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Just using this as a 4th place to post my poems... Feel free to comment and criticize! :)
Poem- Last First Kiss
My life couldn't get any better,
With you by my side I could take on the world,
You fill the emptiness I thought could never be filled,
As long as I got you my happiness will never leave.

Never did I imagine lips could taste so sweet,
Your eyes capture my heart and my soul,
As we embrace and our lips meet the world ceases to exist,
I didn't know someone could love me so endlessly,

Forever I'll be by your side for you to love and to hold,
I wish time would stop just so I could spend forever with you,
Those words you whisper have never sounded so perfect,
I wanna be your last first kiss...





Pheonix_Hinote
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  • [01/31/08 04:16am]

  • User Comments: [2]
    intelectual
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    Thu Mar 06, 2008 @ 03:54am


    hey nice peom.checlout some of mines i did.


    Xx-Merlin Emrys-xX
    Community Member





    Fri Sep 05, 2008 @ 09:37pm


    Wow. That's all I have to say.
    This is a great poem!
    When did you write this?


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