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who needs a headline with the poems I write
this is supposed to be a song i wrote, but it didn't turn out how i wanted it to

your right beside me.
i can feel your breathing.
i can hear you whisper in my ear.
i block it out and try not to cry.
all i get from you are lies.
you try to get me to come down.
out of the clouds is right where you want me.
but im doing fine baby.
please don't haunt me.

im leaving now so i have to say.
goodbye forever.
wish it didn't have to be this way.

but you kept me from what i really needed.
you told me that he wasn't real.
for a time i listened.
but then life just fell apart.
i had to find a way out.
then i remembered.
the way it used to be.

thats why im leavin'.
i know it's gonna hurt you.
but we can both pull through.
just not together this time.
tonight is our last dance.
and now the night is ending.
this is our last goodbye.


so goodnight.
and goodbye....this is forever.






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Hellolove101
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 25, 2007 @ 02:58pm
AWWWW! I LIKE IT! poor cameron *HUG*


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 26, 2007 @ 02:55am
its perrtyy!



Neoncupcakish
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show_me_ucare
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 27, 2007 @ 02:06am
no that does not suck its good!! and im sorry


commentCommented on: Mon Sep 03, 2007 @ 02:51am
Sorry I took a thousand years to comment.
Thisisreally pretty and well thought out. I think it would have a slow mellow beat to begin abdthen go into a harder chorus.
That's just me though. You rymed really well too! And it doesn't sound cheesy. You did an amazing job on this Bruver!



Tantagel
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