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The Love I Give May I show you my love? Will you accept me? Would you allow me to run my fingers delicately through your hair? I would pull you close, And kiss you gently but deeply, And whisper sweet surrender in your ear… Suffice to say that I would never force you into anything… But if you show that you are comfortable with me, Then I will put forth all my love to you… You will always know that I love you… You will know when I hold you, That you are the whole world wrapped inside my arms… I will rap you in wings of protection, And never let you slip away… And I will make you feel as if you were everything… But unfortunately… You do not exist yet… But when you come to me… I will assure everything I have said… I promise…

Posted by: Wishful Romantic Sun Jan 20, 2008 @ 08:30pm

DREAM AVI! ACCEPTING DONATIONS!!

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Commented on: Sun Jan 20, 2008 @ 09:06pm


	omg! that's totally sweet. i think this one is better than the other one. that's really awesome i like it. my fave 2 lines: and whisper sweet surrender in your ear that you are the whole world wrapped inside my arms... I LOVE THAT!! ^^ good work!

Commented on: Mon Oct 27, 2008 @ 04:36am


	You're poetry is so awesome. I wish I had your skill! I like this one because you are talking mostly to yourself and not the world, but you are talking to your special someone too. It flows very well and says everything that you need to say. A true work of art.

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Commented on: Tue Sep 15, 2009 @ 01:25am


	That was a very sweet poem. I hope you're still writing poetry 3nodding And whoever that poem is for, whether they exist now or not, and whether they know it or not, is very lucky!

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