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My poems


xXxVampyGenxXx
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free verse
Running and adventurous
Spirit wild and ravenous
Riding through the woods
No path but my own

In the far distance
In the endless horizon
There is a heavenly entrance
We shall ride with no reason

Glide through the valley
Over the lake and through the trees
Let the wind set us free
Let the reins be broken

Closer and closer we come
Runfast my horse, run fast
The heavenly entrance ius vast
Our dreams at hand

“Oh my love there it is!”
“Yes my dear I can see”
Together we come
Together in front of our goal

I reach for my love
I search for his voice
And now to me
I am alone it sems

I turn back, there are no gates
I look around my horse is gone
All before me is barren and dry
Oh lord what is this fate?

I am searching, searching
I am crying, crying
My wound is open again
My heart is ripped away


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Kayetayo
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comment Commented on: Fri Dec 07, 2007 @ 03:09pm
=D so close the finish..yet a turn of events makes a cruel ending

The wind blows, it whispers in my ear
it speakes to me with a voice filled with fear.

This path in front of me is arid, many have walked it and never come back,
yet I point my sword onward ...there is no turning back.

I will reach my goal for I have nothing to lose...but wait what is this?
upon my path I see a spectral figure, it mocks and laughs at me
Its apearance resembles mine. Is this madness?
No it certainly it is not, for this path is the path of life
and this figure is the ultimate obstacle...myself

for it is myself and only myself that keeps me from reaching what I want, it is myself who heals and hurts the ones i hold dear... and so only defeating myself in some ways will I reach my goal and help others...but this task is dificult and rather painfull...and thus..I find myself facing myself....sword in hand...clashing everyday...till I find my way to dawn


comment Commented on: Fri Dec 07, 2007 @ 03:45pm
very nice!!! biggrin
ur a great poet!



evilwings4
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xXxVampyGenxXx
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comment Commented on: Fri Dec 07, 2007 @ 09:30pm
well sun that was great and i love it crying and evilwings thanks a lot it means a lot to me


comment Commented on: Fri Dec 07, 2007 @ 10:29pm
wow i wish i could writte better english and knew more words to express my self in english but the poem its great girl good but very good job blaugh



Cristal_watera_dragon
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sara.w.
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comment Commented on: Sun Dec 09, 2007 @ 10:45pm
wow that was really good


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