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Feelings Deep Inside
There are so many ways to feel
Gladness, Hatred, Sadness
Most seem to feel the hatred
Then the sadness
I wish I knew what to do
To help them not feel this way
Alas I cannot make them say

When they tell me they are okay
A feeling deep in my heart tells me
No I am NOT okay
It saddens me to know
that all they are doing is passifying me
So then I will leave them alone

To let the pain fester, to grow
The only thing I can do is just pray
That they trust me and believe that I am there
To be a shoulder to cry on when
No one else seems to care
But there is someone ME I care

Anger does not help matters with sadness
Most keep it locked away deep inside
For if they tell someone some people in white coats
Will come for them.....This is not the way
For most that say: I understand they truely do not
Because they get paid with a
Piece of paper that Says I am educated, That I care

I am not like them, no I turely care
For if I did not would I really talk to you?
Try me, give me your best shot
Tell me your problems I promise to listen
With a fully opend heart
I may not be just like you on the outside

But I truely understand what you are feeling
That sense of lonliness locked deep inside
There are many feelings locked deep within
Only few know the true key to unlocking deep inside
Feelings are not objects you care for a while
Then thrown-away like trash

Unlike others I will care for you
As a true friend should, for unlike others
Who will lock you deep inside I will try to help
You be set free as you were ment to be






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gothic_monsterman
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commentCommented on: Tue Nov 14, 2006 @ 07:46pm
As a true friend should,
you listen.
As a true friend should,
you care...

But my life was filled with those,
those that should've cared.
They walked away,
those that should've listened...

Now I live a shattered life,
filled with broken images of myself.
The "caring" friends have all left me,
leaving these shadows to gather on the shelf...


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 14, 2006 @ 09:55pm
nice job



gunther11987
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Omega_Sipher
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 15, 2006 @ 05:34am
I like it. 4laugh


commentCommented on: Thu Nov 16, 2006 @ 01:22am
See you are amazing, I keep telling you that you are. You come up with some awesome stuff, can't wait for when we can add it to music. Love ya!



starflyer37
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ALTERRYO
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 18, 2006 @ 03:23pm
Aye lassy, You come up with the best poems i have seen!


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