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Dragonfang
To Make You Feel Better
To Make You Feel Better
By David De Silva

I was thinking of some ways
to make you feel better today.
i thought a rose might do it
but then i thought again.
you really don't need flowers
and i seem to over use them

then i thought of a movie
that we could sit down too.
but every movie we've ever wanted to watch
we never got too.

then i thought a kiss or 2
could heal all the wounds.
but then i thought into it,
and that just wouldn't do

then i thought a picnic
would help it disappear.
but sitting down for hours,
wouldn't really help you feel more up beat

then i thought of jewelery
i thought it could do.
but i don't think it can help the wounds you have ,
do you?

so all can offer
is my undieing love for you
and tell you that your my solar system
and that ill never stop loving you.






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xx-formaldehyde-roses-xx
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 11:58pm
dang.... like I said, u should b a poet....!


commentCommented on: Sun Nov 11, 2007 @ 05:49am
User ImageI wanna be....

DAUUUUM Davii. Its so wonderful!

...his Subculture GirlUser Image



Frankenbuhh
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foxwolf7
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 11, 2007 @ 10:58pm
wow i like this one


commentCommented on: Wed Nov 14, 2007 @ 03:11am
i like it lol you soooooo rock
ily <3 fizzy2



rebekahriot
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fariydreamer321
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 17, 2007 @ 04:55am
heart i love this poem it touches my heart heart


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 12, 2007 @ 03:39am
YOUR TERRIFIC biggrin



rebekahriot
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