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Tales of my lonely self
I'm going to tell you in cryptic language about my feelings and my life. Most of it are poems, others are stories with a situation that I've been through. Don't judge them on how the are written, it's just my dark personality. Have fun reading it
A Star falling down the big blue Sky
Today
I feel the sun
But I can see the stars
Whenever a human dies
A star falls from the sky
Every where I look I see them falling
But there's one big star
That stands exactly above my head
When I stand up and walk to the edge of the roof
The star cries
The rain falls down
I hear the star beg:
Don't do it... Please...
But then I'm falling
And I'm twisting and turning
as soon as my back hits the ground
The star starts to fall
another human with a choice
That made a mistake






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wizardazure
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 16, 2008 @ 08:32pm
wooowo_oyour such a very talented writer eek talks about a life being lost and a star falls for every life lost ..wow eek it fits together perfectly^^


commentCommented on: Mon Apr 21, 2008 @ 06:48pm
haha thank you razz actually, Now I look at this poem, it seems like I really felt like doing it, you know. Here in my town we have a bridge, above the highway. And I stopped counting the times that I wanted to jump of it... But I feel better now biggrin ANd I'm glad that I didn't do it razz we'd have never spoken =( sadness I know razz srry, crazy side is showing again razz well byebye!!



Queensoftheapocalyps
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