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METAL WILL NEVER DIE
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Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 05:06pm

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	"Just don't let go" She took me to a place where there was pain and suffering . But when she left me their crying.I feet like something inside me was dying. But there was all ways someone there beside me.They stopped me from slitting my wrist. I never left her side even when she didn't want me their. But when anger flared. she got real scared.but when i toled her i loved her she didn't seam to care. I cant take this pain i have nothing left to gane.but when things go bad it gets better in the end JUST DON'T LET GO!!! plezz comment tell me what u think smile

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metallicaisawsom
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Commented on: Fri Jul 27, 2007 @ 02:37pm


	good job i love it heart heart heart you are a good writer. u rock

Commented on: Tue Sep 25, 2007 @ 07:03am


	other than some spelling errors its a good one if u really need help spelling download microsoft office or something with spell check but other than that great poem domokun domokun domokun domokun xp xp xp

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x-_AriStoCraP_-x
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Commented on: Fri Sep 28, 2007 @ 12:17am


	Pretty good, some spelling errors. I can help you write poems, trust me, people say I'm good. Other than song lyrics, I've got some stuff I did on my journal.

Commented on: Mon Dec 31, 2007 @ 07:55am


	it's really beutiful in a sweet....emo kinda way, i like it. mrgreen

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