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this is my story i will make about gaia also i may tell about my story that is started 2001 bits and pieces always i will remember my friends always ill remember peopel that donated to me:) Well thats the old description XD It contains fun stuff
6b: follow up last part
Merel pops up next to Jamaica, leaving Jeremy behind in the ship shocked and scared that Merel will get hurt,
Merel puts up a shield of fire immediately she is dematerializing the table where Jamaica is lying on…

Jamaica says: ‘’ aren’t you to weak to use powers right now?’’
‘’I don’t have enough energy but I’m dematerializing the table’’ she responds…

After about two seconds Merel dematerializes a big chunk and transports back to the ship next to Jeremy, She is standing for about five seconds but then she looses it and falls on the ground…

Jeremy shocked and the only one left in the ship except for Han checks Merels heartbeat, Both are still alive but Merel is struggling to breave, Han heard what happened and comes out of the shaft as fast as he can, instantly going to Jamaica and he holds her hand.

Message transmitted:
Han: ‘’Richard comes to the ship now Merel got Jamaica back.’’

Jeremy takes a little titanium block and dematerializes it transmitting the energy to Merel…

Merel suddenly wakes up, tries to sit up but already haze problems sitting and using her hands to stay up, She manages to sit next to Jamaica, at that moment Richard comes running back to the ship and walks inside when he sees Jamaica he sits next to her carefully he strokes over her head so her pony falls aside, Han and he hold their hand above her, They heal her wounds…

Jamaica says:’’ Thanks…’’
Han says:’’ I’m so sorry Jamaica I didn’t know that’’
Jamaica responds: ‘’ its okay next time just don’t think about me, just warn Merel…’’
‘’It seemed to me logical at that point’’ He answers…
Jamaica says:’’ Don’t bring Merel in danger just because you want to safe me next time…’’ She strokes her hand over his cheek, he holds it and almost cries…
Richard says:’’ Don’t scare me like that again girl… one day I’ll get a heart attack if my daughter keeps getting in serious trouble…’’
Jamaica laughs a bit and says:’ its okay can I talk to Merel for a moment?’’
Merel says:’’ Alone.’’
Han responds: ‘’ Lol I’ll go repair something, ‘’ he enters the shaft again and disappears,
Richard says:’’ Okay, I still needed to look at the outside of the ship.’’ He mumbles I think after it and goes out of the ship…
Jeremy winks at Merel and goes out of the ship and starts to talk with Richard…

Jamaica sits up, she says: ‘’ Thank you Merel, couldn’t hold on much longer…’’
Merel responds:’’ you know that’s how I am.’’
Jamaica says:’’ How did my dad respond when he found out…’’
‘’I almost thought he died spontaneously’’ she laughs a bit when saying it.
Jamaica says:’’ okay lol, but seriously he was really shocked ay?’’
Merel is playing a bit with a twig she found,
She answers: ‘’ Yeah, He kinda, well, He probably couldn’t take it anymore, because he walked out of the ship avoiding Jeremy who tried to help him…’’
Jamaica says:’’ The last few days he’s just been a bit overprotective I think…’’
‘’Well, you…’’
Han shouts:’’ AAAH, umm any help here ladies? Some tube fell on me, I’m stuck…’’
Merel and Jamaica enter the shaft, when they are at Han they turn on their back and try to push it up, for about 5 seconds they can hold it up but then Merel fails and it lands on her throat…
Merel gasps: ‘’ I can’t breave…’’
Richard haze walked back into the ship and notices that they are all gone…
Richard calls their names…
Merel managed go get the tube of her throat but it still lies on Han…
Merel shouts:’’ RICHARD OVER HERE!!! HELP PLEASE!!!

Richard enters the shaft when he is at them he crawls next to Jamaica on his back and pushes up the tube…

Richard says: ‘’ Pull Han away!’’

Merel and Jamaica crawl away pulling Han with them, just when Richard could get away the tube slips out of his hand after a short ‘’ AAAH’’ It’s quiet in the tube…

Merel says:’’ That didn’t sound right get Han out, I’m checking your dad.’’
Jamaica nods…
Merel calls Richards name but he doesn’t respond, She crawls back and finds him under the tube he haze a wound in the back of his head…

Merel shouts:’’ Jamaica I need some help here!!!’’

She tries to push the tube up …

Jamaica shouts back:’’ COMMING!!!... Han get Jeremy okay?’’

Jamaica comes into the tube, she helps pushing up but they can’t get it higher than an inch…
Jamaica says: ‘’Just hold on…Han will get Jeremy…’’

Han now stands up and half running half falling he runs out of the ship almost passing Jeremy, he pants and says:’’ Richard…I…is stuck…help…’’
Jeremy pulls Han with him back to the ship they crawl into the shaft and push up the tube…
Jeremy says:’’ Merel, Jamaica you pull out Richa…’’
‘’No, I’m helping you Jeremy.’’ Merel responds without letting Jeremy finish.
Jamaica and Han don’t even wait for Jeremy’s respond and pull Richard out, Then Jeremy tells Merel to crawl away, and He dumps the tube on the floor of the shaft and crawls after them…

Merel holds Richards hand and tilts his head up a bit with out touching the wound,
Han is panting because he haze breaving problems,
Merel heals Richards wound, and tries to wake him up…


To be continued(again)






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lahdolphin
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commentCommented on: Mon Feb 18, 2008 @ 04:53pm
See I did not read the first parts but from what I got it was good...did you write it? Well of course but I mean like oh you know what I mean,


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 18, 2008 @ 04:55pm
HOLY CRAP thats amazing



batmna1
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