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My poems


xXxVampyGenxXx
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lover's embrace
under the silvers rays of the moon
inside the deep aroma of the blooms
with deep embrace we hold
onto that which we value most

the soft breeze whispers in our ears
the hazy mist hides our fears
we lie unheard, untouched
removed from all exept our love

roses red as blood
roses white as snow
let them cover our eyes
let us close our minds





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Sasami526
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comment Commented on: Sat Dec 15, 2007 @ 07:14am
Lovely!


comment Commented on: Sat Dec 15, 2007 @ 02:34pm
Awesome! It's good it's very good :3



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Kayetayo
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comment Commented on: Sat Dec 15, 2007 @ 03:25pm
MEOW MEOW 3nodding (translation: Very Good) Me likey..specialy the blood roses part

Take my hand and follow me, I take your thru this night so Pure

Feel my warmth, feel my tears, wich are cause of joy when you whisper your thoughts in my ear.

Lets be set free, lets become savage, or become royalty and be on a carriage.
I hope you know what I feel for you, all this feelings thnat make me jump are all be cause of you.

Dont deny me, you feel the same, the way you look at me is already change, those shining eyes, that chery mouth, that dark hair like the night sky, they are all the charms you posses to hypnotise me I bet.

You giggle and laugh as you play around and make me wait tll the next round, the night is over you gotta go and Ive got to wait till the next day and remember this day like if it where ten thousand years ago.


comment Commented on: Sat Dec 15, 2007 @ 04:27pm
I completely love that last part



- I AM THE NOT-KNOWN -
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evilwings4
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comment Commented on: Sat Dec 15, 2007 @ 05:19pm
wow thats some poem!
it reminds me of my ex.. crying
i love the last part, is very good


comment Commented on: Sat Dec 15, 2007 @ 05:58pm
Great poem! it was awesome!



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Cristal_watera_dragon
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comment Commented on: Sat Dec 15, 2007 @ 08:15pm
locaaaa that was awesome!!! domokun it reminds me of my love story whee


comment Commented on: Sun Dec 16, 2007 @ 12:11am
I LOVE it heart heart



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xXxVampyGenxXx
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comment Commented on: Sun Dec 16, 2007 @ 01:48am
thanks everybody...i really apreciate it xd


comment Commented on: Sun Dec 16, 2007 @ 05:44pm
wonderful as always!
I absolutly LOVE your poems! heart



Angelo Varcolaci
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ccnixie
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comment Commented on: Thu Dec 20, 2007 @ 04:13am
That's really beautiful


comment Commented on: Sun Dec 23, 2007 @ 01:33am
I'll give this a 10 but is this 3 poems or 1?



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huggles-me-im-emo
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comment Commented on: Fri Jan 04, 2008 @ 07:11pm
yahoo!! hehe^^


comment Commented on: Mon Jan 07, 2008 @ 08:26pm
this poes is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! heart



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Lenaldalie
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comment Commented on: Thu Dec 04, 2008 @ 10:17pm
WOW!! that was amazing!!! I really like the passion it had...did you really did that?

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