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blackbird creations...©
this is my story i will make about gaia also i may tell about my story that is started 2001 bits and pieces always i will remember my friends always ill remember peopel that donated to me:) Well thats the old description XD It contains fun stuff
1b: my story in real life.
the story that im writing down now its about thelephats
that have powers like fire, water and earth (the basic powers)
and electric, ice and iron. when i started this i dident know avatar or manga yet, i made it up al by myself.
thelephats are the real human speciege we humans are a kind of mutant that came... nobody knows when...

also there are animalists they can talk with animals and turn into them or only create wings or somting...

telekenets only have the ability to move things with there minds.

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the story is about a girl with my name,
when she was 7 she just changed school and then lost her parents in an exident, some explosion at the shopping center, in some freaky way she ended up in australia where some man helped her and brought her back to the netherlands...
he stayed with her and became her foster parent... the 1st 4 years after that she lived in a tent on some terrain at hre friends house after that she met 3 man out of england that starting helping her 2 at that time she knew a few other thelephats anemalists and telekenets: ruben, bindie, rickardo, liona and a few other peopel...
after she met those 3 man (richard james and jeremy) they became thelephates(big flash of light sparkly stuff its really cool when that happens)
james was eletric (where i am now there are only 2 of every kind of special power electric iron ice) jeremy was ice and richard was water.

after she met them the bad guys created another kind of bad guy by exident,
the new kind of bad guy was thelephaty hunters, they where hunting down thelephates... they where dark thelephath themselves(dark is an underspeciesge)

they created a clone of the girl that wasent really in controle of herself yet she dident have emotions... one some point the girl (merel) helped nevivo the clone 2 get emotions and later on they called eatch other twins, b4 the english man came the australian man (steve) made a really big house together with merel...

after the war the girl met lots of thelephats discovered there was a internet that only telephats could enter and mutch more...

we real humans dont know YET that they exist some humans know but only friends of thelephats and presidents and stuff, in total there are 13(?) planets with a statement of non-colonial planet cause there are at least a 100 colonial planets...

why the ? well there is a 14th planet that lost contact some 10thoused years ago...
at that time thelephats kinda ruled technologie but staid out of contact with us humans cause they werent autorised to give us better technolagie, there was a coloni ship that went out into a part of space far away but somehow lost contact...

they stranded on a planet that now is inhabited by them, some peopel believe ''earth'' is a myth some peopel want to go there... on that ship was a girl that hade a neclace with a stone (tijgeroog is the dutch name) that is passed one generations and now is in the hands of the girl that my second story is about(ill tell that in some other entry 2)






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Waterystar
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 29, 2007 @ 07:25pm
Its a good start. Sounds like an overview to a story. I'd separate the story into parts and work on one at a time to give it more depth. That is unless you want it to be a short story. Also don't forget to check your spelling.


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 29, 2007 @ 07:31pm
lol yeah its an overvieuw im gonna start with the real deal later...

its just to interest peopel in it MUHAHAHA



blackbird26
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Waterystar
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 29, 2007 @ 07:42pm
ah okies ^^


commentCommented on: Sun Sep 30, 2007 @ 04:46pm
Great so far!!! I'd do something to make it unique (she had a headache throbbing and she didnt mention it) she conked out and ended up in australia losing the memory of her family, because explosions have been used so many times. Otherwise good!! biggrin



HylianDoom
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