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....umm My journal..*looks around* kinda weird
peotry?
I awoke one day with the ability to write poetry and I finally decided to journal one in so here it goes

Love, greed's most disire.
When you look around.
You can see, clouds and rain.
When you look into there eye's.
You can see,fury and greed.
As you spend time with a love one.
Rain starts to poor over them.
Heart begins to fill with darkness.
They spread lies,false truths.
When you have taken enough.
I well hold you in my arms.
Intell the sun shines again.

post up and tell me what you think.

to Joy from Devin.






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fateof the silverwolfs
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 07, 2007 @ 01:35pm
awww its so sweet


commentCommented on: Thu Nov 08, 2007 @ 05:02am
lmao you guys are funnier then hell!!! xd blaugh



Vampire_BJBs_Vampiress
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MisKris
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 03:05am
AWWWWWW it's so sweet!!!!!! 4laugh


commentCommented on: Mon Nov 12, 2007 @ 02:56am
I likes it Dev! smile



rainNwolves
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XxAng3l1c_KissxX
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 20, 2008 @ 07:51pm
w0w dev thats real nice and sweet u got potential
to express ur feelings through poetry


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