoro- thanks Zoro
Zoro: -struggles to get free- get…off…of me!!!!!
Me: anyways………ON WITH THE FANFIC!!!!!!
Disclaimer: I do not own one piece…but I wish I did

Chp.1


School was finally over for the weekend. Two days without out stress…well…except for the homework.
Jade was kneeling beside her book bag packing up her homework for the week. While she was packing she saw a shadow loom over her. She turned around to see her friend Danielle (Dani for short). Jade smiled at her “Hey Dani. What’s up?” Jade asked her.
Dani shrugged “Nothing much. Homework?” Dani asked her while looking towards Jades book bag. Jade gave off a big sigh “yea…how bout you?” Jade asked her while looking toward Dani’s book bag. Dani looked down at her book bag and gave it a pat. “YEP! As always,” Dani said to her.
Jade smiled at her while getting up off the ground a whirling her bag to her back. “Ready to go?” Jade asked her. Dani nodded “Let’s go, “ Dani exclaimed while walking off with her friend.



Dani and Jade always walked home together from school. They lived very close to each other. While they were walking Dani turned her head around so she can face Jade “so what are you going to do over the weekend?” She asked her. Jade turned her head around to face her also. Jade shrugged “well…first I’m going to do my homework. Then I’m going to watch the new episode of One Piece coming up this Saturday. And last I’m probably going to draw more pictures of my One Piece character, Shouka, “ Jade told her. Dani nodded.
“How bout you?” Jade asked her. “The same thing you said except that I would be drawing MY One Piece character, Noya, “ She told her. Jade gave off a smile. Dani smiled back at her.
“Hey, you know what…we haven’t visited our favorite spot in a LONG time!! You want to go there and take a short break?” Dani asked Jade with a wink. Jade rolled her eyes while giving a shrug “I have nothing better else to do,” Jade said to her. Dani pointed to the opposite direction “this way, “ Dani told her. Jade followed where her finger was pointed and started to walk toward that direction. Dani followed Jade from behind.
Sooner or later they finally reached they destination. Dani had a wide grin on her face “WOW! It’s more beautiful than I could remember,” Dani said while dropping her book bag on the grass. Jade nodded “you got that right!” Jade said while awing at the sight. Dani sat down on the warm grass under a tree and then shut her eyes to take a short nap. Jade did the same thing and laid under a tree also. “I wonder what it would be like…if we were in One Piece?” Jade said before falling asleep. “Yea…me to,” Dani answered her then everything went black.


Dani gave out a big yawn. “AAAHHHHH!!!!!! That was a GREAT nap!!!” She said while stretching out her arms. She opened up her eyes and looked around. She wasn’t at there favorite spot anymore. This was a ship that she was in. But it wasn’t any ordinary ship IT WAS THE MERRY GO IN ONE PIECE!!! Dani was dumbfounded “what the he-“ She began to say before she was interrupted by some movement besides her. Dani looked over to see what it was. She noticed it was a girl. She had very long black hair with a blue hair band in it. A blue sleeveless shirt that was showing her belly and a long blue matching skirt.
Dani studied her for a while till she finally knew who she was. “SHOUKA?!?!?” Dani screamed at her while pointing at the figure. The girl turned around with her eyes still closed. “No…it’s Jade, “ She answered back. Now Dani was shocked. “No…seriously…your Shouka!!!!” Dani said to her. Jade opened her eyes with confusion and looked down to look at herself. Once she saw what had happened to her she started to scream in panic. “OH MY GOD!!!!! I’M SHOUKA!!!!!” Jade started to say in panic. Jade lifted up her head to look at Dani. “Dani I’m-………..OH MY GOD YOUR NOYA!!!!!” Jade said to her while pointing.
She looked at her confused. “That’s silly I’m not-“ She began to say when she was looking down at herself but then stopped once she saw what she was wearing. She was wearing blue jeans that only came up to her knees. She was wearing a pink shirt that only went up to her upper chest while it shows her shoulders. The shirt only came up to her belly also. She could also see that it was showing her bathing suit strips that were under her pink shirt. And she could also see that on her left arm was a tattoo the wrapped around her arm. DANI WAS HER CHARACTER NOYA!!!! “What…what happened?!?” Dani said while looking up at her friend. Jade shrugged “I-I-I don’t know?” She stumbled while studying herself and Dani. “Th-this HAS to be a dream!!!” Dani said to her. “Right!” Jade answered her while reaching out her arm and pinched Dani. “OW!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT HURT!!!!!" Dani yelled at Jade. "…it hurt…this ISN’T a dream jade!!!” Dani told her while rubbing her arm where Jade pinched her. “Well…what should we do then???” Jade asked her. Dani shrugged “I guess…just go with the flow. Besides…WERE IN ONE PIECE!!!! OUR DREAM COME TRUE!!!!!” Dani said to jade while shaking her with excitement.
Jade nodded while trying to get out of Dani’s grip. “Ok…I guess you are right. HEY! Instead of going by our real names…lets go by our characters!!! Ok?” Jade asked her. Dani nodded to the idea “Ok Ja-…I mean Shouka,” Dani said to her. Jade gave off a smile.
Then they were interrupted by the sounds of footsteps from the stairs. “Who is making all that ruckus?” a familiar voice said. “Well…I guess we are going to have some company, “ Shouka (Jade) said to Noya (Dani). Noya nodded to her friend while clinging to her arm. They both sat waiting for what the crew had in store for them.

End of Chp.1

Me: sooooooo…what do you think so far?!?!?! Do u think it is good???? I HOPE YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zoro: -crosses arms- well we just have to wait and see.
Me: -glomps Zoro again- THANK YOU ZORO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zoro: -struggles to get free- for the second time…GET OFF OF ME!!!!!!
Me: you’re so cute when you get angry.
Zoro: -rolls eyes-
Me: well…tell me what you think about my story so far!!!!!!

R&R!!!!!!!!!

-StaarShinee-
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  • User Comments: [2]
    Hosagi Telum
    Community Member





    Tue Oct 17, 2006 @ 11:38pm


    wow there horsey, you are a busy bunny arent you....
    wow.... oh to hell am I reading all that... i might do later on but not now no way!!!

    but damn you must get bored
    luff
    xxx


    -StaarShinee-
    Community Member





    Wed Oct 18, 2006 @ 09:52pm


    yea....i do get bored by i LOVE writing stoiries!!!i have SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO amny it is hard to count how many stories i've started!!!i LOVE one piece and i wanted to do a fanfic!!!i am so happy you enjoyed it!!! blaugh


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