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I awoke with a start, again. It was the third time this week i had envisioned my own death in a dream. Soon I would begin believe in these dreams, and if that happened, I would die eveynight of my life. Once again the man killing me was John, my co-worker on the Ford assmebly line. We were eating in the workers lounge when he came up to me and released a bullet into the back of my skull. Of course, I never saw my body after the shot because insted of seing my own dead body on the floor, or complete darkness, I would see my own beadroom and my wife sitting next to me asking why I had suddenly leaped out of bed at an alarming rate. I always shared my problems with her, but this time I kept my malicious dream to myself. After ensuring her that it was nothing more than a bad dream I headed downstairs. I was awake now, and after that dream, I wasn't about to go back to sleep. After drinking two coffee's I sat on my armchair and stared at the black T.V. screen reminising on what had just occured.


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Invasion of punita
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  • [05/08/07 01:18am]

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    Kitt_Kitsune
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    commentCommented on: Tue May 08, 2007 @ 01:53am
    Dude that's cool. This actually shows a lot of promise in being a good story.


    commentCommented on: Tue May 08, 2007 @ 03:07am
    its not bad
    but you'll have to write more before I can give a opinon mrgreen



    thecutelittledeadgirl92
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    The_Tormented
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    commentCommented on: Thu May 10, 2007 @ 03:40am
    i lurve it! heart


    commentCommented on: Sat Jun 02, 2007 @ 06:56pm
    I already did this once today...but apparently it didnt work

    I like this story... but I KNOW theres more too it haha... wheres it at?
    its good matthew. Haha.. welll yeah you should actually finish this one
    cuz it would be a good read...

    well talk to you agian in like 2 seconds im sure



    Fasten
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    Dark Sinju Nokuda
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    commentCommented on: Tue Jun 26, 2007 @ 12:40am
    Cool story but you should continue it


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