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Chance Encounter A poem by Zoe Curzi Fly away, to the peak Of a world where they speak Of sugar clouds resting On marshmallow heaps Journey far, to a land With purple-blue sand Where king mountains tower And all things are grand Find a way to a place Where everything’s space And everyone stares At the queen in her grace With daisies forever And fairies so clever With cool, sparkling dust They achieve their endeavor Find a heart, in a time When hearts are divine And those that are beating Are forever entwined Sleep on cool, lively grass As warm night does pass Where are my troubles? Is what you will ask Sing songs under cover Of deep, soulful weather And under the bridge You will see a bright feather Of all the times that might have been And the battles you are yet to win The beauty’s in a single choice To hoist the sail and risk the wind.

Posted by: the silver fire Tue Feb 19, 2008 @ 05:09am

I'm a girl, in real life, my avi is just.....confused. sweatdrop

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Commented on: Tue Feb 19, 2008 @ 11:59pm


	I'm sorry, but that is so beautiful. All of it. So lyrical. The imagery amazing. GAH!! SPAZZ!!

Commented on: Wed Feb 20, 2008 @ 01:59am


	That is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. It is lovely, brilliant, magical in every way. I can see this world, and I would give anything to be there. Someday I'll say that this poem was written by a friend of mine, and people will be like "Really?" Also, Claire love, a sincere compliment is not a thing to apologize for. mrgreen

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Commented on: Wed Feb 20, 2008 @ 03:15am


	Oh, God, Zoe...the imagery is amazing...this poem is truly enchanting and it just makes me feel inspired, and happy, and at peace inside.... I TOTALLY agree with Zeta. I'm gonna be that crazy woman on top of the top seller book stand waving your poem booking in the air screaming, "I KNOW THIS WOMAN!!! SHE'S ONE OF MY BEST FRIEND!!!" I just want to let you know that that last..stanza, is it, is really inspiring and beautiful, and I'm going to copy it onto another piece of paper, (credit it to you, of course), and stick it in my room, my books, my door, EVERYWHERE because, honestly, that last four lines makes me feel so inspired to grab your hand, and (emma, claire, zeta) and keep marching forward through this high school adventure.... freezes looking dramatically into the distance Do you SEE what you do to me, Zoe? biggrin

Commented on: Thu Feb 21, 2008 @ 02:10am


	Oh my goodness! Thank you guys, all of you....I love imagery. Lately, I've been writing a lot of poems about fantasy worlds and things. And you know what, we're all going to be so damn talented that we're just going to end up having days where we all stand in the street doing our talents, and in between performances/writing/whatever else we'll just point at everyone else and scream about how we know them and its amazing. xd

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Commented on: Thu Feb 21, 2008 @ 03:27am


	You should have submitted this to the literary magazine... if it was still going on. xD It's awesome! The rhyming... the imagery... and the last part really is inspiring. And I will so know famous people one day because all of you have the big chance of becoming famous. Totally.

Commented on: Fri Feb 22, 2008 @ 04:03am


	No, I don't have a big chance at becoming famous.

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Commented on: Fri Feb 22, 2008 @ 10:14pm


	Claire, you're an idiot. Of COURSE you do! You have so many talents! You don't have to be famous, but I definitely think you'll be successful, because talented people generally are at some point. If I could pick your top chances I'd say music and writing (prose or poetry, but especially poetry because yours is amazing). You could potentially be a good actress, but that'd be more likely if you took a class and liked it and got into it. Claire, you should put together a book of all your poetry and send it in to get published. I'm sure you have enough.

Commented on: Sat Feb 23, 2008 @ 02:13am


	Totally, Claire. Don't be a butt to yourself. We all say so. And our word goes. domokun

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