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My original poems

this is where i will try to put poems when i make them up feel free to comment them all you want

Dranelg
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Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 06:52pm

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	Beat Beat by Glen Beat beat Beat beat Beat beat this sound i cant defeat it wakes me in my sleep Beat beat Beat beat Beat beat sounds like a storm... but weak yet still incomplete Beat beat Beat beat Beat beat when i see you i fill with so much heat Beat beat beat beat beat beat its hard to keep my heart from going Beat beat Beat beat Beat beat I try to take a seat Beat beat beat beat beat beat you'll find me when I'm not weak Beat beat beat beat beat beat is when our eyes they finally meet yet my hear still goes Beat beat Beat beat Beat beat comment about what you think. biggrin

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CheaslyxEvilxGenius
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 06:57pm

you are really good you should put up some more

Sako Hinode
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 07:11pm

*looks above at Star's comment*
Yes you should! This one is good.

Peewee-Baseball
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 09:59pm

wow nice poetry i love the art of poetry to mostly funny poetry i dont usually rime

miranda awesome
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Sun Mar 02, 2008 @ 04:19pm

you changed it. how come you changed it? i liked it the way it was, when yous gave it to me.

Dranelg
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Sun Mar 02, 2008 @ 11:27pm

its called poetic license =P

Limei Pwns Joo
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Thu Mar 06, 2008 @ 08:26am

Nice. ninja

miranda awesome
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Thu Mar 27, 2008 @ 08:09pm

theres an error in the 25th line.

miranda awesome
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Tue Jun 24, 2008 @ 02:15am

helloo.

Adrizilla
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Mon Mar 23, 2015 @ 09:01pm

Hot 3nodding

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