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(Untitled Poem)
(Untitled Poem)
By: Jonathan Young

This isn't really much of news,
You win some, you lose some
Never knowing what you could lose.
And tonight... i feel really dumb...

Winning a simple game of soccer
Could make you feel great for the moment,
But when it feels you lost something greater
It feels like you went through another day of torment

When you find out the truth, it can really hurt.
Like when you fall on your face,
And get blood on your shirt.
But get up. Don't drop out of the race!

You've come so far, and you're nearly done.
It doesn't matter what anyone else thinks.
Just believe in yourself and you have it won.
It's not like you have a curse or a jinx.






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Airavine
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Thu Dec 27, 2007 @ 12:15am


nice................ damn this is a long time ago. i have boredom =P


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KAYTHXBAIORLLYNAO
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Fri Dec 28, 2007 @ 05:07am


i really liked this poem. i really liked how the guy was jus blunt with his words and didnt try to use such fancy words.^-^


Butterflykissey
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Sun Jan 20, 2008 @ 01:31am


I'm impressed. I wirte too. didn't think that would be something we would have in common, but I'm glad it is. Maybe I will post some of my poem on here one day.


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XmyownlovestoryX
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Sun Feb 24, 2008 @ 04:05pm


you're inspiring me and extremely amazing at this...


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