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I am a book; you read books O.o
My 1st ever writing?
Well....After something happened I kinda just started having lyrics running around in my head, so I put some words together and heres what I got..
I am in no way a songwriter or poet, I just wanted to share this.
Its a kinda old Blue's style, imagine a rhythm like a slow blues song, and thats what you've got

And yes, I know it sounds horrible; but constructive criticism >>;

I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back,
Said I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back.
Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.


I'd rather go through hell,
than live that day again,
Said I'd rather go through hell,
than live that day again.
The pain is abnormal, like a bullet to the brain.

I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back,
Said I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back.
Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.


Now I'm standing at crossroads,
don't know which way to go.
Said I'm standing at crossroads,
don't know which way to go.
My heart was pointing one way, my head said take it slow.

I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back,
Said I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back.
Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.


The devils way baby,
thats the path I'll take.
I say the devils way baby,
thats the path I'll take.
Because for you girl you know, I'd drive my heart in with a stake.

I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back,
Said I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back.
Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.


If your watching god,
you'd better listen up.
Said if your watching god,
you'd better listen up.
You've made my life miserable, and ******** my days up.

I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back,
Said I gave my heart to a woman,
but she threw it right back.
Now it feels like the pretty girl, just stabbed me in the back.


Well this is the end of my story,
thats all there is to tell.
Said this is the end of the story,
thats all there is to tell.
Heaven knows I'll meet my dream girl, before I go down in hell.









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Xx_kenjii_xX
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 04:02am
....lmfaoooooo

better then what i can come up with though


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 01:55pm
I like your lyrics... There good!
Hope that when you gone fishing that you get your minds off thing and catching something......or someone bigXD



Princess--Kaoru
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Princess--Kaoru
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 01:56pm
and was that your car?? if it is...I like it! ^^ 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 11:49pm
damn right

My car pwns!! >=D



Saiyumei
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 24, 2007 @ 06:19pm
Hah hah.. Let's race again someday when we're bored. xD; MY SISTER LOST! -.-; Annddd... She thinks you bought that speed thingy for your car.. That improves your car's speed... Did you?


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