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Promise me tomorrow will be a better day Lost Tomorrow is a new day So they say Life seems to be on a constant loop Nothing ever changes there is no new scoop You can't promise me that tomorrow is going to be better You have not met her For some... Tomorrow will never come Where they tricked, like I The promise of tomorrow in their mind's eye While we lay sleeping The future is ever creeping Ready to snatch everything away Or begin a more horrible day I never want to hear you say Tomorrow will be better than yesterday Hope The sun rises a new day has begun You realize, put down the gun Today holds the promise of hope Climb back down and cut the rope For yesterday you fell screaming Last night you lay dreaming Hope for a new beginning Again the world is spinning You have the promise of tomorrow in your heart Time to get up and honestly start The life you would have thrown away The gentle person that made you stay Kind, honest, heartfelt words can save Even if tomorrow is like a wave Don't let your hope slip away For it is the promise of a new day

Posted by: Dark Moon Princess Tue Apr 01, 2008 @ 03:10am

"I've crossed oceans of time for you."[/align:8099456112]

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Kricka
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Commented on: Wed Apr 02, 2008 @ 12:39am


	You had me worried with the first one gonk Who's the "her" you referrence? The rhyming seemed a bit...not cheesy but off on the first one. The second was fantastic though, especially as a follow-up to the first. Any inspiration for these, or just something that happened to come outta your pen/pencil/fingers if you're typing?

Commented on: Tue Apr 08, 2008 @ 07:02am


	I am talking to a guy about myself in the poem, but it is my concience that is talking it is kind weird. Like I am only evil on the inside. So the her is me, and I try to save people while on the inside I am just as ...,what is the word, disturbed as them ready to pull the trigger. I think it is the 3rd and 4th lines that make in sound that way, I'll revide them later. I have been thinking about suicide more and more. Also death and the darkness within my heart and mind. I try to stay happy with a smile all the time but really somedays I just feel like giving up, but I know that is a cowards way out. It is just that I feel I am evil on the inside and trying to hide it by being kind. I want to transend the mask and truely be a kind person but dark thoughts always slip into my mind.

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