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Gardian_Angel_93
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Another poem/story plz read and comment
Shadow-Little doll,who carries the name of the most beautiful flower...
Could you please bring me something from your parents tower?


Girl-Of course,Dear Shadow.what is it you want so humbly ask to Endow?

Shadow-Walk back to your castle,dear child,and make it your family's tomb...
For all I really yern for lies within your mothers womb.

Shadow-I once heard of a man who will become like no other...
Could you please bring me your unborn brother?

Shadow-*The shadow bowed ingratitude,completing her task*
Would you like anything in return might I ask?


Girl-Please,I hope you won't find me wrong...I want to play,laugh, and dance,all night long.But no matter what I want,I would find a friend the most relevant.

Shadow-Im sorry,dear little flower.Friends I cannot give.It is sadly beyond my power.

Girl-Then I would like my brother back.For this little deal of ours,just turned sour.
What good are you if you make me weep?
Please have my brother returned by the gates of my keep.


Shadow-Neither your brother I can give.What you gave is given.I merely strive for a way to make even.Seeing my offer is merely out of kindness...
The child will never know the embraceof your fortress.


Girl-Then I wish for a way to have you undone Kind Shadow.I want you mauled and buried by the darkness and most blighted meadow.

Shadow-Far enough,little flower.Without feelings of either vain or rue.
I will grant you one wish 'come true.


Shadow-Without honour,without grace you willtravel to the darkest place.Untouched by the vilest of gloom,your skin will run paler then our moon.

Shadow-Travel the road of which I pointed,and be forever gone.
For sure one day you will have me undone.


Girl-Thank you kindly.
Shadow of whom I don't know.


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IceyKitten44
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comment Commented on: Sat Mar 29, 2008 @ 01:57pm
its was awesome but it didn't make much sense srry sweatdrop


comment Commented on: Sat Apr 19, 2008 @ 03:19pm
its was good



XXS1MPLY_M3XX
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ArchangelTsuya
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comment Commented on: Thu Jul 03, 2008 @ 01:57pm
I love it, the poem is well worded and i like the dark and conversational style ^w^


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