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Poem. 'Mirror, Mirror'
Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
Please tell me what you see.
Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
I cannot see myself.
I do not want to see myself.

That can't be me.
This unhappy, tear-streaked face cannot be mine.
Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
You're not answering me.
Is this really me?

When did I turn into this?
When did I get so sad?
Mirror, Mirror on the wall,
Can you not answer?
Please answer.
When did I cry so much..?
Hurt so much..?

I touch the surface of you, Mirror.
You shattered under my touch.
And you answered my question.
Yes. This is really me.
Yes. I feel shattered inside, too.


Meh. I came up with this just now. And I hate it. Yes. But it's a poem. Woopee.






User Comments: [5]
[ The Almighty ]
Community Member





Thu Jun 30, 2005 @ 04:35am


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-Speechless.-
Whit, I don't care what you say, but I love this poem. It's got a very strong flow to it, and such a powerful message. Wondreful wording, perfect parting, I cant find a single flaw in this poem.
I love it. <3


The Poetic Gymnast
Community Member





Thu Jun 30, 2005 @ 04:35am


and my response shall be in a poem aswell:



you are who you are,
because you let yourself be.

be sadist or gay,
it is easiest to thee.

tormented self,
is it what you want to be?

it's up to you hun,
unsnag yourself and see...


Reido Aurios
Community Member





Thu Jun 30, 2005 @ 04:45am


wow thats a nice poem you gots there i likes it alot i wish i could write poems but sadely i cant i hope to read more of them!!


KiatsuReian
Community Member





Thu Jun 30, 2005 @ 04:51am


Wow. Just. Wow. <3
You're one of the few people that can write a wonderful poem, and have it mean so much at the same time. There's a great flow, and I can't think of anything that's wrong with this poem.


Queen Christie
Community Member





Thu Jun 30, 2005 @ 04:54am


I don't know what to say.
That's a marvelous poem, and I'm sorry that you feel that way. I wish I could help. D=


User Comments: [5]
 
 
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